MG FF DEMON'S ANGEL Last Pt&Epilogue28/1/2013 P-98 - Page 20

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*DEMON'S ANGEL*
PART - 16

ALL light beams ran to vilaage and insert in evry child who bcm old due 2 hs magic.. As all light balls entrd evry child trnd normal. Maan nd Aditya returnd 2 village wid all d captured kids. All parents were happy nd blessd both 4 giving deir child bak normal 2 dem. Vilaage's head cm nd blessd both nd also sho grattitude 2wrds dem.

HEAD:hum ap 2 ka ye ehsan jeevan bhar nai bhulenge.or hm chahte hai ki hum b apke liye kuchh kare.

MAAN:humne jo b kiya insaniyat k liye kia.

HEAD:fir b hm apke liye kuch karna chahte hai.

MAAN:hm prandayani shakti ki khoj me nikale hai. Kya aap hume bta skte hai wo kaise milegi?

HEAD:humne uske bare me suna to hai par kaha milegi ye sirf tume pahari baba hi bata skte hai.

ADITYA:PAHARI BABA?ye kon or kaha milenge.

HEAD:pahari baba yaha kuchh hi duri pe ek pahari hai waha tapsya kar rahe hai.lekin?

MAAN:lekin kya?

HEAD:lekin wo kabi kiski bat ka jwab nai dete?unse sirf 1 hi wajh se khush kiya ja skta hai,agr tm unke liye sunhra aam le jao to?

ADITYA:sunhara aam ab ye kaha se milega?

HEAD:usi pahari ek pas ek nadi behti hai waha bahut sare jadui vraksho k ped lage hai uni me se ' ped hai sunehre aam ka. Keval wahi fal hai jo baba ko prasann(happy) kar skta hai.uske baad tum unse jo b puchhoge wo tume uska uttar(ans.) avashye denge.

MAAN:apne hume jo b bataya uske liye bahut bahut shukriya.

HEAD:lekin beta 1 baat ka dhyan rkhna keval 1 hi fal lena koi or nahi or ha waha bahut se khtre hai unse sawdhan rehna.

MAAN:khtro ki chinta hume nai hai isliye aap chinta na kare.bas ab hm niklenge kyunki samye bahut kam hai humare pas.

Maan & Aditya leave. Dey reached 2 d river where golden mango grows. But b4 dis dey saw many heads were hanging wid a tree. Both felt weird. All heads strt talking 2 dem nd trying 2 terrified dem,but both ignored deir babbling nd moved in next dey found2 small dwarf who obstruct deir way. As both trying 2 move dey split fire on both Maan & Aditya get ready 4 d quoncar,bt deir magical powers r strong enough.it seems impossible 2 win over dem.

MAAN:kya chahte ho tm2?

1st:humare prashno k uttar do yadi tune sahi uttr de diye to hum tume yaha se 1 fal le jane denge. Or agar tumne 1 b uttr galat diya to tum 2 k sir b bahar un sabi ki tarah latak jayenge.

MAAN:puchho kya puchhna hai?

1st:wo aisi konsi cheez hai jo ek bar manushye ko mill jaye tu uska sath kabi nahi chhodti? Chahe halat kaise b kyu na ho?

MAAN:vidya or gyan 1 bar milne pe jivan bhar apka sath nai chhodte.

2nd:sachha sadhk kon hai?

MAAN:jisne apne mann(heart)pe kabu pa liya wahi sachha sadhak hai.

1st:wo konsi cheex hai jiski gati(speed) ki koi seema nai hai?

MAAN:humara mann uski koi seema nai hai wo jo chata hai usi ko pane k dhun me rehta hai kabi b kahi b pahunch jata hai.

1st:hmm jaise iss samaye tumhara mann Geetakshi k paas hai.

Maan shoked.

2nd:jao 1fal le lo.

Maan gt inside nd tuk 1 golden mango. Both reached 2 pahari baba,who ws lean in his meditation. Maan placed mango in hs feets nd utter hs name 2 awake hm.

BABA:aa gaye vats hume tumhari hi pratiksha(wait)thi.(both shoked,baba open hs eyes) choko mat har 1 manushe i neeyati uske karam nirdharit(sure)karte hai or tumhare karm aaj tumhe yaha le aaye hai.

MAAN:baba jb itna jante hai to aap ye b jante honge ki main yaha kyu aaaya hu?mujhe wo..

BABA:prandayni shakti chahiye Geetakshi ko pane k liye.kinto pana hi khona hai ot khona hi pana hai.kintu wo tume abi smajh nai aayega.ab suno waha uttar purv disha me 1 chalne wala jungle hai jo har shan badalta rehta hai usi k bheetar ek jwalamukhi hai,us jwalamukhi 1 andr 1 paudha hai usi pe ye prandayani booti ugti hai wahi lani hai tumhe.

MAAN:baba apka bahut dhnywad.

BABA:dhyanyewad bad me filhal apne lakshye pe nazar rakho din bahut kam hai or kam bahut zada.iswar tumhe us bachhi ki rakhsha karne ki shkti de. Ab jao samye nasht mat karo.

Maan nd Aditya touch hs feet nd leave 8 days paased 2 reach 2 dat jungle. Maan' fear increased coz total11 days are passed nd dey hd only 2 days left in deir hand in whch dey have 2 search nd uk dat power 2 ashram. Maan nd Aditya trying 2 found dat volcano but as its a moving jungle changes evrytime so dey found very difficult in serching. Maan found a sol. He sence d temp of jungle nd dey ran in d direction where is exceptional more hottness den other part nd finally hs idea works nd he reached 2 volcano. Now its difficult time. Maan told Aditya 2 stay here nd he go inside. Aditya argued bt Maan orderd hm nd entrd in volcano. He sw it ws burning deep hollow nd on its 1side deir ws a small plant. It ws burning hot bt Maan carefully reached 2 dat plant nd bear all d hot temp. Hs skin strt burning nd whole bidy swets badly he grabbed dat flower whch is required nd cm out. Hs cndition is worst. He is going 2 faint ny time but he camyt even hav a time 2o do so...


