MG FF DEMON'S ANGEL Last Pt&Epilogue28/1/2013 P-98 - Page 22

wow amazing
superb n fabulous update richu

wow lovely lovely update.. atlast geet's tears saved my maan and made him pure soul.. now my maan and geet together.. i love te update so much dear

nice part...continue soon dear...😊

oo wowww.. beautiful parts ..i missed both 16 & 17 .. read at once..
finally maaneet became one.. it was amazing.. loved how geet tears brought back maan life..it was truly amazing and proof of their true love..

now toh at last give some maaneet moments :P

*DEMON'S ANGEL*
PART - 18

MAAN cm out wid both. It was mid nite so all decided 2 stay at sm safe place in night nd move on in d mrng. Maan put Geetakshi on hs horse nd Aditya ride on hs. Geetakshi's bak glued 2 hs rock hard chest. Maan slipped bak trying 2 made distance frm hr coz dis proxcimity trnd hm vulunerable. Maan's arm touchd hs silky arms as she sits envelopd inside hs frame. Geet felt chill ran through hr spine. She shivers badly nd 4 dis cold wind oozing nt playing ny role. Maan's presence is enough 2 trembled hr. Maan ran is horse bt in cntrlld speed. Hr arouma filled hs nostrils nd snd hm2 intoxcination. He chuckld on hs condi.how strongly she affects hm. It dsnt meant only he felt all dose changes. Geet's condi,is nt much bettr den hm. Hr heart throbbed desperately. Wenevr hs arm touchd hr,heartbeat raised nd throat bcm dry. She nvr felt like dis in hr whole life. Soon dey found a den 2 spnd nite safly. Maan jump nd help Geet also by puttng hs hand on hr waist nd made hr land on ground. All leave deir horses nd wnt inside. Geetakshi felt shivring now bcoz of cold nd lack of hs warmth around hr. Maaan sw hr nd got hr silent appeal.

MAAN:bhuk lagi hogi tume?main khane ka prabandh(arrangement) kr k aata hu.

Geetakshi felt strange fear inside as she just sw hm dying nd thot of sending hm outside in such a dangerous jungle in mid nite is nt vry much gud idea. Maan is moving.

GEETAKSHI:nai yuvraj ruk jaiye.(Maan stops isntantly)main theek hu mujhe kuchh nai chahiye.

MAAN:pr tumne kb se kuchh nai khaya hai.

GEETAKSHI:nai sach me koi zarurt nai hai bahar jane ki.main thek hu.

Aditya smirked seeing hr possesiveness 4 hm.

ADITYA:Maan Geetakshi thek keh rai hai andhera bahut hai bahar jana khtrnak ho skta hai.tm chinta mat karo.tm iske paas ruko main khane ka prabandh krta hu.

MAAN:to khtra tumhare liye b hai.

ADITYA:tm bhul rae ho Maan main kisi b pashu pakhsi ka roop le skta hu.janwaro se mujhe koi khtra nahi hai.

GEETAKSHI:suniye aap meri wajhse koi kasht mat uthayiye.main thek hu.

ADITYA:Geetakshi tm mujhe nai janti isliye ghbrana band karo.main yu gaya or yu aaya.

Aditya leave dem alone in search of sm food. Both wnts 2 talk 2 each other bt found uneasy. Maan tried 2 talk 2 hr frst.

MAAN:Geetakshi wo main...wo main tumse mafi mangna chahta hu.mera matlab hai maine tumhare sath jo durvyvhar(ill treat)kia,tume balpurvak(forcefully)apne sath le aaya in sbke k liye main tumse shama maanga chahta hu(while saying hs eyelids lowrd nd pain occurd in hs low voice).jnta hu itna asan nai hai firr b ho ske to mujhe maaf kr do. Waise to maine na jane kitne paap kie hai.pata nai wo sab kaise sudharunga.meri apni praja jiski mujhe raksh krni chahiye thi aaj ujhse na keval darti hai balki mujhse grahana b karti hai.kab itna neeche girr gaya pata hi nai chala.lekin sb theek kaise hoga pata nai.

Geetakshi cm nd sits besides hm. She put hr soft palm on hs sholder.

