FF-MAAN&GEET-WIFE-LOVERupdated epilogue 12/10 - Page 11

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Posted: 13 years ago


wow...

this part was very beautiful...

very emotional and u have portrayed their emotions very well...

and this time there are less mistakes also in conversation so it was not so hard to understand...

thanx for pm...
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thanks for all your suggestion and likes i will try to update today
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PART-14

GOOD MORNING GEET, EVERYTHING IS FINE ,

Chopra was asking geet taking a chair near her bed

Iam fine chopra ,geet was smiling looking at him

Chopra was seeing a light glow in her face

What doctor told geet

Food poison it will be more in the first but later on it effects will be less , may it will take time to come back normal , may be it will take 1 year or some times more than 5 years , depending upon the shock treatment

Chopra was shocked seeing geet in this situation, she was not at all feeling bad or sad in her situation may be because of her husband effect

What about the business geet, what you have thought about that, will dev will be looking after your business

Dev... dev...What he will do...maan is there, he will look after the business ,to day ihave sent him to office, he was cribbing like a small kid for going to the office

You have sent maan, what the painter will do , let him enjoy his life in painting ,what will he do in files

Geet was smiling, let him learn, he do not have any interest on money, at least , in this way he will come into our world,

Chopra was hesitating ...if maan is not interested in money ...then he accepted your proposal of marrying you without knowing the actual truth that you never lost anything, this is all drama

Yes... Geet was rising her eyebrows as if questioning that why he is asking such questions

Yes...she told

I do not know whether to tell you or not but ...i know I only do detective works on your employees , when I came to know that you are marrying maan , iam sorry for that ,I did some enquirers about him

What you did

He knows before that this is all false,he knows about the building did not collapsed that night itself

How he knows

He called that Bangalore office that night from the telephone which was there near his room

Geet did not talked for some time

She asked chopra

I am not able to understand why he called the Bangalore office, can you guess why he did like this

See geet iam only a detective my work is to do enquirers, and to do detection, I cannot guess the other things

But atleast you can guess why he did like this

you are a detective at least you can think why he did like this

With this answer, chopra was finding for his words,

When yourself went in the search of maan and started enquiring where he stays,is there any telephone booth there, did he called the Bangalore office ...f your are enquiring this many things, then you would have got the doubt , so iam asking why got the doubt and why you have enquired these many things

Now chopra was in fixed, , he was thinking how to get from this situation

See geet you are business women, I have to think abut your security, you have given the responsibility of detecting the employers of your company , as security agent , iwas keeping an eye on maan

You are not giving the right answer for my question

See geet no one will a marry a paralytic women ,you did a drama that all your wealth has gone and you became a beggar, and that time he came forward and told that he wants to marry you, at that time I got the doubt , so I enquired about him

So maan knows everything,,he married me for my wealth,

Chopra was silent

Did you investigate anything about the poisons food

Are Police are investigating it, the other crabs pieces are good are they , are investigating the hotel people, the bearers , did they got the doubt that ,some one has done purposefully,did they got the chemical reports

They are not able to find out ,what the poisonous is,they are thinking may one particular crab is poisonous

Geet is thinking

Chopra was continuing , if maan has taken the food first, may he would have attacked first

No, we did not eat first, we were talking

Then did maan waited for you to start eating the food

She immediately saw him coldly, raising her eyebrows,

Iam sorry geet I should have talked like this

She came to one decisions

You have the copy of the telephone register

Yes I have he showed the copy

I do not have hands to take that, you keep in that drawer

Maan was busy in the office

He was having meeting with various head of the departments, finance, marketing , accounts , slowly , he is trying the understand the business ,

Everyone were happy seeing him, they thought what will happen to this business, after when they heard about geet situation, and they heard rumors that geet had married some painter they got doubt that what will happen to this business empire but seeing maan they are now relieved that someone is there to look after the business

They liked the attitude of the maan

Sasha who was head of the department architecture, was helping him and answering his question patiently ,

Maan was artist, naturally he will not able to cope up with the business, but very nicely he took over the business , at the same time , received a call from his secretary pinky that they was some one name yash waiting for his

He immediately told her to send yash

Seeing yash he felt very relived and happy

Yash was happy seeing his best friend, in this state

What yash , sudden surprise, came suddenly here, anything serious

Any thing you tell maan, money can give luxurious life

For telling this you came all the way from your place

It is not like that , 2 days back one incident has occurred , , I want to tell that , some body came to our telephone booth posing as police , I was not there, they took the call register and went away , and again they came back and gave the register

Maan was shocked hearing that, so yash do you want me to investigate about that , who has taken that returned back

No maan , I want to give you some information, ,

I have seen the call register, on one particular date I have seen that a call has done by you, to Bangalore, normally I do not write your name in the call register, the handwriting is not mine,

The pen is also not mine

Yash did you see the number, to which the call gone

Ya that number is some construction company in Bangalore

Thanks yash , for giving the information

Do not tell that maan you are my friend

After yash went maan called the sridetective agency ,

Adi can you come here once to the office


precape; still continuing the investigation

Edited by rsusmita - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

d story is getting more n more intresting...!!!

