MG ff - Her Bitter fate Thread 2 link @ Pg 151 - Page 67

Originally posted by: dreamymishti88

really awesome

lovely and romantic

first kiss hmm...😳

continue soon dear😊

Originally posted by: bulbul164

Love it but maan is leaving plz geet ke saath kuch bura mat karna

Originally posted by: -padma-

nice update .

what will happen to Geet when Maan leaves 😕

what will Brij do to Channi .

Originally posted by: suhaaana

superb mindblowing update

maan is leaving i know nw geet's life will be spoiled by maan's brother...

yar pllzzz dont make it sad the cute romance is very touching...

waiting to know about channi too

Originally posted by: --Ratna--

Monika 🤗...Happy Teri Dewani Anniversary !...thank u for the awesome update and PM...loved the way u used the song for Maaneet scenes...the pics went so well with the scene...once again beautifully written 👏...Geet unknowingly put Channi in danger...this Brij and Shankar are so evil 😡...dreading what they are planning to do...Maan has no clue when the marriage is ...and now he is leaving...hate to think what that Manav will do in his absence...the precap is so scary 😭...dont want anything bad happening to Geet...plz continue...TC 😊

Originally posted by: chavvi16

you arent doing good but wait for wait for it doing great
nooo damn maneet are gonna be separated this will be sad
oh yeah now that i remember this was around the time when teri deewani was broadcast and that was just magical
you have recreated that magic in this loved it as usual
oh no hope channi will be fine bless she didnt tell about geet
geet too wouldnt have said anything had she known of the circumstances
cheers for pm see ya soon

Originally posted by: richa_kapoor

Awsome update and song is selection is superbbb

Originally posted by: rashmi.vaish68

nice

Part 24

Maan was ready to leave HP. He was taking blessing from elders. Geet was very sad and upset. She dint came out from her room. maan eyes were searching her but she was nowhere. He understood her condition and guessed where she would be. So he excused himself from there giving some random excuse and went to her room. Mohindar and rano understood and smiled.

Geet was in her room looking out of window. Maan entered and closed door as it was far corner of haveli, so no one noticed. She felt his presence in air but kept quite.

Maan- geet'

Geet '

Maan held her arm from behind and turned her to him. "geet..kuch bologi nahi" she looked him with wet eyes and kept her head on his chest rounding her arm around his neck. Her tears were silently dropping and wetting his shirt. He closed his eyes and let her poured her tears. After some time she raised her head and looked him. He cupped her face and placed a kiss on her forehead. She smiled a little with wet eyes. She nodded no saying please don't go by her eyes. He smiled in response. His eyes also getting little wet but he hides it. But geet understood. She could not see his sad face. She slowly rose on her toe and placed soft kisses on his both cheeks. He smiled and looked at her lips. She shied and looked down. He cupped her face and made her look at him. She looked and both lost in each other. After some time, someone called from downstairs "maanji, gari aa gayi hai. Their trance broke. Last time he kissed her cheeks and turned to leave. He reached to door when she called "maan". He turned and saw her running toward him crying. She hugged him tight and placed her lips on his. Kissed him hard trying hard to stop him but it was not going to happen. She was pouring her all love and insecurities in that one kiss. Maan stood there like statue. He hold her tight and let her do what she wanted. He didn't make any his effort to do her calm or console her. He wanted her to live her short time with him as her own wish. She was holding him tight. She was feeling something weird something not good. She couldn't say to him any word only showing her heart to him with this one kiss. But time doesn't wait for anyone. They had to separate and it happened.

Maan sit in jeep. She was standing in balcony. He looked up to her. She was still crying. He felt hurt. He couldn't see her in this state but couldn't do anything to console her. He smiled looking her and nodded no as saying not to cry please. She couldn't deny. She wipped her eyes showing him his full authority on her. She smiled as he wished. He smiled back to give her support. He started jeep. That engine sound mingled with her heartbeat. Her all promise went in veil. She couldn't see him going away so she run to room keeping her hand on mouth coz she dint want to show her tears to him. He looked up again seeing her going inside. He understood, smiled a little and drove. She run out hearing engine sound going faded she looked jeep was far away going leaving dust cloud for her. He went. She fell on ground and cried out loud, pouring her complained to her babaji to took her maan away from her. Why baabji..Why' but she dint get any answer.

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"Shankar kaha gayi who " brij shouted to Shankar.

