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Posted: 13 years ago
#41

PART 1

XYZ College- Delhi

Boy 1 : There comes the terror Geet Handa and sorry gals today no one can save Maan Singh Khuranna from her wrath.
Girl 1: Ya, she is indeed a terror for college and Maan you are gone man.
Armaan: get the hell out the way you idiots. Don't you see Geet Handa coming.
Armaan literally warned all the boys to move out of her way. Yes the boys of the college were scared of Geet Handa a walking terror for the boys except Armaan , Abhay and Vicky urf Vikrant Singh Khuranna. No one dared to come close to her.
Abhay: Geet wats the matter tat you are boiling in anger. Cool down babes. Just tell wats the matter.
Geet: just shut your bloody mouth Abhay.
Vicky: Abhay aaj tho sach mein kisis na kisiki shamaat tho jarrur aayi hain.
Armaan: oye tum dono chup raho warna yeh Hitler humari hi shamaat laayegi. Aur ushe dekhkar aisa lagtha hain ki Vicky aaj tera bhai tho gaya kaam se.
Vicky: wat did bro do tat she is so much angry.
Abhay: Don't you know Vicky tera bhai aur yeh humari Hitler ek tuje ke jaan ke pyase hain. aur aaj tho tera bhai ooops bro is gone.
Ya today Geet Handa would kill tat Maan Singh Khuranna for putting her into trouble. She was on fire since she came to know tat Maan had spilled her beans to her family and now she would not leave him at any cost.

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Here on the other side Maan Singh Khuranna the known Casanova of his college was enjoying his private moment with his latest so called girlfriend Meena. He was so lost his her juicy lips tat he did not realize tat his moment was going to be disturbed by Geet Handa is one and only one enemy right now.
Geet: So how was your first kiss with your latest girlfriend Mr. Maan Singh Khuranna.
Maan who was lost in the kiss but still never failed to identify the voice of his enemy was shocked to see almost the whole college watching them while kissing. He left Meena at the instant which made her fall down with a thud sound making others laugh.
Meena: wat the hell was tat Maan.
And than Maan realized tat he dropped her down.
Maan: m sorry sheena..
Meena: sheena who the hell is tat. My name is Meena.
Maan: Sheena ya Meena its one and the same..
Meena: you moron how do you forget my name.
Geet: hey girl, just shove off from here right now.
Maan: wat was tat Geet. don't you have any shame for interrupting my private moment with my girlfriend. Oops sorry to whom m I asking about shame.
Geet: Private moment haan. How many private moment do you have Maan for a day. Guys do you have a list of Maan Singh Khuranna's private moment. Can anyone get it for me.
Armaan: ya I do have Geet. it's here. 9 am with Meena or Sheena, 11am with Priya or Rani, 2pm with Monica which is almost from two months, 4pm with any random new girlfriend and the remaining evening with his so called permanent Girlfriend Sameera but it sometimes changes. So in a day almost countless private moments with different girls.
The whole crowd burst into a laughter listening to his list of private moments while Geet smirked.
Maan: are you jealous of me Geet tat you don't get a new boyfriend daily other than this three idiots friends of yours.
Geet: don't you dare say a word against them Maan otherwise.
Maan: otherwise wat Geet.
And he moved right infront of her face and their lips were few inches away from each other.
Geet: don't you dare come near me Maan otherwise you will pay for it later
Maan: Pay later why not now Geet. anyways you have spoilt my morning kiss so
And without completely his sentence his closed the distance between them and smashed his lips on her kissing her infront of the whole crowd aggressively. Geet tried to get out of his grip but his hold only tighten around him and finding no other chance she hit him on his manhood making him wince in pain and he instantly left her and before he could hold himself back from the pain he felt a sharp and hard slap on his face making everyone to froze on their spot.

Precap: Maan's Kiss and Geet's slap.
So how was it. My fingers crossed for this story. As m first time writing something different here.

Hope you alike it. Will be waiting for your likes and comments.

Love you all

Shoba..

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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
me first yipppeee


hope u remember me


diff concept from all ur ff...nd its going to be interesting
loved it
maan is totally shameless guy
oppsss geet ka reaction sahi tha
kaha mara nd a tight slap

want to know the reason of geet anger
wht maan did...
Edited by uteem - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
me first yipppeee


hope u remember me


diff concept from all ur ff...nd its going to be interesting
loved it
maan is totally shameless guy
oppsss geet ka reaction sahi tha
kaha mara nd a tight slap

want to know the reason of geet anger

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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
omg!!! maan a casanova?😭 i hate it wen he is a casanova in any story anyways update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
aww..maan s such a cool dude...
Loved that thappad..maan deserves that...
good start..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
Hey! Congratz for the new ff... Great starting. Hope to get many more spicy updates ahead... Loved it.😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
read the first part
awesome update
looking forward to read more
pls add me tour pmlist
update next part soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome start
loved it
please continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
hey it is really great..
first kiss and slap..great going 😆
wtng for the nxt
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
awesome start
superb update
loved it
continue soon
thankx for pm


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