New ff ANGEL'S DEVIL COMPLETE - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
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when r u going to update yaar plz update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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new Devil...

loved it...

very interesting...

please start updating parts soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing concept
totally awesome
plz pm me and update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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kya yaar teen din se wait kar rahe hein kabh update karoghi
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow just lovd it dear
loved ur devil oops!our devil frm nw..plz cnt
n plz pm me when u update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WHEN R U GOING TO UPDATE YAAR PLZ UPDATE SOON
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amazing one yaar.. add to me ur pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Waiting for an update...
Kahan kho gai ho...???


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Posted: 13 years ago
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when r u going to update yaar plz update soon cant wait plz update plz plz plz plz plz plz plz
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART-1
she tried to open her eyes.But her head was hurting like anything. slowly she opened her eyes to see herself in middle of a double king sized bed,covered with satin sheet.
wh...where am i ?? she tried to take a look at the room..that's when she discovered a pair of intense eyes looking at her from the side of the bed..
she instantly got up from the bed bt repented instantly as she felt dizzy.
WHAT are u doing?? the effects of the drugs have not yet worned down..u should take rest..he barked holding her steady .his deep dark voice was warm & melting.
she looked at the owner of those intense eyes & deep voice...
APP!!..are ap to wohi hai na..jisne mujhe uss narak se nikala??(u! aren't u the same person who tool me out of that hell??)
hmm..his heart missed a beat looking at those innocent eyes..she is still the same..he thought while he laid her in bed again.
mujhe samaz nahi aa raha ki apko main thanks kaise kahu...ap ne jo mere liye kiya..(i don't no how to thank u for what u have done for me.)
uski koi zarurat nahi hai..(there is no need for that)he said sitting on the chair beside the bed on which he was sitting from last 8 hours without moving.
how can u say that..what u have done for me despite being a stranger ..i can't repay u..bt atleast i can show my gratitude to u..
he instantly rose up from the chair in such a force that startled geet to core.
he grabbed her arms & pulled her closer to him.now his breath was fanning her lips...with there faces mere inces away.
he said in a very low tone...what did u say??i am a stranger to u??? u DON'T KNOW ME??!!
his voice was rising by every minute with his eyes turning red..
geet fumbled & recked her brain if she had seen him somewhere..
bt she failed..so helplessly she answered.. nnn..no..i..i..haven't met before.
U DON'T REMEMBER...!!FINE!!! LET ME SHOW U WHO I AM TO U.
befote geet could understand the meaning of his words he slammed his lips attacked her neck ..face... throat..devouring her..kissing & bitting her...
geet could not understand this man..who was talikng nicely a few minutes ago & now was assulting her..tears of shame made their way through her eyes ..p ..please..please leave me..she pleaded weakly still without the strenght to fight.
she cold feel his lips making there way towards her face...still crying,she closed her eyes tightly not wanting to see his face..
the moment maan felt her tears he stopped abruptly & moved from her.He managed his hair & dress..& fakely coughed to gain her attention..
geet who was busy to fix her dress looked at him innocently ...
woh..i am going to get some oinment for ur scratches & u have fever too, i will bring something to eat ,then u can take medicine & take some rest.
geet nodded. he went from the room & came back after a few minutes with first aid kit.
he forwarded some bandeges to her,she took them ..he stood there looking everywhere accept her until she had finished applying bandeges . sometimes later he felt a tug on his shirt ..
what ?? he was again going to bark..bt he stopped looking at her who OH So innocently forwarded a remaining bandege to him..
wo..app ko vi chot lagi hai na..(u r also hurt)she said..i am sorry scratching u..
he felt he should say sorry to for his behaviour..bt all could he utter looking at those deep innocent eyes ..drowning in them...was ..it's ok..
he abruptly came out of the room in pretence of bringing food...he closed the door behind him & rested his back on the door..thinking.what the hell i am doing!!! what i had planned to do with her & what am i doing!! & what was THAT!! in room ...few minutes ago..i was..then how come we were behaving like nothing happened!!!!!!!
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geet was looking around the room still sitting in bed when maan came with soup.
wo..there was no cook today..so i did what i could.
geet smiled & took the bowl from him..
What's so funny ??why are u laughing?? he asked in a stern tone.
wo ..aisa nahi hai..wo kya hai na..bohut din ho gaye hai..kisine mere liye dil se khana banaya hai..isiliye i am happy..(it is not like that,it has been many days since someone has cooked for me heartily,that's why i ma happy )thank u...she smiled cutely.
she blowed the soup & took a sip,mmm.. it's yummy..
he chuckeled..
she finished her soup & took med ..then suddenly she gasped..mere Dev bhai kaha hai?? wo wo to mere saath hi the..unko kuch..aur (where is my bro brij?he was with meid something happen to him?? &..)
JUST SHUT UP!! U DON'T HAVE TO WORRY FOR THEM!THEY ARE JUST BLOODY B**
DON'T USE THAT LANGUAGE FOR MY FAMILY .she scrreamed holding his colar.
FAMILY!! U CALL THEM FAMILY!! WHO SOLD U FOR THIER PETTY NEEDS!!
geet gasped..they did not!! WO AISA KAVI NAHI KAR SAKTE!! SAMJHE APP !!KAVI NAHI!!(they could never do something like that..do u understand!! never!!)
tumhe lagta hai ki usne aisa kuch nahi kiya..hai na.. chalo(u think he did not do anything of that sort..isn't it..ok)..let your health get a little better..i will show u...WHAT EXACTLY U R TO HIM..he whispered in her ears..frightening her.
Edited by Shilalipi - 12 years ago

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