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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: radha.nandini

maan feel for geet love at first sight?


no no radha its not love at first sight ull understand as the story proceeds
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Posted: 13 years ago
sorry if i missed replying to anyone as per me i have 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: LILY111144

hw much tym u wil take?


yaar gimme 10 mins just editing
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 8:

MAA DURGA TEMPLE, DELHI:


A limousine stopped at the temple and naintara came out of it closing the door behind


Maan: bhabi jaldi aajana plz I have a meeting to attend


Nt: haan maan aajaongi have patience.


Geet sat on the steps of the temple of maa durga she looked at the idol of her for long remembering her convo with her mother last night


LAST NIGHT:


Geet: (crying)HAPPY BIRTHDAY MAMA!!! subah se aapke call ke liye kitna wait kar rahi thi pata hai agar ghar mein hoti toh baat alag hota I want to hug u tight mama '..u have given away ur happiness for my life bt mama I just cant even wish u properly on ur bday I curse this fate of mine it just separated me from u


Rano: geet!!! Beta meri baat sun tu jab paida hui thi na tab mera asli bday hua all I want is u to be happy babji agar tumhe khushi de toh yeh maa bhi khush ho jayegi geet if u cry this way I can neva be happy here just remember 'distance can neva break our relation neither closness can build it the truth is ull always remain a part of mine' U are a part of me geet!!! this truth can neva change whereva u are and howeva u are


Geet: yes mama I am a part of u and will always remain till my last breathe


Rano: I know beta par tu toh jaanti hai na I cant talk to u all the time bt I am happy if u are happy u are getting my point right?


Geet: yes mama I am getting ur point


Rano: toh bus I am happy that my child is independent now she is capable enuf to live her life on her own wat more can I wish to babji for geet? Now its too late go to sleep

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Geet got up from the steps still feeling bad for not being there with her mother on her bday, she took the arthi thali draped her dupatta over her head started walking towards the idol of maa durga


Geet(st): maa mujhe nahi pata ki mujhe khush hona chahiye ki nahi ek nayi jindagi mili hai mujhe har maa apni beti ko sirf ek baar jindagi deti hai par meri mama ne mujhe do do baar jindagi di bus meri maa ko koi takleef naa aaye bus itna kardena aur haan mere babaji se main naaraz hoon unse keh dena ki main unke paas tab tak nahi jaaongi jab tak ek baar wapas main mama ko naa dekhon kehdoge na??


Tears strickled geet eyes and she looked at the idol one last time and came down the temple that's wen she observed her anklets one of them is missing she cursed herself god it was the possession of her mothers she dropped the thali down completely loosing her senses and started searching for them.(this geet is always careless first with chotu and now with payal)


It had been two hrs and still geet cudnt trace out her payal. Her eyes were getting blurr with the unending tears just then her cell rang


Meera: geet ab tak nahi mila?


Geet: nahi meer pata nahi kaha kho gaya god how can I be so reckless I am'''. Wen meera cut her


Meera: geet u are searching for it since two hrs baby agar milna hota toh mil jaata na? tu waise bhi scooty leke gayi aur meri office hai geet tu wapas aayegi toh main tujhe dance classes mein drop kardongi phir then I can leave its getting late ab wapas aaja


Geet: one last time meer agar nahi mila toh pakka promise ill come home


Meera: thik hai if u aren't starting in 10mins I am telling u mujhse bura koi nahi hoga saying this she cut her call.

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Maan: (on fone) aadi I am telling u ill reach office in just an hr and I want all the blueprints to be ready on my table u are getting my point? Ull be fired if I don't find them


Maan was struggling hard to make aadi understand his talks and uff the lines are so disturbed that he was yelling on him literally and cut his call and moreover the car tire got punchured. He was in a foul mood.


Here Geet again started searching for the payal aimlessly just then she bumped into a hard rock chest, her hair strands fell on her face and she stumbled with her steps bt she was quick enuf to compose back she inched away from him. Maan cudnt make out her face as her hair was acting as veil. He started shouting on her


Maan: dekhke nahi chal sakti? U useless girl how can u bump into any random guy this way?


Geet was already crying ,her throat went dry listening to his harsh words. She muffled her soabs placing dupatta on her mouth.


Maan: ab maine aisa kya keh diya ki tum rone lagi?