Shankar- pata nahi brij praaji, maine to kamre me band kiya tha ..waha se kase bhag nikli

Brij ' shaker dund usse aur maar daal. Uska jinda rahna humare liye bahut khatarnaak hai

"ji praaji" oyeee chalo sab idhar udhardhundho usse.. mile toh maar daalo..chorna mat" Shankar shouted his gang.

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A girl, in ripped cloths, running fast in desert like mad. She had no sense where she was going. She had to save her life today anyhow. She wanted to be alive. She didn't want to die like this not now. she was running toward handa haveli but she was sure she couldn't be saved there also because there her murder stayed. But she wanted to make alarm to her friend that her life might also be in danger like her own. She was stumbling, tripping but running. Suddenly she heard some weird horrible sound of group of people from behind . she was sure they were searching her. She got more scared started crying hard. She was going to cross road when a jeep came from front and collided to her. Her body dropped on ground lifeless.

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ENGLISH VERSION

Maan was ready to leave HP. He was taking blessing from elders. Geet was very sad and upset. She dint came out from her room. maan eyes were searching her but she was nowhere. He understood her condition and guessed where she would be. So he excused himself from there giving some random excuse and went to her room. Mohindar and rano understood and smiled.

Geet was in her room looking out of window. Maan entered and closed door as it was far corner of haveli, so no one noticed. She felt his presence in air but kept quite.

Maan- geet'

Geet '

Maan held her arm from behind and turned her to him. "geet'wont you say something" she looked him with wet eyes and kept her head on his chest rounding her arm around his neck. Her tears were silently dropping and wetting his shirt. He closed his eyes and let her poured her tears. After some time she raised her head and looked him. He cupped her face and placed a kiss on her forehead. She smiled a little with wet eyes. She nodded no saying please don't go by her eyes. He smiled in response. His eyes also getting little wet but he hides it. But geet understood. She could not see his sad face. She slowly rose on her toe and placed soft kisses on his both cheeks. He smiled and looked at her lips. She shied and looked down. He cupped her face and made her look at him. She looked and both lost in each other. Suddenly someone called out from downstairs "maanji, gari aa gayi hai. Their trance broke. Last time he kissed her cheeks and turned to leave. He reached to door when she called "maan". He turned and saw her running toward him crying. She hugged him tight and placed her lips on his. Kissed him hard trying hard to stop him but it was not going to happed. She was pouring her all love and insecurities in that one kiss. Maan stood there like statue. He hold her tight and let her do what she wanted. He didn't make any his effort to do her calm or console her. He wanted to live her time with him as her on wish. She was holding him tight. She was feeling something weird something not good. She couldn't say to him any word only showing her heart to him with this one kiss. But time doesn't wait for anyone. They had to separate and it happened.

Maan sit in jeep. She was standing in balcony. He looked up to her. She was still crying. He felt hurt. He couldn't see her in this state but couldn't do anything to console her. He smiled looking her and nodded no as saying not to cry please. She couldn't deny. She wipped her eyes showing him his full authority on her. She smiled as he wished. He smiled back to give her support. He started jeep. That engine sound mingled with her heartbeat. Her all promise went in veil. She couldn't see him going away so she run to room keeping her hand on mouth coz she dint want to show her tears to him. He looked up again seeing her going inside. He understood, smiled a little and drove. She run out hearing engine sound going faded she looked jeep was far away going leaving dust cloud for her. He went. She fell on ground and cried hard pouring her complained to her babaji to took her maan away from her. Why baabji..Why' but she dint get any answer.

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"shankar..where is she " brij shouted to Shankar.

Shankar- don't know praaji..i locked her in room , how she scaped

Brij ' Shankar ..find her and kill. She should not be alive otherwise it would not good for us

"ji praaji" oyee..search her everywherekill her if anyone find her..dont leave" Shankar shouted his gang.

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A girl, in ripped cloths, running fast in desert like mad. She had no sense where she was going. She had to save her life today anyhow. She wanted to be alive. She didn't want to die like this not now. she was running toward handa haveli but she was sure she couldn't be saved there also because there her murder stayed. But she wanted to make alarm to her friend that her life might also be in danger like her own. She was stumbling, tripping but running. Suddenly she heard some weird horrible sound of group of people from behind . she was sure they were searching her. She got more scared started crying hard. She was going to cross road when a jeep came from front and collided to her. Her body dropped on ground lifeless.

Precap - Ab toh jitni jaldi ho sake ye shaadi mai kar deta chahta hu.

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