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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART:11

SIR there is a phone call for you sir from Bangalore

Okay connect told the head of the sri detective agency chopra

Is this mr chopra

Yes

Sir you have told to investigate about the building collapse of handa construction companies in south India

Yes, immediately, he sat straight trying to listen carefully

Sir this is all rumor, there is no building collapse here, we do not know who has spread the news there in Mumbai , but there is no building collapse nor death here,

You know who has spread these rumors

Iam trying to investigate that,

Some lady is there behind all these rumors, that I came to know

Okay thanks, he kept the phone

He was angry, he got a doubt regarding this, how could geet be so cool, when there is a building collapse and when she claimed about the death also, he observed, she was behaving so coolly, that why he is trying to investigate this issue in his own way

At the same time he called dev and asked him to come here,

Why chopra why you called me

I will tell you on the way , but now come we have to go out

He was carrying the poison xxx30

Geet and maan have reached the hotel , it is famous for its sea food

Do you like to have some hot drink...

No...no...

Geet was smiling at his behavior

Why are you so scared,

Id not have any habit,

It is okay you can have at least have mock tails

You can take fruit punch, it is very good here

Geet iam not able to understand, why you brought me here,

Just like that I want to tell you something ,

Do you want to save some money before government make some orders, or can before they react I will take some amount and hide somewhere ,it will be useful to you

After I come from the jail tell like that know

No... it is not my intention

Okay leave this issue, tell me what you will do

Every day I bring carrier for you when you stay in the prison ,

She was seeing him looking into his almond eyes

No I was just thinking about you what you will do every day you deal business in cores , how can you live

At the same time waiter came and served the dinner

Did you liked this drink

It is very nice sipping he told

At the same time she was trying to take prawns plate... maan took the plate and served in her plate

You did not tell the answer for my question

I know so many, everyone will come forward to give partnership in their firms, or I can take loan from bank and start the business , when you return back I will back into normal position

He was smiling, he looks so cute while he smiles, like there was some glow in his eyes,

But geet was in frustration...

Every time when iam bringing about the jail issues, why you are laughing, why you are not getting angry on me

If I get angry what will happen , it I tell you to stop that , will you stop the talking about that issue, you will not stop, but you will talk more about that one

Ya that is correct, why I always talk in negative

How I know about that

Tell me know... you have worked in a psychiatrist office, and you did medicines also

He was thinking

At the same time geet was taking the prawn piece from the plate and about to eat, maan was about to tell some thing

At the same current has gone

May be some good luck is still there in her destiny, but even when there is a bad luck in our destiny , what it is in our fate it will happen

Prawns are there still in her plate untouched

Lights have come generator was on

When a person has lot of confidence in him in his principles, he tries to express his thoughts to the world , but the outside world may not like his principles, they think it is negativity

Geet was thinking... Muje sach batnahai... abhi waqt hai

But maan was talking you know geet , the person who has this negative attitude , will not be easily understand by others

She was thinking... She has tell him , the drama she played regarding the marriage , maan will understands her definitely,

She took the prawn piece and about take, the masala on the prawn piece was very black, the sign of the death ,

Maan me tum ko ek sach batatna chati ho...me tum ko asli karan batana chati ho tum ko is hotel kyo leke ayi ho... my... My wealth... I mean...she took the prawn bite

She coughed very badly, immediately maan gave her water,but it is not controlled she was coughing very badly, she was feeling as if the whole body is burning , it is effecting very badly on the nerves, the eyelids are popping as if they will come out, in second she fell down

Geet...geet...maan was shouting but she was not able to, listen anything... He immediately swapped her into his arms and took her near the car

He instructed to driver to drive fast and take her to hospital

He immediately called her relative dev

Iam sorry dev, she has eaten the poisons sea food , she has taken that prawns which are effecting her now

When she will recover now

We cannot tell, it may take I week, 1year or 10 year or life long

How can you tell that, while taking poisonous food, her whole body became paralytic, it cannot happen like that

This is rare case dev, I have sent the prawns to the lab report, the poison that are in crabs, we are not able find out , I do not know how the fishermen has caught the -prawns , but these prawns are very dangerous

Dev was felling very happy internally, but he not expressing outside

Please doctor save geet, we will take her foreign we will give best possible medication

