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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice
but some mistake cnt be mended
damage is 4 life
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**LUST FOR REVANGE**


PART - 13


GEET came bak with driver. She is vry upset,but after reaching hom she wiped her tears. Dadima saw her coming. She went to her and askd her abot hr visit to Khurana Groups of Industries.


Dadi:beta ap aa gai.to kaisa laga apko office?


Geet's mind is filld wid hs harsh words,so she frgot too gave ans to hr. Dadi sjpook hr nd she came bak to sences.


Dadi:beta r u alrite?


Geet:Dadima i thnk i need som rest.can i go to my room?


Dadi:ya sure.u go nd take rest.


Geet vanished. Bt dadi sucedded in readng hr face expressions whch clearly sho her tension. Dadi wants to kno wat happened to her in office.so she enquired it frm Sasha. She told her evrythng happned between dem. Dadi was very disappointed knowng about d truth. She cant undrstnd d reason of Maan's behaviour. She tryng to find out d reason bt problm is dat in dis no1 can help hr. In office Samarth gt hs deal again today.clients sign d deal wid Khurana's.Aftr deyft Samarth askd abot Geet frm Sasha. She told dat she is alredy left d office. Samrth was in deep thot. In evng when Maan arrived Dadi wnts ti confront hm but she stop herslf coz she knew,it may grew hs angr or even he take some hard steps against Sasha or Geet fr teling hr.so she drop d idea and decided to watch dem quitely fr sm time.


Maan(thot)ab tak to Geet ko uski family ki prob.ka pata chal gaya hoga.ab use pata chalega jb apno ko tklef hoti hai to kaisa lgta hai. I really want to c d tears of pain in ur eyes Geet.


He went straight to hs room,bt dissapointed as she sit calmly on a bed,lost in hr own thoughts. She doesnt aware of hs presence.


Maan:kmal hai ise to koi frak hi nai pada.aisa kaise ho skta hai?


He threw his tie and shrt in anger and was about to move to washrum. In eveng when she saw hm cming back home,he was not well.his way of walking is nt normal.She had many doubts on hm. She decided to enquird about hm.


Maan:bahut dheet hai.lgta hai isse bada jhatka dena hoga tabi shyad kuch hoga.


Meanwhile Geet again feel like vomit so she ran to washrum. Maan gt angry coz he is jst abot to enterng. Geet used much time as hr condition is gettng worst day by day. Maan roamed in hs anger. Geet came out aftr few mins. She is panting badly,bt Maan is blind in hs revange. He ignored hr cond.nd tagged hr against wall.


Maan:jaan bujhkr krti ho na ye sb?


Her legs trmbling due to weakness. she is no mood to play argument game at dis momnt. She tryng to loosn hs grip ovr hr. He clapsed hr wrist in hs hands nd tagged it to d wall besides hr head. She raised hr another to free hrslf but it was met wid same treatment."Maan",she moaned in pain.


Maan:agli bar meri bat puri khtm hue begair jane ki sochna b mat u think u can avoid me? Bt u not.coz me nd dis pain is ur destiney.


He pressd hs body against hr nd locking hr between wall nd his body.whch is nt comfrtable for her in ny way.


Geet:leave me Maan.


Maan:kyu?kyu sunu main tumhari baat jab tum meri koi baat nahi manti. Maine kaha tha mere kamre ki har cheez pe pehla haq mera hai.main washrum ja raha tha par tum jaan bhujhkar pehle chali gai.hai na?


Geet luk in his eyes. This time there is no sign of fear in her eyes as she is getting use too of it:maine jaan ke nahi gai thi balki isliye gayi thi coz i felt vomiting. Or waise b ab mere sath rehna hai to ye sab to apko bardasht karna hi padega.pregnancy me ye sb hota hai.Secondly maine apko nahi dekha tha ki aap room me aa chuke hai.


His pressure on hr is increasing.He wants to gave her more pain,but a phone call save her. He leave her coz it was an important call. After ans d call he take his towel and went to washroom. Geet made a call after his leave.


Geet:hello Tasha.


Tasha:Geet kaisi hai tu? Waha tu theek to hai na? We are very worried for you sweety.


Geet:dont worry Tasha main theek hu. Achha sunn tujhse kuchh kaam hai.


Tasha:ha to bol na.


Geet:abi phone pe nahi bata sakti. Kal main tujhse milungi or sunn tere wo Uncle jo Doc. hai na unhe sath jarur lana. Place or time main abi msg kar dungi.


Tasha:lekin Geet tujhe unse kya kaam hai? Wo to...


Geet:wo main sab milke hi bataungi. Pls bas to doc uncle ko sath jarur laio.


Tasha:ok dont worry main unhe kal leke aaungi.


Geet:thanks Tasha. Ab main rakhti hu baki ki baat kal karenge.


Tasha:ok bye.


Geet cuts the call... She text msg and send it to Tasha.
Edited by richa_kapoor - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
awesome part...what is she upto??😲 continue soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 13
nice...
oh so Maan wants to use first then Geet next time puke on him...
never came across such a fool and idiot...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
Luvly ud shona..luv ya👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
Loved all parts 11,12 & 13 .. Great updates but Maan is so harsh on Geet.. He will regret it after he knows the truth.. Finally we see someone else along with Dadimaa and Samarth who is helping Geet.. And poor Geet she is now used to the anger and pain that she gets from Maan.. Waiting to see what happens next.. Thanks for wonderful updates ..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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**LUST FOR REVANGE*




PART - 14


NEXT day when Maan wen left fr office Geet toget ready to meet Tasha nd hr Uncle. Geet take prmission frm dadi. Dadi allwd her. She went frst to Pinky's home nd pick up,den both reached to d definate destination. Geet nd Pinky reached to a hotel nd waits fr Tasha nd her Uncle. After a couple of mins.Tasha came wid hr Uncle. Geet greeted hm nd hugged Tasha. All sit comfrtbly nd strt talkng. Maan was also dere as he had a meeting wid his clients. Maan saw dem all bt as he is wid hs client so he avoid talking to hr in frnt of dem. Geet told hr prob.to her Uncle nd want hs advice.



