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Posted: 12 years ago
ohh wowww

YAAR U MADE ME CRY WITH GEET PAIN

MAAN IS ANGRY

YAAR KYA KARE GA ABB YE

I AM SCARED

CONT. SOON
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update... I'm pretty scared... What will dis devill do to geet...
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 14 B
nice part...
poor Geet...
OMG Maan is too much...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice but short update

Devil is in love.. plz gv us long update..thanx for pm😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part ...
love it ...
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow nice FF..
read all the parts..
gr8 going dear..
awww geet tried to commit suicide..
wonder wht maan would do now...
thanx a lot for the pm..
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
WHAT WILL MAAN DO NOW??????
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Posted: 12 years ago
such a short one?? feel sorry for geet
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Posted: 12 years ago

PART-15

"The Devil pulls the strings which make us dance;
We find delight in the most loathsome things;
Some furtherance of Hell each new day brings,
And yet we feel no horror in that rank advance."

geet was all ready to face the danger coming...

she knew devil will never forgive her..she was ready to life this life of hell with this devil, because she wanted to test her god who didn't mercy her even after seeing her countless tears...

maan quickly came to geet's side and held her hand tightly...

and hugged her, geet was totally shocked,



it was not a force hug but a soft and light hug out care and affection...she was shocked to see devil's behavior...

"geet you are aright na??"

"why are doing this geet, i hate you for this.." he said softly..

geet was totally shocked, as she expected just the opposite reaction

maan came out of hug and kissed her forehead..



and then abruptly stopped and quickly started going backwards while staring geet, who stood like statue...

maan came out of room and ran outside the house and started screaming..

he went to his outhouse and went to jym area over there and started hitting himself with rod..

blood was continuously coming out..but no effect on maan

he hit himself with burning rod flames...deep burn scare where there...


"kyun?? kyun kiya meina..."

"nahi mein asa nahi hona dunga...voh meri kuch nahi hain..."

"i will not let her effect me..i will trust anyone.."

"i will not let history repeat itself..."

"nooo"

and started hurting himself...


"i am devil, devil, and devil have no emotions..."

a tear dropped from his eyes, as he remembered image from past...

suddenly he hold his head tightly and just fainted...

"maaannn.." said a person

...

geet was totally shocked with the event...

she was now determined that she will not such things again...

because she today came to know...there is still a human inside a devil..

and she will take her revenge...

and slept with new confidence...

...

next- who is the person??


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Edited by angelwords - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesme update dear
aww maanu hurting hmself

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