GEET:yuvraj jb koi b insan sach me apne kiye pr pachhtata hai to use apni galtio ko sudharne ka marg mill hi jata hai.mujhe pura vishwas hai aap apni praja ka mann firr se jeet lenge or unki aashao pr khare b uterenge.

Maan gazed hr face nd sw confidence on hm in hr voice:tume aisa lgta hai?

GEET:ha kyunki jaise maine apko shama kr diya hai apki praja b apko kr degi.(He sw hr wid que filled eyes)ha yuvraj maine apko usi shan shama kr dia tha jb apne mujhe vachn dia tha ki aap mujhe mere baba k paas leke jayenge.

Maan shokd:lein us shan to tum behosh thi na.

GEET:ha lekin main apko sunn pati thi.apko mehsus kr pati thi apne aas paas.

MAAN:Geetakshi 1 baat puchhu?(she nodded yes)jb mujhe mahaguru ka teer laga or main murchit ho gay tha,tb tm roi kyu thi?

GEETAKSHI trmbled,as he caught hr red handed:nai aisa to kuchh nai hai.

MAAN:geetakshi jhoot mat bolo,kyunki hosh me aate hi maine dekha tha,tume mere seene pr sar rakhkr rote hue.

GEETAKSHI tryng 2 avoid hm:wo to main darr gai thi.

MAAN:kis baat se?

GEETAKSHI:wo mahaguru ko ne apko mara isliye main darr gai.

MAAN:iska arth ye hua ki agar mujhe kuchh ho to tue bura lagega? Bolo Geetakshi?

GEETAKSHI:aap kya bate lekar baith gaye.main abi aati hu.

She stands nd trying 2 move bt Maan quickly made a move nd hold hr wrist. He pulld hr 2 hm,clamping hr wrist in hs arm nd tagged hr 2 hm. He steadily gazed in hr eyes. Dis closeness made hr mor uncomfortable. She melts in hs velvoty caress.

MAAN:Geetakshi main srf tumhare mann ki baat janna chahta hu.tumpe koi zabardasti nai kr raha hu.isliye mujhe galat mat samjho sirf sach sunna chahta hu.tum to mujhse nafrat karti ho na firr mere jeene or marne se tumhe kyu itna fark padta hai. Maine tumhare sath kitna bura kia.uske baad agar mujhe marr b jata to kya fark padta? Bolo Geetakshi kyu tumhe mere jeene ya marne se farak padta hai kyu Geetakshi kyu?



CONTINUE PART IN NEXT POST... :)

...CONTINUE...

GEETAKSHI was still silent nd felt shy.cant able 2 ans hs sudden que.

MAAN:Geetakshi thek hai sirf itna batao agar main marr jau to...

His words pierced hr soft heart. She put hr soft palm on hs mouth nd made hm stop saying bad words. She cnt able 2hear dis.

GEETAKSHI shook hr head:aisi ashubh baat dobara mat nikaleyega muh se. Apko kuchh nai hoga.

Maan gently removed hr hand:Geetakshi main tumhari aankhe padd skta hu.tumhari dhadkno ko mehsus kr skta hu lekin firr b tumhare muh se sunna chaht hu.

GEETAKSHI lower hr eyes nd blushed.hr cheek trn cripmson red nd hr voice fluffred:aap jo soch rae hai..wo..wo...

Her voice caught in hr throat. She felt as hr whle mouth ws dry frm ages.

MAAN:wo wo kya Geet,main kya soch raha hu?

He teased hr more. She trying 2 move bt he deligate body cant match up wid hs strength.

GEETAKSHI:aap aise tang mat keejiye chhodiye mujhe.

MAAN:pehle wo bolo jo bolna chahti ho.

GEETAKSHI:nai mujhe kuchh nai kehna hai.

MAAN:theek hai ab main puchhunga b nahi.

He leave hr nd she felt strange as he leave hr at suddn. Both again trnd silent. Maan trned hs bak 2 hr. She felt bad,coz she know he hurts. She moved 2 hm nd trying 2 monifying hm.

GEETAKSHI:aap aise kyu kr rae ho?(he trned again nd Geetakshi movd wid hm)ye galat baat hai aap aise mat kariye.

