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Posted: 12 years ago
spammm...till page 8o...but itni choti part ke liye...doesn't worth it man..!...Have to make u'r parts larger...!
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PART-14(B)

GEET was continuously crying,

"why me babaji?? why me.."

her tears seemed to endless...

"no i will never allow this devil to rule me and my life, if this is my fate i better die.."

she stood up and started to search for something... she found her desired thing...

she quickly get hold of chair and brought it under the fan...her took her dupptta and stood on the chair and tied it to fan and then made a circle

she worn the circle of dupatta and closed her eyes...

"sorry dad, mom, vicky i am sorry...i hate my existence as i am touched by that devil..i make his mere touch and presence but now he is trying to control my life, which i never allow..."

" please apni geet ko maaf kar digiya babaji..." and

opened her eye with confidence, like she has got some power, some strength

somewhere she knew that she was doing wrong...but this life was burden for her now, more than any pain, she was feeling mental pain and stress..

she pushed the chair and gave in herself...

but nothing happened, she saw downwards and saw her leg on a shoulder and arm of that person around her leg...

usually the person who safe someone's life, is worth of a thanks, but in her case – her destroyer was her savior. yes the devil himself- maan.

maan called the guards and geet was brought down, she was having no remorse of what she was going to do, but little did she knew her act made devil's anger reach peak...

maan locked geet and moved towards his room, when he was informed that geet was not given medicines and key was with him...

so he moved towards her room, as he didn't trust anyone else...

he opened the door and saw the horrible sight..geet was trying suicide...he quickly ran to catch her leg and finally catch it...

his anger broke very record, he was hell hell angry...

he is bad when is devil, but he is worst when he is angry..

and same anger, the same craziness, the same madness took over him after so many years...

the difference was that now he has power and no one can do anything to him...

he saw geet with his red eyes, the color of eye was totally red, the color itself showed the limit of this anger...

today he was out of control...

he lost all the control, which he has on himself, nobody know now what devil will do??

they know that today's night something bad will happen...

geet saw maan, he know that this devil will know be out of control...

she was little scared in her heart, but put a straight face...

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next- devil's anger (what will maan do?? even i am scared, babaji save geet)

geet knowing about sam

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Edited by ishanidhi08 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
me 1st 2 comment
yar update longer plzzz
devil maan i love him but more when he realize love and still behave like a devil
plzzz make him soon A DEVIL IN LOVE😉
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me 2nd to comment
coming to update loved it ...😊

Edited by mounacuty - 12 years ago
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Awesome Update
Continue Soon
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superb
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Awesome update
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Isha mu sweet heart one more update...u r giving ur birthday presents to us...sorry dear not to update mine...but tum ho na...I really lov u ...greay work as always.Yaar aab Jaane TKH bhi update kar de...baby...


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devil is in agry mood what will happen to geet...
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