MG FF DEMON'S ANGEL Last Pt&Epilogue28/1/2013 P-98 - Page 24

really want to kill u..

seriously wanted to kill u...
but loved the update
this is bound to happen...
awesome...

wow lovely update.. te way my maan kissing te water drops from his geet ka face was lovely, tat kiss was so lovely showing they pure love...now my maaneet is separated, oh god wat will they do with out each other.. i love te update so much dear

superbbb...loved it...pm me whenever u update...

part 19
nice part...
oh dont do that...
cont soon...

Janu tujhe marne ka mann to kr rha h. Bt i know , jb meri janu unhe milayengi, tb aur mja ayenga.
Wink.
Superb.

WOW RICHU
YE TOH HONA HEE THA
BUT SUPERB UPDATE
MAAN KE TEARS NAHI DEKHE JATE
PR MAANEET LOVE EACH OTHER
WO TOH MIL KE RAHE GE

mere pyare maan geet alag ho gaye dusht DARUN 😭

DEMON'S ANGEL

PART - 20

Geetakshi crying noisly but Darun pretend like a deaf. At 1 momnt he is able 2 hear hr silent cry but 2 day he annoyed totally. She trying to convience him bt her evry plea only gave rraise 2 hs endless angr. If his wish is fulfilled,he will Kill Maan by hmslf,nd aftr seeing hr madly fall 4 hm he gt recnted mor. As he reached in d boundries of hs tribal place he draggd hr 2 hr rum nd lockd hr inside. Geetakshi patted door conti.nd pleading 4 hr father's mercy,bt it seems it only affects in reverse on hm. He appoint many security guards around hr room nd instructs dem dat no1 open d lock widout hs permission... Maaan ws also nt seprate from dis sit. Hs father do d same wid hm. He was also locked in hs room. Digvijay snatch all powers of hm as bing Prince of d state. Now he is only a prisoner of Digvijaye 2 whom he imprisioned in hs own room. Maan nvr felt so helpless. He kno Geetakshi cant survive widout hm,nd wat conditions,she going through. Tear drop fall on hs cheek.only she can made hm cry.coz Maan is a worrior,nd tears dont suits 2 hs image.Aditya try 2 cnsole hm.

ADITYA:Maan jb pehle tume maine jungle me dekha tha tb tm mujhe baot bure lage the. Kungi jinn vasna(lustful) bhari nazro se tm Geetakshi ko dekh rae the mujhe bahut gussa aaya tha(Maan shoked knowing dis truth)ha main tum 2 pe usi dinn se nazar rakh rha tha.Mahaguru ka adesh tha.kyunki unhe pata tha jaise tum pehle the tm Geetakshi k sath kuchh b kr skte the.or agr aisa ho jata to tum dono usi shan nasht ho jate.

MAAN:to isliye tm mujhse itni nfrat kte the the,tm sb pata tha humare waha aane se pehle(he nodded yes).lekin Mahaguru ne ye sb kyu kiya.mera matlb hai unhe kyu farak padta hai hm2 se. Geetakshi sirf meri bhuk thi,ek khoobsurat jism jise main hasil krna chahta tha.pyar kya hota hai ye samjhne me bahut smaye lag gaya isliye use kho baitha.

ADITYA:Maan tum 2 ko koi alag nai kr skta.tm 2 ka janam hi 1 hone k liye hua hai.abi sirf itna jaan lo Geetakshi tumhara hi hissa hai,or ye baat Mahaguru jante the isliye wo nai chahte the ki tum uske sath koi b galat harkat karo.isliye aise himmat mat haro.

MAAN:lekin main pehle hi pitaji ko bahut kasht de chuka hu ab or nahi de skta.aise me main Geetakshi tk kaise ja skta hu.

ADITYA:main kisliye hu.bhul gaye Mahaguru ne tm2 ka dhyan rakhne ki zimmedari mujhe saupi hai.wo jante the ye sb hoga,isliye tume chinta krni ki koi avashyakta nahi hai,yuvraj apka ye das yu gaya or yu aaya.

Maan hugged hm.He realy need sm1 2 suport hm. Aditya loosn d hug nd tyrned in2 an Eagel nd flew in sky. He reaschd 2 Geetakshi's room window nd cm inside. She ws still crying nd hr only frnd Pratyusha tryig 2 feed her,bt she denied. Aditya transfrm in human again nd Pratyusha scared seeing dis nd hr shokd eyes alarmed Aditya. So he quicklu put hs palm on hr mouth b4 she shouts nd invite all here.

ADITYA:chp bilkul chup.

Geetakshi smiled weakly seeing hm nd rush 2 hm.

GEETAKSHI:aditya bhaiya aap yaha kaise aaye?or Maan kaise hai?wo kyu nai aaye?

ADITYA:geetakhi main sb samjhta hu pehle tum isse bolo ki ye vada kare ki jb main apna hath hataunga ye chiilayegi nai.

Geetaskhi joint hr hand nd pleds. Pratyusha accepted. Aditya leave hr. She tuk a relif breath.

PRATYUSHA shouts on hm:suno tum jo koi b ho agli bar aisa kia na to main tumhari wo halat karungi ki tume tumhari nani yaad aa jayegi.

She glared hm.

ADITYA:samjh gaya.algi baar aisa nai hoga.ab main kaam ki baat karu?(she sw hm suspeciously)Geetakshi Maan ka haal b tumse juda nai hai isliye usne mujhe bheja hai.wo janta hai is waqt tm pe kya beet rai hogi.lekin wo b majbur hai.Maharaj ne use nazarband jo kr dia hai.

GEETAKSHI:Aditya bhaiya apke paas to kitni shktiya hai.kuch b keejiye lekin mujhe mere Maan se milna hai.apko nai pata baba meri shadi ki baat kr rae hai wo b jitni jaldi ho ske.

She strt crying again.

ADITYA:kya?aisa kaise kr skte hai wo?bina soche vichare itna bada faisla.nai tume Maan se koi alag nai kr skta.suno mere pas 1 yojna hai main aaj Maan ko lekar kali pahari wale mandir me aaunga raat me bas kisi b tarah tm waha aa jana.firr koi na kou upaye nakalenge is samsya ka.ab main chalta hu tm daro mat.teek hai.

He caress hs palm on hr head.

PRATYUSHA:Geetakshi ko lane ki zimedari meri wo pahunch jayegi.

ADITYA:thek hai fir main chalta hu.

He transfomed again nmd flew frm dere.

GEETAKSHI in whimpring sound:lekin hm jayenge kaise baba ne to bahar surksha ka kada prabandh kia hai.

PRATYUSHA:wo sb tu mujhpe chood de.ab rona band kr or jaldi se kuchh kha le wrna yuvraj bolenge meri Rajkumari ko kuch khane ko nai diya.

She smiled weakly nd Pratyusha feed hr...