Uncle:Geet beta jo symptoms apne btaye hai usse to yahi lgta hai par fir b sure hona jaruri hai.


Geet:isiliye maine apse slah mangi.ap is bare zada jante hai.


Uncle:thek hai beta 1 kam krte hai main tumhe kuch or symptoms k bare me btata hu if u find all in him den ur doubt will convrt in surity.


Geet: ok uncle tell me.


He explain hr all,


Uncle:now beta checked it vry carfully nd if it clears positively den definately he will need medi.attention.


Geet:thanx Uncle main aaj se hi find out krne ki koshish krungi or jaise hi confrm hota hai main apko infrm krti hu.coz agr ye shi hua to aage apki or zrurt padegi.


Uncle:sure beta ny time.now i mst lev coz i hv to reach hospital.u guys carry on.
He left dem.


Pinky:Geet waha sb thek to hai na?nd pls dont lie ok.


Geet:ha evrythng is alrite.


Tasha:dont lie Geet coz ur face is telling smthng else.


Her dull eyes nd pale face tells many things widout hr speaking.


Geet:now wat happns to my face?


Pinky:geet bat ko ghuma mt we all kno howz Khurana's temper is.


Geet:guys all r fine dont stressd urslf.its just bcoz of pregnancy.


Pinky:f9 mat bata.lekin made me promise ki tujhe kbi b hmari zarurt pade to hume batayegi.


She nodded yes2. Geet smiled weakly sftr hr marriage fr d frst time.bt hr smile faded wen she hear hr name frm d voice of terror. All trnttowrd d sourse of voice. Maan stndng their very close to dem. His meetng is over so he came to her.


Maan:what r u dong here?


Geet:wo main apni frnds se milne aai thi.


Tasha nd Pinky smiled weakly sawing hs rude atttitude.


Maan:agr tumari chattng ho gai ho to ghar chale?


Geet:main chali jaungi.


Maan(grinned hs teeth):kyu mere sath chalne me kya prob hai?


Geet dont wnt to create a sce here in public place sply in front of hr frnds.


Geet:pinky Tasha i m leaving wid hm u carry on.


Both:bye Geet take care. Maan steps out nd Geet followd hm. In car Maan asked abot d persn sitting wid dem in hotel.


Maan:kon tha wo jiske sath lunch pe aai ho?(Geet saw hm in disgust) sunai nai deta 1 bar me? Kuch puch raha hu na?


Geet:wo Tasha k Uncle the.


Maan:yaha kyu aaye the?


Geet:Tasha ko chhodne.


Maan:chhodne aaye or sath hi baith gaye?


Geet:wo doc hai isliye puchh rahe the main kon konsi medi.le rai hu?


Maan increase d speed,bt b4 he reached to KM he recieved a call frm his father. He summoned him immediately in office. Maan follows hs ordr nd truned hs car to KGI.


Geet enquird:ye to office hai?


Maan:ha dad ne bulaya hai.


He take hr along wid hm. Samarth is alredy upset nd seeing her wid him he get frustrated mor.


Samarth:sara time biwi k pallu se bandhe mat raha karo or b kaam hai so concentrate on dat.


Maan:Dad ye acci.mili any ways what happened? Gurgaon me jo 75 floors ki buliding bnane ki permission maine le thi wo cancel ho gayi hai. Notice mila hai ya to proj band karo ya fir sirf 50th floor tak ki hi permission melige.


Maan:dad apne deshmukh se bat nai ki. Election k time to apke aage pichhe ghumta rehta hai ab kya hua?


Samarth: wahi to prob hai wo phone hi nahi utha raha hai. Uske PA se baat hui thi wo bol raha hai abi wo out of India hai.


Maan fuming:aise kaise phone nahi utha raha wo?

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Meanwhile Saha came with his mobile.


Sasha:sir deshmukh ji a phone hai.


Samarth talks to him. Deshmukh apolozise and promise him that he will do his work andguranteed him a permission of 75 floors. Samarth feels relaxed.


Samarth:Maan tum Geet ko leke ghar chale jao.


Maan:dad lekin ye prob?


Samarth:wo solve ho gayi hai. Deshmukh se baat ho gayi hai. He assured me that we gt licence of 75 floors.

Maan:ok dad to main ise ghar driver k sath bhej deta hu.


Samarth: nahi Maan Geet ko tum apne sath hi leke jao. Driver k sath bhejna sahi nahi hai after all she is your wife.


Maan:lekin dad?


Samarth:its ok main or pura staff hai yaha sabsambhalne k liye. You will take her home.



Maan:ok dad.




Maan left with her...
Edited by richa_kapoor - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi friends i hope you like my updates...
i rally enjoy reading all the comments plsss do reading and commenting
LOVE YOU ALL😉❤️ 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 14
why do i feel that Samrath one day will feel that Geet is so lucky for them when it comes to business?
whenever she makes an appearance their problem gets solved...
and Maan well no words about him...
what did Tasha's Uncle tell Geet?
cont soon dear...

PS - u either pm us dear or at least post the link in the Daily updates thread dear coz u cant update the title since u are a mobile user...
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2139829/ff-daily-updates-thread-2-see-page-5-and-60
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome ud dr luvd it so much👏

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