MG FF: Angel Of My Life Pt 14 pg 105 18th nov - Page 20

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
loved the precap
continue soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
great update
loved it
thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update👏
Maan-dev conversation emotional😭
Precap sound interesting
Continue soon
Eagerly waiting for next😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update...
loved it alot...
aww dev suffering fr cancer...sad bt dont want him in between maneet...
wonder who is geetansh?????
i guess geet is awake...
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Posted: 12 years ago



OMG Dev is suffering from cancer...poor him...and it is on last stage...his death is sure...if he takes treatment then he can live some more time but can't be cured totally...

Geet is coming back to her senses I think...

precap is interesting...who is Geetansh...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 5


Later he checked on geet and saw her sleeping. But when he was about to go there he felt a tight grip on his hand, he thought again the dream girl caught him. "I know if I turn back you will vanish, so pls leave my hand I have work to do" told maan. "Maan'" he heard a voice.

Maan turned back and saw geet who slightly opened her eyes. Maan is out of world seeing her out of coma. "Geet.. geet" called out maan. but due to weakness geet again closed her eyes. Without any delay maan called doctor and said about geet. "I will be coming right now Mr. Khurana" told doctor and cut the call. He didn't call Brij as he want to make sure that geet is ok. He don't to rise false hopes.

Within no time doctor came and checked geet. He came out of the smiling. "Mr. Khurana, geet is out of coma, but she is very weak and she needs complete bed rest. Keep her happy as possible she should not take any stress, its not good for her health" told doctor. Maan shook his hand with him and told "sure doctor I will take care of geet. You don't worry about that". Doctor smiled and prescribed some medicines which geet should take regularly.

Doctor left and maan is very happy to see his friend back. Brij and sam will be very happy listening this and ofcourse dev also will be happy. First maan called brij. "Hello maan I am on the way just 5 min" told brij. "Brij come fast yaar" told maan excitedly. "Maan, is everything ok?" Asked brij worriedly. "Ha baba everything is fine, u just come fast" told maan and cut the call. He entered into geet's room who is sleeping but moving a little. She is trying to get up. Maan sat near her and caressed her hair. "Open your eyes geet, today I am very happy. My friend is back and don't ever be like this again we cant tolerate" told maan still caressing her hair.

Geet slightly opened her eyes, but her sight is blur she is not able to see anything clearly. She again closed her eyes and opened again, the view is now a bit clear that before and she is able to see maan. Geet smiled a little at him and opened her eyes fully. "Maan.." called geet. Maan who is thinking about something came out of his trance hearing geet. Maan smiled widely at her, kissed her forehead. "You scared us geet" told maan. "I am sorry maan" told geet in a low voice. Her face is pale and her eyes are still droppy.

Brij came to geet's room with sleeping pari in his arms. Seeing geet awake he felt so happy but at the same time guilt engulfed him because of him she is now in this condition. Brij just stood there with tears in his eyes. Geet saw him and called "Veerji, I am sorry". Hearing her sorry he ran to her and held her hand tight. "No geet, I am sorry for everything. I was angry that time and I didn't think anything and behaved rudely with u. I didn't even listen a single of urs. I am sorry gudiya, forgive your veerji" cried brij. Geet is continuously nodding in a no.

"No veerji, don't say like that. I was wrong and I became in selfish" cried geet. Maan took pari from brij and brij hugged geet soothing her with his love. Soon geet slept due to weakness and medicines. Here maan who is in the hall with pari sleeping on his chest and at the same time he is working a project. Finally the design of the school which KC is going to construct is completed and he decided to visit that village with in two days. Now geet is fine so he can concentrate on office work and most importantly he should talk with dev.

Maan didn't call sam to inform about geet as she might be busy with her new found family. What man irony on one hand sam is happy and on the other hand dev is serious. Maan don't know whether he should be happy for one friend or sad for other. There are so many things going on in maan's mind. He closed his eyes and leaned back to rest. Just then maan felt a hand on his shoulder, he opened his eyes saw brij standing with a smile playing on his lips.

