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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey dear buddies I took months to think what should I do .I should follow my old works which I hav dropped or should start new one. Presently two works r in front of U MPM n KTSS.

But this work I started becoz I can't resist myself to write on my favorite theme .Which is one major theme in Russian Classics n British Classics

Lets c what I gonna do .U to decide

Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter One

'Geet' a girlish voice was echoing all around in deep forest just at the feet of Shivalik Mountain Range .Shivalik Range major part of Great Himalays n which ends in Eastern Parts of Punjab.Covers almost whole areas from Chandigarh to Hoshiarpur then toward Pathankot.

'Geet...Geet where r u ?' this voice is not just to call some one.This girl was screaming.But why .Why this girl is wandering at midnight in jungle.

'Why r u not responding me damn' Girl started to cry bitterly but again her tears stops n comes out in form of frustration not to find that one to whom she s searching

Suddenly her phone buzzes n thinking about that girl named she takes it.May be Geet is calling.Ya her name is fleshing on screen

But before she could say some thing she hears a male voice 'Is this Meera's no?' That male voice calls her Meera.So she is Meera searching for girl named Geet

'Ya I m Meera but who r u ? Where is Geet my friend from her phone u r calling me who r u ?' She yelled finding some one other than her friend Geet on other side .But within seconds she becomes worried about her ' Where is she .Is she alrite'

'Plz Mam listen to me first.I m Dr Dev..Dev Gulati...calling from Forties Hospital Mohali. I first no I found on this mobile was urs as there r so many missed calls on it'..So it was Dr Dev Gulati fron Mohali

'Dr Dev...My friend Geet's phone...how u got it.Where is Geet.Is ..is she allrite' she says in one go

'Well not to create any suspense ur friend is in hospital.She is Geet as u said n also written on her bracelet.So defiantly she is same girl' he cleared her doubts

'Geet she is in hospital.What happened to her.How she reached there Boliye doctor 'she started to cry bitterly

'Few hours back I was returning to hospital for nite duty when I found her on Chandigarh Mohali highway.She was laying at one side of road in blood lik some vehicle hit her .It seems hit n run case.But without thinking much I took her here.' he told her whole story

'But I m surprised how she reached there.But doctor how is she.Ask her don to b worry I m coming'she tired to recollect things how Geet went there n met with n accident

'Ya u should come.Even inform her family.There r other things to b discussed.She is unconscious'doctor said

'Dr her family they r not here.I m coming but why r u saying so some other things to discuss' Meera was worried

'Its better at least u can come.plz do it fast'

'Dr Dev I know its non of ur business to help a stranger lik me.But u saved Geet.if u plz do me a favor' she begged

'Dr. I m almost 7-10 km away from Forties as according to estimate.I m out from my hotel to search Geet .She was missing from afternoon so at this time I can't arrange any vehicle plz help me to reach her.' she says in feeble voice

'Okey where r u .Tell me I ll pick u up'Dr Dev thinks says yes.

'Dr I m near to Ram Nagar bus stop.Ya it is board is in front of me.If u know this place' she checks board of very small town where it is not possible to get any texi at this time

'Ya I know.okey wait there I m coming'Dr cuts phone n rushed toward Meera

He picked Meera n reached hospital in half n hour.When Dr Dev n Meera were outside ICU lab technical handed over test reports to Dr.He was much worried looking at these.Wich she clearly observed.

'Dr. what happened .I think these r my friend's reports' she yelled

'Meera ji plz calm down .u should n mentally prepared to observe ur friend's real condition' he placed his hand on her shoulder

'Dr what condition.Kuch to boliye mu heart is sinking'her mind was not able to think

' When I found Geet.I got smell of alcohol from her.These reports cleared she was drunk or was given it forcibly only she knows...n' he said hesitatingly

'What ..Geet... how can she... no doctor u r at any mistake n why u r hesitating to say more...u said and...what and...'unexpected things were making her mad

'and wo yeh k she has been raped or forcibly uske sath yeh kiya gaya after making her drunk only she can tell 'he said in one go becoz even he was a stranger n doctor it was not easy to say .

What ? without any other word Meera fals on floor.



So hop u gonna lik this shocking start.ll update next day.Plz tell me what u hav to say about this .Hit tab .

Lov

Jass


precap.

Geet in coma..Meera hesitate to tell Handas about it.










Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice part & also nice start , continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Edited by dolly10 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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omg yaar frst part mai hi shock.😲
omg omg omg rape...😲😲😲
me. 🤢


oye jass cont soonn...
kya aiwe hi mid mai chor kr suspns bna diya..😲
cont soonn yaarr...😛
Edited by tiakashyap - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WHAT A SCARY START
WHAT HAPPENED TO GEET AND WHO DID IT
GEET IN COMA ????
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG geet raped continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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geet ***** 😲😲😲😲😭😭😭
what a shocking update...
waiting to know the next...
😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
superb start...
really shocking update
loved it
eagerly waiting for nxt
cont.soon
thankx 4 pm



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Posted: 13 years ago
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Note


In the starting u may expect it is a story of a rape victim as usual but it is not lik that u hav to wait for it.Its story of guilt of person who did nothing...its story of inner struggle of person who is culprit...but the real victim unaware what's happening around...Meera here is not an side character but she is sufferer more than Geet without reason.Where Dev stands in all this

What's Geet's future...when she is in coma...from where Maan comes in between three Geet Meera Dev
Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago

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