Geet looked at him painfully unable to take his words. Her eyes!!! so beautiful so captive. They seem to be so familiar to him a course of dejavu ran through him.


Geet was too numb to react she moved away from him as if he she was not listening by now she figured out he was the one who had put up an argument with her in the park and disregarding his talks she started searching again. Her talks with mama were playing in her mind still and she got so engrossed that She hit her leg onto a stone and cried loud getting all prepared to hit the ground anytime that's wen maan moved towards her clutched her wrist firmly and clamped his hand around her waist preventing from falling geets hair strands made way to maan giving him a glimse of her face . He made her stand on her feet and started ranting


Maan: oh toh tum ho? Kya hua aaj kuch nahi bologi? Uss din toh badi badi baatein bana rahi thi? Toh aaj kya hua? Ek kadam chalne mein bhi takleef hoti hai tumhe? Kisse dhoond rahi ho? Apne chotu ko? He roared


Geet was already fed up of searching for the ankelt for a long time and now its late getting into arguments with this man means sher ke mooh mein haath dalna and moreover she was warned by meera to get back soon all her words died in her throat she did not reply


Geet(st): iss insaan se toh baat karna hi bekar hai geet kal se kya kam pareshaan thi ki yeh mujhe aur pareshaan karne mein lage hai better if I leave now


Maan shook her asking for a reply bt she got out of his grip looked at him with anger filled eyes and walked away got on her scooty and drove away leaving maan all shocked just then Nt came back and called him bt maan was busy looking somewhere looked at maan's direction


Nt: whom are u looking at maan?


Maan: nothing bhabi its'its just tyre got punchured just wait for a lil time other car is on the way saying this maan hit the rim of the wheel frustratingly. He found a metal piece shinning near the wheel he bent down and picked it up it was geet's payal.


Maan(st): oh toh madam was busy searching for this. He looked at the payal and placed it in his pocket (badla jo lena tha geet ko rothe dekhna kinna acha lagta hai maan ko )

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Meera: geet its late night now kab tak uss payal ke liye aise pareshan baithegi? Soja na


Geet: tu jaa meer mujhe neend nahi aarahi


Meera: dekh geet miljayegi aise rone se kuch nahi hoga I am sure kisi ke paas jaroor hoga


Geet: tu pagal hain? Kaun dega mujhe mera payal? Mera prince charming''.. idiot


Meera: haan tu bus aise hi samajh ab aaja aur so jaa meri maa


Still geet did not move.She had been sitting on the balcony since mrng bunking her dance classes crying for the anklet like a zombie. Left with no option meera called heer and told abt the payal to heer. She knows only heer can get geet out of the depression


GAYATRI VIDYA MANDIR:

Geet was walking towards gayatri's cabin wen she heard someone was crying she stopped in her track and looked at the boy


Geet: karthi? Beta y are u crying?


Karthi: Miss I am out of the cricket team ' sir has thrown me out as my mom complained that I am more into cricket than my studies and moreover my maths marks'''..


Geet: bt karthi u did well maths this time results are yet to come u solved it again infront of me how can ur mom do this?


Karthi: she is not trusting me miss plz do something results will be out on our annual function day till then I can even attend the interskul cricket meet

Geet: don't worry ill have a talk with ur sir


Geet assured the sports master that karthi will fare well in the academics too and asked him not to tell anything abt karthi being a part of the cricket team to his mother


Geet: ur work is done karthi now stop crying


Karthi: miss how will I practice now? We just have two days left


Geet: don't worry tomorrow is Sunday so come to my house we will practice ok?


Karthi was overwhelmed. Its not the first time in a month that geet is helping him she always does that. He just loved geet so much not only him bt krathi too. Geet then left to meet gayatri


Gayatri: geet I asked u something y do u want to go early today?


Geet: aunty woh heer di and me has decided to go for shopping today and I have no classes to take so plz lemme go na plz


Gayatri: (smiling' geet was looking so cute like a kid how cud she say no to her) ok u can go


Geet: thanks aunty

saying this geet came out of the skul and got into the car which was parked on the otherside of the road where prem and heer were waiting for geet


Geet: chalo ab main aagayi wats with u two now? Mujhe aise kyun bulaya??