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ADITYA suggest hm 2 relax 4 sm time but he cant nd forced hm 2 ran as fast as possible. Aditya help hm 2 sat on hs horse. Again jugle creaye prob.4 both 2com out as it moving constantly. Aditya stop hs horse nd cnvert hmslf in2 a bird. He fly high nd saw d pattern of changes done in dis jungle den he reached 2 hs horse nd ran fastly wid horse of Maan. Finally both cm ot nd moved deir horses in d direction of aashram. Dey ran non stop without evn drinking a single drop. Dey only had 2 hrs 2 reach 2 aashram as Sun drown fastly. Bt Maan's courage defeats d destiney. He reached 15 mins b4 d sun sets cmpletely. He ran nd handover d flower 2 Mahaguru. Mahaguru passed dis flower 2 styanand.

MAHAGURU:sStyanand is pushp ko b baki vastuo k sath rakh do.

MAAN in shok:ye aap kya kar rahe hai? Chaliye Geetakshi ka upchar keejiye warna wo...

MAHAGURU:Yuvraj chaliye humare sath.

Both reached in d room where Geetakshi laid like a laid body. Maan ws panting heavily. His eyes filled wid terror as time is less and he doing nothing 2 cure her.

MAAN:ap sari vastue to laye nai hai,jaldi keejiye.

MAHAGURU placed hs hand on her 4head nd its lightened suddnly. In few secs Geetakshi gt her consious. She is cmpltly well now as she nvr fell ill dis b4. She sw Maan nd both's eyes locked a few sce. Though she laid unconciuos but she able 2 hear evrythng in hr deep sleep whch Maan said 2 hr. A big smile cm on hs perfect m shaped lips nd tear drop in hs derk eyes.

MAHAGURU:Geetakshi ab theek hai.ab tum yaha se ja skte ho.

MAAN still cant gt if Guru dont need dat all things den y he waste a tim of 1 month 2 cure her. Bt he is happy 2 c hr ok once agin.

MAAN:Geetakshi chalo tume tumhare baba k paas pahuchana hai.

B4 she gt up Mahagur intrupts.

MAHAGURU:Yuvraj apne theek se shayad suna nahi humne kaha aap ja skte hai lekin Geetakshi yahi rahegi isi aashram me humeha humesha k liye.

All 3 stunned Aditya cant able 2 undrstands Mahaguru's behaviour.

MAAN:ye aap kya keh rahe hai main ise liye bina kai nahi jaunga.maine Geetakshi ko wada kiya tha ki main uske thek hote hi use uske baba k pas le jaunga.

Geetakshi scared now.

MAHAGURU:ap jaynge ya nahi?

MAAN angrily:Geetakshi k bina nai.

Mahaguru caught hm in magical chains nd orderd hs saints 2 imprisioned hm. Maan feels helpless.dey all put hm in jail. Aditya ws cnfused,cnt get whats going on. Nd Geetkshi is crying in hr room cum jail. In nite Aditya secreatly go nd freed Maan frm d jail. Maan hugged hm nd both reached 2 Geetakshi's rom. Maan broke d lock nd entrd in. C hm Geetkshi ran 2 Maan nd hugged hm suddnly out of fear, whch is unexpected 2 hm. It ws d most pleasent momnt 4 hm,bt it ws nt d rite time 2 feel dis so he broke d hugg nd orderd hr 2 escpe wid hm. Both cm out of d ashram nd reaced 2 d invisible wall frm where dey gt inside dis place. Bt b4 dey go outside dey all Coverd by Manahgur nd hs saints nd students. All having wepons in deir hands. Mahagur signaled nd hs students caught Adita frst.

MAHAGURU:Aditya tume is apradh ka dand milega.

MAAN:apko jo b dand dena hai mujhe deejiye lekin Aditya ki koi galti nahi hai.wo wahi kar raha hai jo apne use sikhya tha lekin aap khud bhul gaye hai.

MAHAGURU:aaj Yuvraj apka janmdin hai.aaj aap 25 varsh k ho gaye hai.isliye hum nahi chahte ki apko koi saza mile wo b aaj hi k dinn islie Geetakshi ko chhodiye or chale jaiye.

MAAN:ye to mumkin nai hai.apni jaan de dunga lekin Geetakshi ko liye bina nahi jaunga.

MAHAGURU:to theek hai hum ise hi nasht kr dete hai jike karan ap bagavat kr rae hai.

Mahaguru threw arrow 2wrds Geetakshi nd Maan cm between d arrow nd Hr. Arrow stabbed in hs heart nd bloods oozed frm its wound. Aditya nd Geetalkhi both shout in fear. Maan falls on earth nd died on d sopt...
As his pandit told while reading his kundli that he had a mrituyog on hs 25th birthday. Bhvishyvani come true. Maan laid dead on d earth...

Woo amazing part... Full of roller coster ride...
Finally maan succeeded in jis mission...
Bt mahaguru ka behaviour is highly confusing... Ok 1st whn he said ki geetakshi will nt go with maan i thought ki it is related to d work for which he is born...
Bt he killed him... I mean ab kya hoga??? n.maan dead...
i hope ki maan ki buraiya nasht hui ho nt maan...

wait if he is dead how can he stop the evil dude whose name i seem to have forgotten
whats gong on
was she ever in danger i wonder
there is more to this than is meeting the eye right
what are you up to dear

amazing part