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Posted: 12 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: Gcs-girl

awesome update
loved it
loved maaneet moment
Waiting for next
continue soon
tfpm




awww dear thnxxzz fr commebtng im glad u like it 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: dona86

lovely update

geet's words r beautiful
awesome update



thnxxzz fr commentng sweety pie m glad u liked it 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: dreamymishti88

so passionate

loved it dear

continue soon




😃 thnxxzz fr commentng definitely gonna update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: valli30

superb update👏
loved it.
plz continue soon.


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Neelam--

awesome...
I loved each and every word...
waiting to know the next...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: krithi12

nice part.it would be helpful if u give english updates side for hindi used.beocz i dont know hindi much


dnt wirry dear from d next update i vl gve the english trans. too 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: Angelic_analyst


dnt wirry dear from d next update i vl gve the english trans. too 😊

thanks .waiting for an update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
Updating Teaser
So Sorry for the Delay



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Posted: 12 years ago


Teaser

Maan entered into the church, clad in black, dashing handsome as usual, as just one glimps is enough to kill the girls , girls were all ready to suicide with his looks...

He went and standing when he seen geet, she was clad in white gown,

Beautiful... a word escaped from his mouth, he was mesmerized with her beauty, she was clad in white gown and her cheeks were crimson red, combination of white and red was worthwatching at that moment...

They both were facing eachother, priest asked them to hold eachothers hand, Maan hold her right hand in his right hand, geets hand shivered in his touch...

Both were looking eachother without blinking...

They heard preist was vowing , his each and every word was directlycarving on their heart...

To have and to hold;

From this day forward:

For better, for worse,

For richer, for poorer,

In sickness abd in health,

To love and to cherish,

Till death us do part...

They both were feeling butterfly in their stomach, OMG, OMG OMG they are getting married, they are going to be soon Mr. and Mrs. Khurana... Geets head was touching his neckbone she wasn't at all able to show up, she was feeling something beyond she thought she could ever feel...

Now the couple would exchange the ring as a sign of their marriage and reminder of their vows...

With my body I honour you,

All that I am give to you, and all that I have I share with you, within the love of God, father and Holy spirit...

You will now pronounced as husband and wife, you may kiss each other (Angee fuming in anger yeh Maan ko fir se Geet le kar udd gayi babaji mera No. kab aayegha 🤢 🤢 🤢 )


(pic credit to the owner:Ms. Dreamy princess 😊)

Previous: part-13

Next: part-14


So how many down with teaser, Well major twist in DBI too... Update will gonna be long one and for that I want motivation😳 hehehe You guys might know complete the quote of 10 pages and get the update 😛. me running for my life 😆heheheh oyyee hello sun toh lo before running behind me WE ARE ON PAGE NO. 19 so will meet you all at page no. 30 first post part 14😆


P.s Pm not possible due to new rules of IF for certain days sorry for inconvenience

Edited by Eza_analyst - 12 years ago

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