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diiidiii i loved it soo much ❤️
wow the brown eyes and the stalker girl 😃😉
arey its wonderful 😃
plzzz update soon 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow what a wonderful update excpet for the last line...
😡😡😡😡kyon kyoj kyon
it was one of the best sweetest cutest OS i have read and then Sanjyukta...no no no...😭😭😭
next part chaiye...abhi ki abhi aur rafa dafa karo is sanjyukta ko Remya...nahi toh nahi toh...
haan...i will make Maan and Geet separate in Vivah...aur sab ko bata bhi doongi it is because of you😆...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank u Guys for the wonderful comments and likes. Thank u varsha. i m glad that u liked it. Still u dint update OS.😡 But i m updating mine. This part s especially dedicated to "ramyayuppy" for scoring high marks in engg..Congrats dear..😃

Part 2

I told the other day about a girl na.. here she is.. her name is Sanjuktha

I was blank for a moment. But at the same time realization dawn to me..i was irrevocably and insanely in love with my Brown eyes. I can't stand any other girl near him. I was about to blast my feelings when I noticed his contented smile. Like he found something precious. But that smile was not for me. Now another realization!! We want or love to be happy always.

Hi Sanjuktha

And she is…she is…erm..

Omg!he not even considers me as his friend. That thought pricked my heart. Anyways I decided to take the control from there.

Hey..i m his stalker girl who is fida over his brown eyes

Sanjuktha looked us amusingly. Then we sat over there. I chatted with her sometime. She s really sweet and beautiful. Any person will fall for her. She will fit into his dream girl category. And the way he was looking at her..i know he started developing feelings for her. I wanted to run away from there and I did that but not before saying a bye and tuition bahaana..

From that day I started to avoid him. I would stay late at libraries, then I found another short cut ways instead of regular ways. But I don't think he will try to find me. He will be busy with sanjuktha. And I m happy for him.
But one day he saw me and blocked my way.

What happened yaar? Where have u been hiding?

u noe tuitions and assignments..no time..got to go..

I walked past him.i hope he will believe this lie. But he blocked my way again.

what s wrong?why r u not stalking me anymore? he asked little hurt.

Nothing..its just I was busy. I don't think ur girlfriend likes me stalking. I tried to sound casual.

what? Sanju knows that we r just friends.

oh!that means u confessed ur feelings,rt?

Yeah..and she has accepted.. he was again having that contented smile. Oh gosh!i envy ds girl..I can feel tears brimming in my eyes.

now u don't have to feel bad in stalking me

I felt like strangling him. What did he think about me? Did my stalking give him an ego-boost or something? I was really angry..

I have found another person for stalking. Now I won't bother u..

What?!

He was confused and shocked.

ya..i was about to tell u… u noe he has erm..he has amazing voice. So I decided my next assignment will be on him

I made to sound like I was giggling..there was a complete silence for few seconds.

oh! So I was just an assignment to u!or I can say an entertainment till u found the next guy

Anger and hurt was evident in his voice.

u noe..when new comes in,old gets out..

I know that sounds rude. But I don't have any choice. I wanted him to go away from me,rt?And that was what happened. He threw me a disgusting glare and walked away. May be from life.

I have no strength to stand there more. I decided to go back hostel. Tears were continuously falling from my eyes. I will feel ok after sometime.. I hope so..

It was a week after that incident.
But I was not successful in forgetting my love. Or I can say I don't want to. I always had wonderful time with him. I wanted to live with his memories. And I m doing that. If we see our love happy then we will b happy. And he is so lucky to have a such a perfect girlfriend.
This incident dint affects my studies. I worked hard, attended tuitions… and life was going smoothly..

I haven't seen him for a month. I was missing him badly. Never mind.

Today it was raining heavily. And I took my old route to go for tuitions. When I reached bus stop I saw him leaning near the lamppost drenched in rain. He was looking intently at me. But what s he doing there? He hated rains. Oh god!he s not even bothering about himself. He will catch cold.
That's it. I went near him and offered my umbrella.

erm..what r u doing here? I mean y r u standing in the rain like this?

No reply
Sighing sadly I was about to go when he said

thinking

Surprised at the reply I turned back.

Thinking or drenching..for god's sake get into this umbrella.

Both

I can't stand ds state of him.

Look brown eyes..i m so sorry for that day. I noe I hurt u.. but its just that…

He looked surprised. His eyes softened.

wo..where is Sanjuktha?

we broke up

I was shocked!but I dunno wat to say…nw I realize y he s standing in ds rain.. heart broke..

I m sorry
is that all u have to say?

Then what s he expecting from me. I hope I m not the reason for their break up. I was staring intently at him. Suddenly his eyes become dark with anger.

what r u waiting for?

I shivered with his voice. But at the sametym I was worried. I ignored his anger and said

u will catch cold..pls get into this umbrella

He took a step forward.

U know what..u r totally opposite of my dream girl.

Opposite. Did he know how much his words r breaking my heart. I looked down and stepped back. He took another step forward.

u sumtyms talk weird things. Weird jokes,always eating my head with ur crazy talks. You drive me insane. U will start stalking any crazy guys who have weird sound, crazy hair…

Tears started to flow from eyes and I don't want him to see those. If he don't like me then its k. he don't have to say these nasty things to me. Still looking down I started to turn around and leave.

And u r always running away..

His voice softened nw.

whenever something bad happens u start to run away without thinking. U can't keep running away everytime..

