MG FF DEMON'S ANGEL Last Pt&Epilogue28/1/2013 P-98 - Page 15

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Posted: 12 years ago
wow richa
love the update very much
while reading
i realy thrilled to think about events happen in the story
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nice part...
finally maan succeeded in his 1st task...
now he is showing so much care towards her...
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wow
superb
maan ne apna wachan pura kia
gr8
n now he wanted sukanya 2 take care of geetakshi
lovely update
mwahh 4 long update
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part 6
Maan is really too much...
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part 8
glad that her dad and the tribe people are here...
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part 9
poor Geet...
shes hurt...
Maan is gonna bring the lotus...
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part 12
awesome part...
cont soon dear...
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wow lovely update dear...my mana killed that demon and got te flower for his geet...now were he will get te light, but i can sense som indirect meaning was inside that...i love te update dear.
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wowww..mind blowing part
loved maaneet moment thought it was only maan moment still it was lovely.. ek forehead kissy to de deti 😛
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*DEMON'S ANGEL*
PART - 13

MAAN & ADI again went 4 deir second task at d west zone. Both seems more confident den b4. Aftr travelling 4 so long both decided 2 rest 4 a momnt. Maan ws so lost in d map. Aditya enquired.

ADITYA:Maan hum pachim ki roshni ko kaise pakdenge? Mera matlab hai koi roshni ko kaise pakad skta hai.

MAAN:wai main b soch raha hu.lekin agar mahaguru ne hume bheja hai to koi na koi baat to hogi hi.

ADITYA:mujhe lgta hai ye koi or hi cheez hai jise shayad roshni kehte honge.

MAAN:ha main b yahi soch raha hu lekin aisa kya ho skta hai?

ADITYA:ye to ab waha jakar pta chalega.waise ab is maanchitr(map) k anusar(according) hume kaha jana hai?

MAAN:iske anusar ab hume 5kos tak chalna hai firr hume registan milega.usko paar karne k baad hum is jagah pe pahunchenge(he pointed his finger on d spot) jaha hume wo roshni milegi.

ADITYA:to chalo firr chalte hai.

Both run deir horses 2 d direction. But after 5 kos dey found a beautiful place instead of deserted area.

ADITYA:rajkumar kai hum galat jagah pe to nahi aa gaye?

MAAN:nai jagah to sahi hai lekin ye kaise sambhav(possible) hai. Yaha pe to sunsan registan hona chahiye tha.lekin yaha to charo or hariyali hai.

ADITYA:chalo achha hai ab kam se kam peene ka pani to milega.

Both came down from deir horses but Maan was suspecious about d place. He was confused how it is possible. Aditya jumped in a lake nd also offerd hm 2.

MAAN(thot):mujhe ye jagah kuch theek nahi lagti kuchh to gadbad hai.maanchitr galat nai ho skta. Jo b ho ab hum yaha aa chuke hai to dekhte hai kya hota hai.

He 2 jumped in lake.both fresh n up in fresh and chilled water of lake. But soon water dragged dem inside. Both swimmed fast towrds d bank but all tries ruined and both sinked in it. Aftr few hours wen both awaked dey found demselves in dark den. Deir heads r paining.

ADITYA:Maan hum kaha hai?

MAAN:us pani k maya jaal ki duniya me.maine kaha tha na wo jagah waha nahi honi chahiye. Hume yaha fasaya gaya hai.

Both trying 2 movd bt found impossible,as deir hands nd feet was locked in chains.

ADITYA:Maan humare hath pau me ye bediya kaisi hai?

MAAN:Aditya lgta hai jisne hume us pani k dwara yaha kheencha hai usi ne ye bediya humare hath or pau me dali hai taki hum yaha se bhag na ske.

ADITYA:to ab hum kya kare?

MAAN:aditya tum kisi chhote janwar ka rup leke unme se nikalne ki koshish karo.

Aditya tried 2 convert himself but d chains are magical. He got some kind of current whenevr he tries 2 use his power.

MAAN:kya baat hai Aditya tm rup badal kyu nahi pa rahe ho?

ADITYA:pata nahi.mujhe lagta hai ye zanjeere jadui hai jiski wajhase meri shaktikiya kaam nahi kar rahi hai.

Suddnly chains strat dragging dem into another direction. Dey went 2 a room where a bald wizard sit near havan kund and put sm aahutiyan in it. He was sat in opposite of some weired luking statue nd mummered som words conti. His name is haka.

HAKA:to tum dono aa gaye? Mujhe apni is sadhna ko pura karne k liye ab sirf 2 hi manushyo ki zarurat thi jo tum dono k aane se puri ho gai.ab tumhari bali dekar main or shaktishali bann jaunga.

ADITYA:1 bar humare hath- pair khol fir tujhe batate hai.

HAKA:chup.

He dragged both and put Aditya's head on rock sill to cut it wid a sharp knief. Maan ws scared bt nt lost hs concious. He immediately tuk d sword laid around hm,nd cut hs chains. Now he is free nd get up b4 Haka cuts Aditya's head. He kicks him nd cuts Aditya's chains. Aditya 2 get up,but Haka ws also vry powerful. He used hs magical powers on dem to catch dem again. Maan signaled Aditya,nd he hide himself. Maan jumps here nd dere 2 protect himself from his magical powers. Haka gt angry more. Finally Maan kicked hm bak nd throw hm on ground. Aditya quickly grabbed his magical stick nd Maan cuts his head. He died on d spot and d illusion he created wid hs power,vanished instantly. All greenry gone nd a large desert occured in front of dere eyes.

MAAN:dekha Aditya ab hm sahi jagah aa gaye hai. Bas ab hume bina ruke aage badna hai.

ADITYA:nai Yuvraj raat ho gai hai is samay me aage badna ghatak sabit ho skta hai isliye aaj ki raat yahi guzarte hai or subah hote hi ham aage bad jayege.

Maan agree and both laid on cold sand. Aditya soon went 2 sleep bt Maan cant able. His empty eyes luking at d stars above. His evry nerve missed Geetakshi badly. He wants 2 talk her,eants 2 listen hr voice nd d magical sound of her laughing whch is free from any fear.

MAAN:Geetakshi ghbrana mat chahe mujhe ye zameen or aasman b ek kyu na karne pade main wo b tumhare liye kar dunga.lekin tume kuchh nai hone dunga...

Whole night he only saw her face in his imagination...

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