MG FF DEMON'S ANGEL Last Pt&Epilogue28/1/2013 P-98 - Page 17

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Posted: 12 years ago
omg ye part 14 tak aa gaya...

me going to read again...

willl comment later
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Posted: 12 years ago
...Continue Part...

Both steps forward in searching d source of dir brightned light. Maan getting more suspecious as d whole Castel ws empty. No security chekc nd guards r available.

MAAN:Aditya dhyan se yaha abi tak koi samne nahi aaya iska matlab yaha koi chhupa hua khtra ho skta hai.

Aditya nodded nd carefully luks here and dere. Both reached at d bottom of d castel. Suddnly a wall of glass appered nd seprated dem. Both hit d wall sevral times bt it was unbreakable. Both get alerted coz now dey know dey must face some unseen danger. And as per dey asumed, Aditya was surrounde by sevral men who hiding deir face in long rob. All having a sword in deir hands. Bt Aditya ws 2 ready 2 face dem all. he tuk out hs sword nd start fighting dem all. Maan sw dis bt unable 2 help hm coz d wall between dem ws unbreakable. He turned around nd trying 2 find d way 2 com out frm dis. Wen he steps forwrd he trapped in one room. Instantly all sides of moving ws coverd by glass shield. Nd he saw a huge diamond was placed on a small piller in d middle of dis room. Dis was called d light of west. Due 2 dis diamond sparkling ranges whole castel nd sea glowing. Maan never saw such a huge Diamond in hs whole life. Bt as he touched it,some lightining was appered nd from each glass door 1 soldier is appered. Dey all also in a long robe nd dey also hide deir face like d soldiers wid whom Aditya is fighting conti. Maan also get ready wid hs sword. He made a posture and tightened hs grip over hs sword. He ws amused actully coz all soldiers come closer nd all was absorbed by 1 of dem,nd now dey bcam 1 soldier. But Maan nt scared he still ready 4 a fight. D soldier threw hs hood backside nd show his ugly hupy nd scary face 2 Maan. He groaned loud nd show hs large sharped teeth 2 scared gm bt fail 2 affectd hm. Maan kicked hm. Bt he quicky stand back on hs feet. He was very quick nd dangerous. He hit Maan's head badly wid hs large head. Maan falls on floor. Den he cm 2 hm beat him conti. He was so fast dat Maan cant find d chance 2 hit hm bak. Guard tuk him up wid hs legs and start spinning him in around hm. Maan heads hit wid many thngs and he injured badly. Den guard threw hm again. Although he ws badly injured bt he doent loose hs hope. He collect hs courage nd power nd quickly made a move b4 he again start hm beating. Maan hold hs sword again nd stabbed in guard's stomach,bt hs eyes widened wid shock wen he found it doesnt affects on guard. He made his sword move on hs body bt sword com out as it was only moving in air. No cut mark no bleeding 2 d guard wid hs movs. He cant able 2 hit hm nd d guard laugh on hsuseless tries. Maan tired bt cant able 2 kill hm. Guard hit hm nd he fall on 1 glass door,due 2 whch hs sword hit 1 glass door nd its broked in sevral pieces. At d same time dat giant gurad scream wid pain.. Maan saw he start bleeding. He saw cut mark occured on hs face. Now he got 2 know how he can kills hm. Maan start broking all d glasse of d room. And as he thot wid evry broken glass d giant guard hurted alot. His whole dark black body covered wid hs own boold. He shouts loud but Maan conti.until he falls on floor nd died in hs long robe. As d guard died all wall vanished whch apart Aditya frm Maan. Also d soldiers wid whom Aditya fights non stop disapper suddnly. Aditya ran 2 Maan. Both were happy seeing each other alrite. Bt Maan's fhead bleeds badly. Aditya hugged hm and Maan 2 hug hm back.

ADITYA:Maan tumne kr dikhaya.akhirkar tume pachhim ki roshni mill hi gayi.

MAAN:mujhe nai hume mill gai.

But deir happiness was not long last. Bcoz of d guard's death whole catel start falling and its all part start broking into pieces. Maan tuk d Diamond nd both ran 4 deir life. Everywhere in deir way dey faced falling glass pices,but both leave deir courage nd finally cm out of d falling castel. Aditya float d craft again on sea nd both sit on it. As dey drove away whole castel blasts nd island too disappear. Both siled in a relief. Aditya tuk a piece of clothand wrapped around hs wounds. Both tuk deir horses and start deir journey towrds the ashram...




SO GUYS WHAT DO YOU THINK?????
KYA WO ASHRAM TAK SAHI SALAMAT PAHUNCH PAYENGE OR MAAN GEETAKSHI SE MILL PAYEGA YA NAHI?????? YA FIRR KOI OR MUSEEBAT UNKI RAH DEKH RAHI HAI??????? TELL ME IN YOUR VIEWS PLSSS
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part...
so this was d light... finally they got it...
nw 2 down n 2 more to go...
m sure maan will pass all d hurdles...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow lovely update dear..my maan got roshini after so much struggle..te way he cared for adi was lovely..maan and geet ka telepathy was lovely..i love te update so much dear.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow lovely part dear he got d diamond and d lights and lovely ud dear how he fought with d soldiers and giants dat was too good dear do cont soon...👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 14
awesome part...
wow such bravery...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
finally maan ko roshni mil gayi
n maan is maan he can fight vd anything 4 reach Aashram
amazing richu
superb update
waiting 4 next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
facebook friendster myspace Good Job - 3
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Posted: 12 years ago
good they got the light for geet
well geet and maan are interlinked without knowing
guess you were right he cannot harm her as she is his angel
wonder iif they do get back they have to no matter what right
after all geet needs to be okay for maneet to finish off that evil being takshak
lets see whats next
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Posted: 12 years ago
Janu
Bole to jhakkas update
Wo to mujhe nhi pata maan geetakshi tk kaise puchenga. Par tu h na btane ke liye

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