MG FF DEMON'S ANGEL Last Pt&Epilogue28/1/2013 P-98 - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
awesome update:)


god maan is disgusting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
part 5
OMG Maan is such a devil...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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*DEMON'S ANGEL*

PART - 6


MAAN was in one of those hunters who cant sit until he found his prey. And the day he hear about the beauty of Geetakshi,he gone insane to see her. He entered in the bounderies of Satra jungle. His all men followed him. He madly run his horse in jungle evrywhere. His horse's foot sound disturbs the silence of whole jungle. But somwhere a girl who had long black hairs, big hazeld eyes and white milky skin was taking bath in a lake surrounded with greenry and flowers all around. She was so much busy in playing with a water and unaware of evrything. Her skin is very soft and deligated as if any one can touch her leave his mark on her skin a red mark. She was so deligate,like a flower made by heaven. Her dimpled cheeks shows when she smiles whch increased her anglic charm. No one can tuk off his eyes from her. She is playing with water,patted her hands and bare legs in water and made splashes evrywhere. The sound of water mixed with her laugh seems like som one singing a sweet melody. Maan came there finally and with that sound he stood there to watch who is in the water. He jumped from his horse and went near lake. He hide behind some tree bushes and peeped secreatly. Suddnly his breth tuk away when she saw a girl occured inside from the water. She threw her hairs on her white silky back with a jerk. He saw her angelic face on which water droplets roaming from her temple to her chin and dropped again in water,like these drops just want to made kiss and went to their orign bak. Maan saw her playing. His whole body burns with some unusual desires his erotic thots made increased his intoxination. His manhood protruded against his lower. He lost his sences in his lustful desires. Lust swarmed in his blood,demanding he take full posession of het in his bed. He took in the erotic vision of her obscenely full breasts overflowing the neckline of her white cloth in whch she just wrapped herself. He couldnt luk away from the fabric outlining her full buttocks and hips. He couldnt stop his gaze from devouring her curveous body. He wanted her rite now. Her full pink lips suddnly curved into a smile as her hazled eyes twinkled. She washed her arms,massged both one by one with other hand. Maan head towrds her as she came out of lake. She was unaware of d danger around her. But b4 he reached 2 hr he hear anothr sound of a girl.

PRATYUSHA:Geetakshi... Geetakshi kaha hai tu?

The ran to her and a sweet melodious voice melts in his ears.

Geetakshi:kya hua?tu inta parehan kyu hai?

MAAN:to yahi hai Geetakshi.ab tk jitna suna tha km tha.ise to hum paa k hi rahenge.

PRATYUSHA:jaldi chal kaka naraj ho rahe hai,teri wajh se 1 dinn main b marungi.

Both start running but their steps rooted suddnly wen both saw somone standing in their route nd obstuct their way. Both luk at ech other in confuson. Maan scanned her each nd evry curve frm tip to toe.Her wet skin gave him open invitation to him he wants to suck each nd evry drop on her. Geetakshi dont like d way he gazed hr.

GEETAKSHI:kon ho tm?or is trah hamara marg(rasta) kyu rok rkha hai?

MAAN'S eyelids bcm heavy:bata denge itni b kya jaldi hai.

Pratyusha encircled her arm.


GEETAKSHI:apki inn bekar bato k lie samay nai hai humare pas.hatiye hume der ho rahi hai.

Maan moved towrds her,she scared but nt show her fear,and stand on hr place. But bF Maan touched her an arrow came between dem wid a very high speed. All looked in d direction from where arrow had cm. Darun,father and head of Sankara tribal was standing wid his force. His eyes was filled wid extreame anger. Darun came and both girl ran and hide behind him. Maan's men was also cm dere.

DARUN:yuvraj is shan(time) Satra ki zameen chhodkar apni rajdhani laut jao.anyatha tumhare liye achha nai hoga.

Maan glared him too:koi aaj tak aisa is dharti pe paida nai hua jo hume aadesh(order) de sake.

DARUN:to firr udh hoga.lekin tume bta du yaha khade mere har aadmi k paas jo b hathiyar(weapon) hai wo sab k sab wish me sane hue hai. Chaho to namoona dekh lo.

He signled and his man kills one of Maan's man instantly by his posinous weapon. His seacurtiy chief alarmed instantly.

S.CHIEF:yuvraj chaliye yaha se.

MAAN'S arms fluffered:bilkul nai agr yudh chahte hai to yudh hoga.

S.CHIEF:nai srkar samjhne ka pryas keejiye inke sare hathiyar vishele hai hum abi inka mukabala nai kr skte.chaliye baat ko samjhiye.


Maan nd Darun both glared each othr. Maan dont to leave without her. His madness dont allowed him 2 leave hr untouched. But his all men dragged him forcefully out of d jungle. Darun tuk both d girls safely wid him.

MAAN:tumari himmat kaise hui hume waha se kheench k lane ki?

S.CHIEF:yuvarj halat ki nzakt ko samjhiye.apko wo ldki mill jayegi lekin is samay yadi hm yudh krte to bewajh maut ko bulna hota.aap thda sa sabar rakhiye.

MAAN:wai to hum nai kr skte. Geetakshi hume chahiye kisi b keemat pe.

He punched his fist angrily in a tree...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
phewww...richu took xactly 1 hour 2 finish all part...hv 2 say superb work...tu agar shudh hindi ka english bracket main nahi deti fer to meri...maan z super shaitan...story z awsum...concept z unique...warning wala part was epic..👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 lvd it😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉me dead🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢...damn xm...xciting 4 nxt part but don noe whn i'll b able 2 read 😭😭😭😭😭😭 n bst of luck jaan...keep it up😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
woo awesome part...
finally maan meet hr n is already crazi for hr...
thank god hr father came on right tym..
Maan u wont get hr so easily fr r lust... Yes she belongs to ubt until u r in ur devil roop u wont get hr...
Excited to no ki aage kya hoga..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
wow finally maaneet first meeting
n it was imteresting
maan ko geet ke bina niklna pada
amazing update
mei wari jawan
mei wari jawan richu tumhari writing pe
mwahhh...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
it maan didn't get geet



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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
maan apne geet ko dhund raha hai...usko abhas ho gaye k uske doosre bhag...uske atma ka janam ho chuki hai...sirf milne ki deri hai...

awesome n beautiful update...


loved it to d core...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

eagerly waiting...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
aapka ye maan toh ataydhik hi shitaan hai.. parantu humaari geet hai hi asi 😉

antatahh geet hogi toh maan ki hi ..ek aatma jo hai dono.. parantu hum uss kanyaa ke shraap se atyadhik hi bhaybhit hai ... dekhte hai bhawishya me kya hota hai
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
At last...maan aur geet mil hi gaye...was waiting for that...maan is very very disgusting yaar...use apne lust ke age kuch dikhtha nahin hain yaar...waiting for next update...😍

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