Anger coursed thru my veins. I turned around without caring about my tears that's still flowing.

what the hell do u want?Just b/c u got dumped doesn't give the right ton say nasty things about me. If I m not matching to ur dream girl's category,then I m sorry.. you won't have to see me ever again.. and I will b careful not to come in front of u

He held my wrist and pulled me towards him. He was glaring again. Nw he was under my umbrella.

what the hell r u talking?

At that time I realized our position. His breath was fanning my lips. My body touched his almost.
We were so close.

you are running away again

His voice held some unknown intensity. I shivered.
I stared and I know he can see my confusion.

I broke up with sanju..

what? U started to develop feelings for her. She s the best thing that could ever happen to you. Don't be stupid!

what? he literally shouted.

ur feelings for her won't change if u go away from her,rt? So pls get her back before its too late

oh really!then?

tell u can't live without her. Girls like such sort of stuffs. Try to b more romantic

oh k..how about ds Stalker girl i did a big mistake. I can't live without u

perfect! Replace stalker girl with Sanjuktha

And I was going to walk past him when he held my wrist and pulled me again and I dashed into his chest.

will u let me complete my words?

Omg!he s not realizing wat s his proximity doing to me. Above all this rain. Umbrella was long lost..

I broke up with sanju 3 weeks ago! And I have no intention to return back

Again I was about to say when he interrupted.

Don't even try. I broke up with her when I realized that I don't feel for her anymore. There s sum1 else..

what! Do u know what u r saying? And u r lecturing me!

He was irritated.

u will not let me finish what I want to say,rt?

its not my fault..i..

Miss Geet Handa…i like u

There was silence for a moment.

I don't think that u li..like me..

He chuckled a bit. I know he dint expect this reaction and me too…
And y is that so?

its just I know u well. Sanju makes you smile

What?

He was confused.

yeah..i have seen the way u talk about her. She makes u smile. She s just like ur dream girl

His words were still ringing in my mind about hw I m not a match for him.

you don't smile at me. You always glare at me.

He started glaring again
See

that's b/c u r so dumb at times..

I pouted. He closed his eyes feeling irritated. I dint like the frustrating line on his face when especially I m the reason.

if u don't feel the same for me then its ok..i can understand..

He looked vulnerable.

r u blind?

hu-h

I have liked u for a long time now

I admitted. My eyes lowered. Oh god!i was blushing. He placed his thumb and forefinger under my chin and made me to look into his Brown eyes.

you were confessing ur feelings?

huh..i was done

That was it?

Still longer than urs

if only u haven't interrupted me..

see u r glaring again

Rain was lightening. And we r staring each other oddly.

Since we have confessed..

Before I could say anything, his lips landed on mine. It was… the coldest kiss I'd had so far. Not in terms of passion, but temperature. His lips were so cold that when they touched mine, I jumped at the shiver that surged through my body as a result. Then he tangled a hand in my hair and pulled me closer to kiss me properly, and I forgot about all the cold for a little while.
This kiss, right here, right now, with the right guy – it surely was the best and most beautiful.
We both ran out of breath and pulled away. I was fully flushed.

so… I found myself whispering

Lets start from the beginning. Nice to meet u Geet Handa. I m Maan..Maan Singh Khurrana

Then he gave me one of his brilliant smile.

Maan..
this is the first time I m hearing his name..Maan..My Brown Eyes.. I was staring lovingly at him when he said

You r the most wonderful and amazing girl I have ever met. Will u be my girlfriend?


Thank u guys for the wonderful support. And pls dont ask me to write an epilogue as i m not good in keeping promises..Pls like and comment for the last time.
😃 Pls add "Remyapms" for future pms..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow Remya u write wonderfully yaar😃
Brown eyes and stalker Girl nice jodi par ye end mein Sanjuykta kaha se aa gayi I hope Maan is playing a prank to make Geet realize that she loves him and not likes him or rather she loves MAAN n not only his brown eyes

continue soon dear

love -Piya

------edited------

Wow me first accidently hehe I was commenting on the previous part and after posting my comment i realized that u have already updated the last part
Oh such a sweet OS I think the best character was sanju as she was the one who made Maaneet realize the depth of their love
Haye the rain a perfect cupid for the love birds
haha the confession was thoda hatke but I loved it and that kiss haye me blushing

for me this was not the end it was just the begining

love u loads
and yes will read ur other works very soon

urs Piya

PS: When u write any OS in the future do let me know I will make a banner for u (Eniki aor pm chaida madi nyan banner undaki kaudkam😳 Hw is my malyalam?)😆
Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ramyayuppy

diiidiii i loved it soo much ❤️

wow the brown eyes and the stalker girl 😃😉
arey its wonderful 😃
plzzz update soon 😃



thanku dear...updated..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Edited my comment and do read my note 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update
want an epilogue
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ritzy09

wow what a wonderful update excpet for the last line...

😡kyon kyoj kyon
it was one of the best sweetest cutest OS i have read and then Sanjyukta...no no no...😭😭😭
next part chaiye...abhi ki abhi aur rafa dafa karo is sanjyukta ko Remya...nahi toh nahi toh...
haan...i will make Maan and Geet separate in Vivah...aur sab ko bata bhi doongi it is because of you😆...



thanx di for liking it...omg di! etni badi dhamki... 😲i have shoo-d out sanjuktha...
Nw u dont have to separate maaneet in vivah...😉


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