Meanwhile in the room geet was laying down, her face was very pale

You do not worry geet

He can understand geet situation the women who used give orders and used run the business was lying helplessly

on the bed

geet I know what ever I tell you know it is only just words, but this fate , this life lot of unexpected thing will happen

ya maan this life...this my fate

aise udas mat ho geet, abhi dekho... medical science itna develop hu hai, tum jaldi tekh hojage

maine doctor se baat ki hai...doctor muje jhoot nahi bhol saket hai

he do not know what to tell

she was seeing her whole body...

see maan now I always used to think how to sit idel, the thought itself makes me irritating , now I can think a lot whether I can move the hand first or leg first, mere time pass bhi hojake ye sochkar...

maan was shivering ... hearing to this statement

he bend down near her

he kissed on her forehead ...geet I will take care for you, protect you from the world

he kissed her on he cheek...geet I want to be friendly with you, I will promise you that I will be a good friend to you

he kissed her on the nose...geet I promise you that I will make you always happy, I will never let you cry

he kissed on her ears... Geet you are always special to me

he kissed on her chin...geet you are very cute...beautiful

he saw her as if taking her permission...he slowly went near lips...geet I love you... telling slowly he captured her lips gave small peck on her lips

geet will you marry me




precape...marraige geet aur maan ka

Edited by rsusmita - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
okay friends thanks al lot for giving your likes and comments

ya now tell how was the proposal made by the maan to geet
please tell me

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Posted: 13 years ago
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omg..she is poisoned
she is paralysed
now maan says he will take care of her
will she marry him
w8ing 4 next twist..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very confusing update...

geet is poisioned...Maan takes her to hospital...then he called Dev that she ate poisionous crabs and because of it her life is in danger,she can be paralysed for whole life,she was unconscious but then Maan is talking with her...kissing her... she is in danger and he is proposing her...kissing her lips... and they are getting married also...😕

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsome update

these two r really awsome
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow...
lovely dear
waiting for most awaited scene
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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will be updating today
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88

PART:12

GEET WAS SHOCKED

She do how to react,

e kis tarah ka insanhai nahi , e nahi hoskta...maine...kay kardiya...

Nahi maan ye kasie hoga...vo ...

You are thinking about money know, do not worry about ...maine tumse pyar kiya hai...muje tumhari dault se koi matlab nahi haijaise ho...tum achi ho...when you came for then marriage proposal, me dar kar chalegya tha now I want marry you. I will do job and take care for you, we will show to nice doctors if there is good luck , you will get back everything, do not worry

Her eyes became moist she started crying, even when the doctor told her that her whole body became paralytic , she did not cry but at this time , listing to the maan words she started crying

He came near and sat on the bed and cupped her face looked into her eyes

Nahi geet do not cry

But she did not her crying started into hiccups...

I did not lost any thing...she started to tell ...

I just want to test you...hmmm...hmmm

What happened geet you stop crying and tell

I want to test you so I told like that ... But god has tested me

Maan was shocked now...

Geet money has not got anywhere...she is same old geet

I want to test you...that day when you brought all my wealth...i came near you and kept the marriage proposal... You did not reply...that previous day I called the Bangalore office and told to send message that building has collapsed ...when the next day when you will come to know that when I lost my wealth , I thought you will not agree to marriage ...but you did not agree to the marriage and has rewritten the wealth in my name and went away, at the same time dev had told that if it is government bulding and loss of lifes, there is a chance of going to jail, I thought you will not agree and tell that I have no connection with this situation , but you were ready to go to the jail

I want to prove my point that money is greater than any thing in this world, to prove this I did all these thing, but god has given the punishment by making me like a dead body

Now every time in my life I have depend on you for each and every thing,

I thought with this wealth when I propose to you you will definitely will agree ... Now...

Shhh...kinta roti ho tum...chup bilkukl chup...

