To Sir, With Love(3) - COMPLTD - Page 15

Originally posted by: mollycoddle

the coming week is going to keep me busy a bit , with a lot of running around to be done for various stuff...so miss me😭

Originally posted by: mollycoddle

the coming week is going to keep me busy a bit , with a lot of running around to be done for various stuff...so miss me😭

Originally posted by: mystique_girl

I didnt want to say this...and have been trying to stop myself from saying this...

Oh dont stop yourself. You can say whatever you think on the thread about my writing or the characters. I dont mind. In fact I welcome it whether it is negative or positive.

but I am one of these readers who's not quite impressed with Maan. I have nothing against you or the story and I know I dont comment very often, but I think I'll go mad if I dont say this now. Apologies that this comment is not quite positive for the protagonist.

No need to apologize. I agree with you there. He is not that impressive. Many of my readers have suspected a grey shade in him from the beginning. I have never said that he is a positive character or even a protagonist. I will present his POV in the very near future. Then you can decide for yourself. All that I want to say is I could have chosen to write a 'normal' story like countless FFs on this forum which I have read and enjoyed. But I want to bring novelty and difference. I want to dare and stretch the limits of reality while showcasing it. I hope everyone enjoys it! Dont go mad though...Vent out your thoughts... 😆

I see him as an incredibly selfish being who's using Geet in order to solve his family problems without caring two hoots about what churns she's going through.

Again I am not the judge. I just present the character.

He's employed her for office work, and yet he's ended up burdening her with all problems in his family which he hasnt personally been able to handle.What's he trying to achieve for her? She's not denied - because she cares too much for him, and isnt he using this to his advantage?

Probably and they say love is blind. I have seen it happen first hand to many people. They were asking to be used and they were. In ways which are much worse than this. I am not writing this FF to preach. Just trying to present the story. Her character is one with obsessive tendencies. What is he trying to do with her, we have to wait and see.

Further, I see that the help he offers to her in terms of work is also minimal. I mean yes, she can do it herself with a lot of thought - but that has her pressurising herself all throughout the day on what Sir wanted to mean when he said something, be it related to work - official or personal.

What would have happened if she had a family and wasnt able to devote so much time to solve his problems?According to me, Geet has got almost nothing in return for everything she's been doing for him. The promotion, occasional kisses and hugs without prelude or no words on the existent relationship - is this what we should perceive as significant returns she's receiving for all that she's doing?

I never tell readers what to perceive or even like it by force. It is up to you.

If you reply, pls send me a PM. It is difficult to try and find out if you have replied with so much conversation going on on this thread always.😊