Lust For Revenge - MG FF THREAD 1 - Page 11

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Posted: 13 years ago
hey richa...it's a beautiful FF..
totally diff..all characters r just flipped up..heheh...
nie story..
do pm me whenever u updt..
do updt quick..;)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Its a really interesting Ff ! Contniue soon !
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Posted: 13 years ago
**LUST FOR REVANGE**


PART - 16


DOC came out and allwed all to meet hm. Geet sit beside hm. He cant able to speak properly. But seeing hr crying alot he collect sm courage.


Brij:bachha main thek hu ab tu rona band kar.Umma isse kaho na roye nai wrna ye or b buri dikhti hai.


She smiled in tears. Dadima caress his hair.


Dadi:kaise beta ab ap.ap na jaldi se thek ho jaiye wrna humari beti aise hi roti rahegi.


Brij smiles slightly but deep inside he felt gulity coz he know yesterday is d last day of repayment of d loan nd he fails to do so.


Brij:papa humara ghar?


Dharam:puttar tu ye sab na soch.wo ghar chala gaya to kya hua,hm dusra koi intezam kr lenge.


Mr.Walia:oye tu kyu fikar krta hai mera ghar b to aap sbka hai.


Geet shoked hearing about dis as she is totally unaware of her parents prob. But b4 she askd nythng so1's voice attract evry1's attention.


Jogi:are mere hote hue kisi ko ten.lene ki zarurat nai hai.


A very healthy man was standing at d door around d age of 40. Geet ran to him nd hugged him. He caressed hr lovingly.


Jogi:puttr to thek to hai na?


Geet nodded yes.


Avantika too came nd hugged hm.




Dharam:joginder tu yaha kaise?


He went to hm and hugged him. Den he see his nephew nd caress him.


Jogi:oye tu to mera sher hai chal bas bahut dara liya tune sbko.abi jaldi se khada ho ja.samjha.(Brij nodded.) ye to achha hua jo Anantika ne mujhe sb bta dia or main yaha time pe aa gaya.




Avantika introdused him wid Dadima. He touched her feet nd greeted her.


Jogi:lekin ye sb hua kaise?


Dharam:thanks to God who saved our child.otherwise eye witnessed gave statemnt dat d very driver hit him intentionally.


Dadima nd Geet scared and shocked too.


Geet:papa it means som1 trying to hurt hm knownlingly.


Dharam:cant sy coz who wants to harm us.we dont have any enemies.


Avantika:may b u forgot.but u nd Brij lost ur jobs on d same day.it was not a coincidence. Som1 trying to harm us in all ways.




Geet:mumma y u dont tell me all dis?y u shareit nt wid me.kya main itni prai ho gai hu?


Dharam:dont worry putter we all r able to handle dis u just only concentrate on ur life,sply on ur baby.


Jogi:geet puttr now i m here u dont take stress of dem.jijaji i knw what happened here. So as soon he get discharge u all came wid me to Punjab.


Avantika:but Veerji how is it possible?


Jogi:avntika wats a big deal in dat.jeejaji nd brij losts deir jobs nd now u also lot ur home too.nothng is dere fr u now. Or waise b mera sb kuch to Brij ka hi hona hai so its better ki wo abi se sara kaam sambhal le.


Dharam:but jogi...


Jogi:no but jeejaji.i hv decided as he get well we leave Delhi.


Avantika nd Dharam agreed wid hm finaly. Dadima tuk hr bak to KM. Arpita enquired bt Dadi cvr up.in evng Maan came bak Arpita washed hs brain. He fuming.he made a wy to Dadi's rum coz Geet is wid hr.He wnts to scoldhr bt Dadi's presnce made him stop to do so.



Maan:Geet came to our rum.i need to talk to u.



Dadi:Maan apko jo puchna hai hm btate hai.ha hm inhe hospital leke gye the coz u r not do dat.




Maan:bt i told hr den y she went to hospital widout my permission.


Dadima:coz Geet ko KM me 1month ho chuka hai or unka 1 bar b chekup nai hua hai.



Maan:wat do u mean?




Dadi:yahi ki apne shadi to kr li lekin uski zimmedari ko nibhaya nahi.she ie preg.nd in dat condi.she needs regular chekup.bt u dont take hr to doc fr once.



Maan:u know how busy i am.



Dadi:ya i kne it.anyways doc gave d appointment fr sunday and dis is y order dat u r going 2 take hr fr chekup. Maan i dnt wnt to listn ny excuse frm u.ok?



Maan nodded yes nd went out frm hr rum in angr.



Geet ws scared so much.hr eyes trn wet nd she huggd dadima:meri wajhse apko jhooth bolna pada na.



Dadi wiped hr tears:pls beta dont blame urselfnd stop stressing urslf as much.dey all r blind in anger.cant c ur innosence nd value,bt trust me very soon dey all realize deir mistake nd regret on dat dy.



Maan is boiling in angr bt rite now he dont have ny point to hurt hr. 3mor dys pasd. Suday is cm. Dadi reminds Maan in front of all about her appointment wid doc.



Arpita taunts:wat happend to hr?yha aise konse pahar todti hai jo Doc ko dikhana pad raha hai?



Annie:1 mor tantrum of hr.



Dadima:asked to Maan. He told u evrythng.



Samarth:Maan ma kya keh rai hai?wat happens to hr?



Maan reluctantly:dad just a routine chekup.



Samarth:dats wat i asked y wat happend to hr?



Maan:dad she is preg.



All shoked.



Arpita:wat??



Samarth:wow dats a gud news so y u dont tell us.chalo kam se km koi khushi to aai.



All considered d baby belongs to Maan as 1month is passd to deir marriage and Maan dont told dem d whole truth yet. Only Samarth shw sm happiness and orderd Maan to take her to hospital...




Maan follwed d order of Dadi nd his father and take her to hospital...
Edited by richa_kapoor - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
very nice update.
who tried to kill brij ??
thank god maan took her to doc at least by ordering of father.
thank you for pm :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

good update. maan is so heartless,

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome prt...
lov it...
omg intentional hit of truck...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update !dadi is so nice ! Soon want to see maan reaction after knowing truth !
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Posted: 13 years ago
super story
plz addd me to ur pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 16
nice...
chalo now her family will be somewhat safe and better...
intentionally tried to kill Brij?
hope its not Maan's plan...
else he wouldnt be able to look at himself later...
so the news is out Geet is pregnant but they are thinking its Maan's baby...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part yaar i think ye accident maan ne krwaya he
but hope he did not do this
awesome part
maan baabu sudher jao
warna pachtao gy
suchi mn

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