On one condition I will marry you

She saw him as if asking what is the condition

he hold her chin upwards... I want the same arrogant .. ego geet who i loved ...who used get irritation with my talks geet smiled with moist eyes

dev was in agry mood , he is throwing the glasses here and there , he is behaving just like mad man , chopra to pheli bar dev ko asie dekha ,

some times people look soft but unka asli chera peene ka pata chalta hai

agarwal was thinking to normalize the situation

it is our luck that geet , did not get doubt that we have added poison to the crabs , it is good that chopra has taken the decision very fast

agarwal knows that chopra feels vey happy by this word

ya that day I got doubt so I called to Bangalore office to know the actual facts, alon with dev I went to hotel just added 2 drops of poison that all

what would have happen if the same thing was eaten by the maan .. asked agarwal

dev got irrated with that answer

what will happen

geet would have sent him to hospital alone with the driver

dev do not get hyper, now our problem become more serious, without thinking about it we are fighting

what happened now

if geet would have dies , immediately all used to get doubt on dev , that is why we are planning this much, now geet was going maary , so if geet dies all wealth will go in the name of maan , if maan dies then dev will get the wealth, but they will be lot CBI

enquiry so we have to think something

tum bahut door sochte vo

without any one doubting we have to kill both geet and maan

then we will kill both of them in an accident

ya we can do that , without anyone doubting , but they have to go out ,but geet in a such a position that she cannot move

then how can she marry

why you are worried about marriage

any way the marriage is there is in the evening if you want you can attend and see

I got an idea chopra was was telling as if he in a deep thought

What is it asked agarwal

See maan father, was big business man but he has given all his wealth to a a second... why cannot we think and send a girl near to him

So stupid thought ,

Tum apna muglasim ga jamna ka idea apni pass hi rakh,

Ek sall phele hum vo geet ka car brakes tamper kiya to vo usdin marjati aur humko e situation nahi atti, abhi dekho 2 ko marna hai ... He went away irratitagely from that place

How dev came to you agrawal

He came near to me for treatment

For what treatment

He is a physco

What was the case

Helicisuitation ... thinking about ghosts usko lagta hai ki koi ladiki use mardeligi... Aur bahut inferior complexity , aur vusk sex realted problem bhi hai

Kaya...

Ha usko...jaldi org... hojatahai

Aur ...usne last year he had killed one person

What...kiso Maratha chopra asked

His girlfriend naina tara, he used date with her for almost 1 year, after 2 years she married , and happily settled in her married life...His husband used to satisfy her a lot , then she came to know the actual sex life

Then she started avoiding dev... When dev asked her to come, she used tease him, that he is impotent

With frustration he killed her

They were drinking chopra when geet and maan will die, when we will get money , when we will enjoy ourselves

That is not that much easy agarwal see I have worked in police department I know , we have to plan something

Agarwal be care full do not drink too much we have attend marriage...

MarriageHe was laughing...

Vo jinda lash ki tarha padhi bistar par aur uska shadi... bad me first night

They are laughing'.


Geet was feeling very shy

Maan ne sab naukar ko janne ko kehediya hai

Geet me tumhe tayar kartha ho

Nahi please kisko bejeiana

Nahi...me hi tayar...karta ho...kyo sharm araha hai kya...yeto phele bar nahi haina...tumko aisa nahi dekhna usdin...to...

Chi...chi...babji ...sharma nahi hai kya apko,,

Nahi....

Aur kitne log ko milta hai ye mouka ki apni hato se apni dulhan ko tayrkarna

Dekho me tumhe tayar karta ho'

Telling that he started dressing her..

She was crying silently inside... because paralytic she could not feel his hands on her lower part of the body,

When his hands started roaming around her neck there was wild sensation in her, ( she has

no sensation in the parts of the body until her shoulders , even she cannot move her hands, only the face parts she can move)

after dressing her he showed her mirror, she was looking so beautiful in the bridal dress








he called registrar to the house... he slowly signed...he took hold of her hand and made the thumb impression on the registrar book...dev and yash maan friend came and signed as witness

after that he tied mangalsutra around her neck and put sindoor on her forehead... She was looking so divine...he was staring into her eyes

why god has so rude to her why he has given everything , nice , wealth , beautiful but why he has taken the happiness from her , why he done to he like this

there is no answer for this




precape: first night

Edited by rsusmita - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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so Maan-Geet are married now...

Dev and party are planning to kill both for money...

very interesting update...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update...
loved it...
Geet was testing maan...
dev is physco...
aggarwal and chopra after geet's wealth...
Maaneet wedding...
continue soon

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