MAAN:maine kya kia hai main to chup hu bilkul.

GEETAKSHI 2 BCM ANGRY:theek hai mat boliye main b nai bolungi. Both movd 2 anothr directions. Meanwhile Aditya cm wid food. He sensed d tension btwen dem coz both talk wid each other through hm. He bcm their telephone.

ADITYA:dekho bai main to ab chala sone tum dono ka jo b jhgda hai khud hi suljha lo.shubh ratri.

He select 1 cornr nd laid. Soon he slept.bt dere eyes r opend. Sleep is far away frm dem.

GEET babbles:haye bhagwanji ye itne akde hue kyu hai?mujhe to laga ab to sudhar gaye honge lekin gussa to ju ka tyu hai jane ka naam hi nahi leta. Kaise rahungi inke sath jindagi bhar.

Den she caught hr tounge in hr teeth as she realized wat she said actually. Maan hear hr babbling nd smirked at hs win ovr hr. He cm 2 hr.

MAAN:ab jb tumhare dil ne maan hi liye hai to mere samne b sweekar(accept)kar lo.

GEETAKSHI stands again:maine kuchh nahi mana hai samjhe aap.

she trying 2 move bt hr foot twisted at d slope as it was unbalanced ground. She was abot 2 fall bt Maan holds hr and safe hr.
Both's eyes met nd dey lost in each other.

MAAN huskily whiperd in hr ear:ab to Maan lo.kyu khud ko or mujhe dono ko tadpa rai ho?(He pulled hr nd made hr stand. Maan raise hr chin 2 met d gaze)pyar krti ho na mujhse? Ha Geetakshi bolo.

She felt shy,bt nodded yes nd instantly hugged hm nd hide hr face in hs chest. Maan smiled at hr cute antics nd hugged hr bak. He loosen d hug nd caessed hr angelic face gently.

MAAN:tumhare aane k baad zindagi ka mtlab samjh me aaya hai.in aankho ko na jaane kis ki talassh thi ab tak,lekin tumhe dekhta hu to manzil ko paane ka abhimaan hota hai. Geetakshi tumhare bina main adhura hu,isliye mujhe kabi chhodkar mat jana.nai jee paunga main tumhare begair.

GEETAKSHI overwhelemd wid hs cute confession whch made hr eyes trm wet coz of happiness. She caress hs face too nd hugged hm again:apke bina main b to adhuri hu.or Geetakshi Maan ko chhodkar kabi kahi nahi ja skti.apke bina to in saanso ka mtlab hi nahi hai.

Maan snuggled hr more. Both lost in each other embrace,bt disturbed by caough sound frm Aditya.

ADITYA:ahem ahem...agar dono ka premalaap ho gaya ho to sone ka kasht karenge.raat bahut ho chuki hai or mere vichar se tum dono ko hi aaram ki sakht aavshyakta hai. Aaiye or aakr so jaiye maine aap dono k sone ki vyvastha kar di hai.subah uthkar apna kryekram dubara shuru kar skte ho,koi pabandi nahi hai.

Both shied cutley nd loosend deir hug. Both laid on d bed made by Adi for both and slept camly...

well because she has probably starting loving ya just like you have
am sure now with her by your side you wil be able to right all the wrongs you did
man are they getting affected by each other or what
vy the way how do you write such pure hindi dear
now that is just great you being able to write how they used to speak back then
so what will be her answer i wonder

so she finally told him she does love him
sweetie once a dhust danav always a dhust danav
yek junwar itni asaani se toh badalne se rahe
he will need you to change
wow so they fianlly have accepted their love for each other
but what about when they get back will they be together or separated

suury itne time k bad comment kar rai hon mera computer kharab tha yar iski itni sari updates aj hi read ki hen

wooowww...fantastic update devrji...:):)
Geetanjali toh shram se pani pani ohying apni feelings ko confess krne mein ...n luvd AADITYA more in todayz update the way hi said ab so jaye aap log baaki ka karyakram subh strt kr skte hia...oh mannn this ADITYA is such a Cutie...:):)
LUB U DERJI FOR SUCH A WONDERFUL UPDATE...<3<3:*
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