Nyc update...!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Will geet doubt maan?
Wat wil maan do?
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Posted: 13 years ago
super..chopra trying to plot maan
n here maan got his evidence some one is ploting him
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 14
nice part...
they are trying to separate Geet and Maan...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Awesome update dear

Loved it so much

Continue soon dear

Waiting 😊😊😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks for your likes and comments
am writing the story will try to update today
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PART:15

WHEN ADI GOT THE CALL HE WENT IMMEDIATELY TO THE HANDA OFFICE

When adi came to office, maan became busy with the office work,


Adi felt very happy seeing him like,

He liked maan a lot, his simpleness, honesty has attracted him a lot


Maan I am very happy seeing you like this


The one who appreciated with whole heartedly , you are one among the few


Why maan why are you thinking like that


It is okay adi, I want some help from you, then he narrated the incidents, that yash told him ,

Adi I want some help from you


Maan do not request, I am friend to you so you order me

I want you to investigate all this , personally, not on the behalf of the sri detective agency , pressing the world personally

He saw the time it is almost 2 in the afternoon, he thought of geet, the office is near by handa mansion,

He went to the house

How is the office maan

It is frustrating,

Not even half day you are feeling frustration


It is not like that, I can handle the business, but I not feeling like doing


Maan do you have anyone in the Bangalore, any friend or relatives

No geet why you are asking


No, just like that,

At the same time nakul brought food for them, they took the lunch,

Geet take your medicine

No maan I do not want take this kadvi medicine

Nahi geet, please take it is good for your health

I will give you something if you take this

Sachi what you will give,

nectar, sweet, okay take this

Immediately she took the medicine

Now give my sweet. she pouted her lips saying that

He immediately bend down, took her lips into his, he is taking her saliva, as to change the taste , of her medicine

Maan'maan'..

her moaning is making more aggressive ' he started to nibble the lower lip was biting the upper lip, causing the lip, a slight bleed, he immediately sucked the blood, as if soothing

at the same time his cell rang,

okay now you got your sweet now you take rest , there is call from office, I will go and come

after going to the office he called chopra and asked him to come to office once

after about one hour chopra came

he saw was deeply engrossed in the files

chopra take your seat , I called you, I want a small information from you, without lifting his head from the file

I heard that you are closing you sri detective agency for the lack of funds

It is not like that, it is true that detective agency is not having the funds but your organization are enough for our agency

Is it true that other than us major organization are not there in your agency

Ya it is true

Maan was signing the files, the pen is not writing properly

Chopra can you pass your pen

Taking his pen maan started signing

His files,

Chopra do you use the same pen eveytime, this green pen is writing very thick

Yes maan everytime I use the this pen only

At the same time his cell rang

Adi is another side, he talked to him almost 10 min without changing his expressions'. Just talking like hmmm

Okay'.

After keeping the phone,

Chopra did your son went America for ms, I heard that, he did not got any scholar ship, you havet opay the full amount,for the fees

Yes last week he went there

I have seen you daughter marriage invitation card, ten days back

Why you are asking this many question

Even geet came to the marriage

So geet did not got doubt, as per knowledge, you have asked the amount for your kid marriage and education

What doubt

That you asked amount for your needs, but as per knowledge, you did not take anything from her so how could you arrange this much amount


That is none of your concern maan

But maan was not bothered with question,he leaned back in the seat,

Chopra as per knowledge you do not have any organization other than us who can give you money, in you income tax return also you did not mention about the money

Chopra face became very pale, so you are doing detective work around me

But maan continued his questions,

As per my regard geet has asked you investigate against dev, what happened to that

I am still investigating

In meanwhile, , geet has faced the danger

I will catch that person

No need for that , I can look after that

, I am asking you to investigate against dev and the person who are behind him

I am as a handa company of attorney holder, as per this , iam asking you for explanation , how you got this much money

This is my personal matter

Then from now on wards I am removing the services of sri detective agency, our organization , do not need your services, you can go the hr and take your check

Chopra was shocked with this statement, he face became very red due to anger,

How dare you maan, on the first day of your office you thought you can remove, do you thick you can remove from my post , will your wife will support, you think

Yes geet will support me

On what basis you are having this much confidence

He throwed the files before him

5 minutes back I have taken your pen, and he showed telephone register which yash gave

See chopra the pen used in the this register and I used are the same, and this is your pen

Is it not true

Chopra face became very pale

Though his very voice is very low, the intensity of the question very high

Tell me mr chopra did you not called the Bangalore office

Chopra face became pale, he do not know what to talk

What you are telling, you are putting false allegation on me

He put his cell phone papers

See chopra this cell phone records of yours stating that you have called the banglore office on that day

It is this true or not, do not try bluf

Mr chopra you are sacked you can leave the office

Chopra slowly go up

I will see your end maan, I will use all my police brain, and I will see that , just like your father I see your end

After chopra left the cabin, he called adi

Adi thanks a lot for your information, but I cannot help you, because you may loose your job

What'.

Yes. I have removed sri detective agency services from the company , and chopra may get the doubt on you

Adi was still shock

Adi'..adi

Tell me maan iam listening

Adi can your take over the security of handa organizations

What '.adi was shocked

How can I can become security office that to to such a big organization

You come just once here , I will talk to you In detail

Adi immediately reached the office

Maan how can you give this big responsibility, do you feel I can do this job

Adi I am sure you can do this job, I seen honesty in your eyes, when I asked the information, you acted very fastly and gave the information with in 6 hours, even knowing that it can effect you , and this job is needed for you, so please accept this offer

He immediately called upon the meeting and introduced adi as the chief security office of handa companies

Adi what you used do before this job

I used work in army

Maan smiled hearing this words

Why maan why your are lauging

When going away chopra said that he used work in police and will use all his power to end me , so I appointed an army person to fight against him




precape: did not think any thing will see and write ,


Edited by rsusmita - 13 years ago

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