Pyar Ki ManZil..Part 12 in Page 82 - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
Very nyc
Very good


Me too wait for next...
Loved the part...start with GeetBirthday :)
All the best
my sweet sis vanshi
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
👏NIce update dear... Waiting 4 more!!😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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An angel getting ready infront of mirror'who loves to dream abt her Hottie'Her Future'!!!

She was getting ready to go to college n upon tat she was so happy n excited tat she will go to manvi's house like always..bt today she was sure she vil met him n she wished tat today pakka she would meet Her MAAN...HER HOTTIEE..

She was getting ready..putting eye liner seeing the mirror..when she fell sumone gaze on her'.she turn around n saw maan seeing her lovingly..she was on 9th cloud'she too staring her MAAN..lovinly

jus den she was disturbed by a call'she picked up the call

n kept at hold n saw again towards bed were maan was sitting..she saw no one was der..she was dreaming abt him....(me: hayyee one side lovestory so dreamy')

Just den she remember she is on phone n see itzz manu she got excited'


bt manu taking class of geet..

Manu:oyyee devil ki bachi kaha hai tu..sab aa gaye hai..agar tere maan bhai uff tere hottiee ke sapne dekhne ka katam ho gaya ho toh aap mere sorry sorry apne sasural aa sakti hai'

Geet: (self-thought) isse kaise pata chala ke main hottiee ke sapne main khoyi thi'den sumthing strike her tat still she is on phone'so she says manu main bas 5 min main aati hu'

Just den she sees herself n smiles luking herself

den she takes car keys..n headed towards her gonna-b 'soon sasural'

Khurana Mansion


(thanxxx to sam my shona 4 dis pic)

She reaches a bit late der'

manu angry wid her'

Geet goes n touches feet of dadi'n greets her..n hugs dadi

Geet:gud morning dadi maa'

Dadi maa:good morning bete kaise hai aap..?

Geet:main thik hu dadi maa 'dadi manu or sab kaha hai..

Dadi maa: (teasingly) Manu ke bare main puch rahi ho ya kisi aur ko dhundh rahi ho..

Geet :umm..err..naii dadi maa main manu ki or sam virat gunjan unki baat kar rahi thi haan..
she composed herself..

Dadi maa::ohh theek hai sab manu ke room main hai..jayiye upar..manu gusse me hai aapse.

Geet:jee dadi maa'n she goes up wid a smily face..

As soon as she enter

Gunjan :cumes n hug n kisses her on her cheek n say hiii meri sweety jaa mana apni manu ko'


Geet goes to manu wid smily faces n holding her hears n says SOLLY Manu'apni bhabhi ko maaf karde pulseee(by saying bhabhi manu melts everytym)

Manu:chal maaf kia..
so manu virat geet sam n gunjan chit chat in room'Meanwhile in sumother room'a hot sexy dude cuming out frm bathroom after having shower'


(Me:kitna hot lag raha hai mera hottie sexy maan)

He changes himself in formals n get ready 4 office'

He gets ready n 4m downstairs a old lady calles MAAN bte niche aaiyee'

It was MAAN SINGH KHURANA the famous business tycoon..HEARTHROB..girls die to get one glimpse of MSK'


Maan:jee dadi maa..niche hi aa raha hu main'

Manvi Bedroom...

Manu:chalo late ho raha hai college ke liye chalet hai..
All:acha chal chalte hai'

Geet was wishing tat today she vil meet her Hottiee'

She was in her thoughts..she came back to d world wen manu said chalo'! Chalo'!chalo..!

So they all move towards downstairs..n Even Maan heading towards downstairs'

Manu virat sam n gunjan reaches downstairs also..but geet is still up wishing to meet her Hottie'Other side maan was checkin some office files'
Both busying in deir work none of dem saw eachother n walks 'just den both MAAN and GEET hits each other'Geet was abt to touch d ground'but suddenly two strongs arms encircled her.n saved her to touch d ground..coz of tat Papers were flying in air'wich maan were having'
Geet was so lost in her Hottie's dark brown chocolaty eyes..uske alawa use kuch nazar nai aaya'
both lost in eachother'


Just den Maan's cell rings..it was Alisha wo called'he makes geet stand on her feet n say
Maan:excuse me plzz'n goes away to attend the call..

Again humari geet was lost in his voice..first tym geet heard her Hottie's voice infront of her..

Just den Virat called her'
Virat:hooyyeee my dreamy queen jaldi niche aa'

Geet goes down'

All greets dadima a good bye..Dadima says bubye n pecks in everyone's forehead all pecks her cheeks'

N dey all move towards the college'

Precap: Maaneet Meeting again...???

previous part: Part -1

Thanxxx to my didu(umme),shiffu,veronica,shona(sam),nd sumaiya saba n Maahi zaidi wo helped in pics n eveything'Made u all run for pics'

Luv❤️ ya..

~devanshi~

Edited by vanshi_maaneet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
super duper...longg commnt kal karooongi caz 2dy i hav to rush sooo be ready to read aa longg commntt...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsome update...

haaye dis geet is always dream of her mr. hottie!!!!!

Edited by impoojaverma - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
nice part...
so finally maan n geet takara gaye...
bt yeh alisha...ufff
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
wowww ...
super update yr... luvd it...
hmmm hayee hottie... geet fell in hotties arm... hayeee...
waiting fr nxt...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58

beautiful update...

loved it...

but who is dis alisha...maan dosent knw abt geet?...m little confused...

thank u very much fr such lovely update...


continue nxt prt soon plz...


eagerly waiting...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: love2_soma

beautiful update...

loved it...

but who is dis alisha...maan dosent knw abt geet?...m little confused...

thank u very much fr such lovely update...


continue nxt prt soon plz...


eagerly waiting...


Alisha is Maan's gf...n maan doesnt know geet..but geet knows man very well...Dear read prlogue n cs..all ur doubts vil b clear...
n thanxxx 4 dis beutiful comment..thanku..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
part 2
lovely...
yaar size is incredible...
does Maan even know about Geet?
cont soon dear...
pm me plz...

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