Heer: kiddo u wanted to watch ****** movie na toh lets go prem has also taken an off for u


Geet: mujhe pata hai tum dono meri mood thik karne ki koshish mein ho but di how cud I be so careless? Its completely my fault di


Heer: mil jayegi geet dont cry baby


Prem: cry baby stop it now it happens rone se kuch nahi hoga trust me ull get ur payal back


Geet: aap meri mazak uda rahe ho na bhai? Kal meera bhi yehi keh rahi thi Kaun dega mujhe meri payal?


Prem who understood that this girl is just impossible so he changed the topic


Prem: geet ek baat bolo heer tumhari di hai aur main tumhara bhai? Yeh kaisa logic hai yaar? Ya toh u take me as ur bhai so that heer is ur bhabi or take heer as ur di and ill be ur jiju


Geet: (smiling with the tears)ok then I choose bhai and bhabi geet looked at heer and said be it di or bhabi she is also like mama to me na


Heer was awwed with geet's words and hugged her tight


Prem: oye hello u two ladies can I join? Heer and geet noded in negative and pulled him too into the hug


Prem came to know abt geet's family from heer and now both prem and heer started taking care of her. He is now more possessive abt geet being his sister. Just a word and he will do anything for her. He asked geet to move into his house bt she did not agree saying she is happy the way she is and if she really feels the need to do it she wud deffo do it.


PRECAP: galli cricket 😉 (no details)


yaar i din know that u ppl can gimme those many likes agar pehle pata hota toh i wud have did the same bt for now i got above 50 likes for the last update so my next update wud be after i cross 50likes with this update

and yes iss update mein payal ko yaad rakhna plz coz payal do do baar wapas aayega


and with my last update many of my silent readers have turned sound thnks to all of them and i have replied to all of u


@maneetlover1,@nehakapoor,@18mypride,@remya_pillai,@impoojaverma,@-neelam-,@love_2_soma,@urme,@deepa,@monikaseth thanks so much i had g8 time reading ur comments


@aashluvsmaan(ek aur maan deewani username mein hi maan ka naam),@riddhima,@mansi.tripathi,@LILY111144 thanks for commenting my newbies😆


P.S: I GUESS THIS UPDATE WUD BE BORING BUT PLZ ITS INDEED A NEEDED ONE COZ THIS PAYAL HAS SOME IMPORTANCE LATER


TO ALL MY READERS

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iK7eh0jhEEs&feature=plcp

Instead of being the next somebody can I plz be the 1st me

LOVED THE QUOTE SO DEDICATING


previous part: part7

next part: part9

Edited by dreamyharika - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

wow me ist👏 G anklet WITH M ,wow awsme prt wating 4 more

Edited by LILY111144 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update dear
loved it
oh poor geet lost her anklet
and moreover it was given by her mom😭
she searched teh whole place without any success
thsi maan😡 kabhi nahi sudrega hamesa geet ko kahri khoti sunata hai 😆
but abhi khari khoti sunayega to in future he would make her listen lovely dovely romantic poems na 😳
wow galli cricket this is the thing i want to read i m dam sure that geet woudl hit the ball and it woudl go to KM and it will land in maan's head🤣

continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
ROFLLL..

beta dont be confused over the name..

mai maan se zyaaada kisi aur ki deewani hu..:P:P

awesome update waise...:)

khadoos singh khurrana ko koi manners sikhao yaar!

missed chotu..:(
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesme update again di
poor geet missng her mom on her bday
aww she lost her payal n maan se abhi takrana tha kya
geet ka toh time ki kharab hai ek toh payal koh gayi n upar se maan se takragayi..
Aww my maan shockd cng her silent
and tyre ki itni himat o punchur hogayi use pata nahi shayad msk ko gussa ajatha toh toofan ajatha hai..bt i just love ths maan infact i love my maan in everyway..who can stop frm lovng hm he n hs killer luks hayee
oops!mein cment ko chod maan ki dreamland mein chaligayi kya karu my maan hai hi aisa
nw galli cricket maza ayega iam sure geet wil end up in meetng msk again
btw payal sahi jagah pahunch gayi mere maan ke paas
waitng eagerly for next
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Posted: 13 years ago

amazing update dear

poor geet uski mom ki payaal gum ho gyi

nd dis devil maan badla lena zaroori hai chahe kuch bhi ho jaye afterall baat ego ki hai

nd missing chotu in dis update

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