In Other Country:

A well built man dressed up in a casual but costly t-shirt and jeans and some 5-6 girls are around him dancing. His face has an arrogant smirk and he held a girl by her waist who is looking at him with disgust. Their faces are just inches away and that girl is trying to get out of his grip but he is strong and held her more tight. He is going crazy with her beauty and that girl is glued to his body. All others are busy in their own world dancing, singing, drinking. That man took that girl to the corner and pinned her to the wall.

Leave me you idiot, moron shouted that girl but it didn't go to his ears and he came close to her and tried to kiss her. That girl fumed and punched him on his stomach. Ahhh shouted that man. You moron don't come near me or else warned that girl. Or else what u do? Ha?? Asked that man smirking. That girl made a baby face and looked at him. But next second she slammed her lips on his. They kissed passionately for few minutes broke apart to grab some breath.

I love you ANSH confessed that girl and hugged him. Ansh smiled at her and reciprocated the hug. I love you too janu. Janu smiled and tightened the hug. Baby I am going to India tomorrow informed ansh. Mr. Geetansh singh khurana how can you leave me? Complained janu making a baby crying face. Sorry baby I have to go, dadaji called me for something important told ansh. I will also come with you asked janu. Ansh smiled widely and asked sachi?? You will come ok then.. pack your bags. I will just come now. Where are you going? Asked janu. I will get a drink and come told ansh. No need if u go there those bimbos will surround you like bees complained janu. Ohhh seems something is burning teased ansh. Whatever told janu and dragged ansh from there.

(Geetansh and janu: virat and maanvi from Ek Hazaroon Mein Meri Behna)

Back To India: KM:

Maan placed pari carefully on the couch and stood up. Brij hugged maan and told I am very happy maan, my gudiya is back. Happy tears are flowing down. They broke the hug and settled on the couch. Hey maan did u inform sam about geet she will be very happy man told brij excitedly. Maan smiled nervously and told no yaar I didn't inform still. We will inform later. She might be busy and its late now.

No way maan she will kill us for sure told brij. Arey I told na we will inform later told maan frustatingly. But brij is too happy that he didn't sense anything. No no I will only tell her told brij and took out his mobile. Maan snactched his mobile and shouted tumne suna nahi maine kya kaha. Maan is everything ok? Asked brij as he never saw maan so much angry.

Nothing is ok brij n.o.t.h.i.n.g. today dev came to office. Hearing dev's name brij eyes became red due to anger. Why he came now? to see whether my sister is dead or alive? Shouted brij. He is only dying Brij told maan and closed his eyes in pain. Don't defend him maan warned brij. Why will I brij, he is suffering from c.a.n.c.e.r and he didn't cheat on geet its just an act so that geet will hate him and move on in her life told maan.

Brij couldn't believe that his friend is suffering with cancer. Maan is it true? Dev? Asked brij once again. Yes even I have talked with doctor just 3-5 years if he take regular treatment told maan. brij collapsed on the couch with tears formed in his eyes. Maan I want to meet dev now told brij. No brij, sam is there with dev told maan. sam?? Asked brij. Yes.. maan told what all happened in the office. Omg.. maan how can sam will tolerate this when she comes to know about dev. She will be shattered maan cried brij. Yes, but we should stand for her and you should become strength for her told maan. Brij nodded in positive and went into deep thought.

Here sam is very happy meeting her dad and he accepted her as a daughter with all love. Dev, sam and their dad had a nice family time. They both treated sam not less than a princess. She felt something special and contended.

Precap: maan going to village..

Maan meeting geetansh and his family.

Next: part 6

Edited by chinni10 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
me second
yippieee
amazing update
geet is finally out of coma
geet n brij scene was so emotional
just luved the brother sister bonding
brij came to know abt dev hving cancer
geetansh n janu part was confusing
who r they ???
but janu said geetansh singh khurana
precap is interesting
maan going to the village
n according to older precap
maan will get attacked there
update soon
waiting eagerly

Edited by maanluver - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part
geet is out of coma

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Posted: 12 years ago
Geet come out of coma... Awesome update..
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it...
awesome update...
i think maan has come connect with geetansh and his family...
geet is back... i am so happy...
story is getting interesting update by update...
loved it...
waiting for the next update...

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