Pyar Ki ManZil..Part 12 in Page 82 - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sorryyy couldnt update it...bcoz of net problem...


sooo here's the first part...hope u all like it..!!

Part-1
Dis is a special morning 4 sumone who is sleeping like a baby...

she was so deep in sleep tat her phone is ringing from last 1 hour

It was geet handa sleeping like angel'

Atlast she got up from her sleep'n opened her eyes n got the biggest shock of her lyf'


Her friends Armaan, maanvi, samrat, virat n specially gunjan r standing infront of her having a baby angry face'
she didn't understand y all were angry on her'so thought to ask dem'
b4 she could utter a word
gunjan said: sweeto dear can u plzzz check ur mob.. Once'

Geet checked her mob'n was stunned to see so many missed calls frm dem'

she thought to asked dem is any problem der'
Geet: hey guys'wat happened..?Any problem..

All burst into laughter'confused geet asked Guys y u all r laughing' r u all gone Mad or wat'
Maanvi : Geetu tu sachi pagal'aaj tera ki khaas din hai..aur tu bhul gayi OMG'
Partner dekha geet bhool gayi har sal ki tarah.


Virat:haan partner yeh toh expected hi tha ki ye devil bhool hi jayegi'Samrat Gunjan ab tum dono hi bol do aaj kya hai..n once again maanvi n virat started giggling..

Sam n gunjan: sweeto Happieee birthday'.(dey shouted)
Maanvi n Virat :geetu devil Happpiieee b'day..

Geet was sooo happy tat their frnds remember but she didn't..she said all thanxxx guys luv u all.
All:we love u sooo much'.
*group hug'*

All went down'her hai n bhabhi greeted geet'
In dining table all were seated'
Rishi:hey guys tum log ko toh pata hai aaj hungama hone wala'means a Grant Party'
full on masti'

So u all guys know wat to do'n yes invite all your frends n ur family to join us'

Maanvi: rishi bhai Dadi aa jayegi par Maan bhai..

Rishi:Manu tu tere bhai ko bolegi toh wo kabi naa nai bolega try toh kar'
Manu:thik hai..rishi bhai..N yes Indira babs n u bhai..vil b best couple in d party em sure'(Me:manu aaj koi aurr hi best couple hoga😉)
by dis comment..Indira blushed n said Manu chup'

Rishi:so girls will have a mask..n boys nothing'

Geet:wow tats so cool..no boys can recognize deir partners'bhai u rock'

Rishi:okie bahut baate ho gayi'ab kaam main lag jao..,boys..
As girls r going 4 dey fav hobbie shopping'

Time Passes away'
sum how maanvi manages her bro to cum to party'
all girls were looking so attractive any boy could fall 4 dem'
Geet looking gorgeous n sexy...angel descend frm HEAVEN..

Maan dashing dude..in black n blue

but all were paired Viraat-maanvi,samrat-gunjan,Indira-rishi..

Geet was not paired but was wid all'
dadi use to have chit chatting wid deir frends wo she met der..
Maan all left alone in d party..

But soon'
Rishi:ladies n gentlemen..can I have ur attention plzzz'so as u al know today is my sweety my cutie pie..geet birthday..
hope u all r enjoying d party'.itzz tym 4 sum dance'all have to choose dey partners'so basically u have to pick a paper in wich ur partner names vil b written n u ave to pair up'
So lets start'
all girls took dey paper..(all girls did cheating as dey wanted deir respective partner)
so it was sam n gunjan'virat n manu'indira n rishi..n more 2 or 3 couples'

Now left was geet'she opened d chit n said a name wich written on it..she read out n was "Maan"

Wen maan hear it'he was shocked..but after her sister said plzzz say yes 4 atleast for her not 4 geet'so he said yes'

Maanvi was so haapyy bcozz she wanted geet to be her bhabhi not tat Alisha(me:manu chinta mat kar jald hi geet bhabhi hogi terii:P)

So all wid dier dey partners started to dance'
even Maan n geet..Maan couldn't see geet face properly bcoz tat mask was blocking his way to see wo it is'

MaaNeet started dancing'It was romantic song'Kurban hua'(guys me bad in writing song sequence so not writing)

While dancing..geet was so lost in Maan'4 her it was love at first sight'she was checkin him out..his M shaped lips..his body'his muscles'so lost wich didn't go unnoticed by all except Maan..who was trying to see here n dere..
geet was Love wid him'But all she know wat him was he his d great business Tycoon Maan Singh Khurana Maanvi's bro'

Kehte hai naah pyaar kab kaha kaise ho jata hai kisi ko nai pata bas pyaar ho jata hai..same was wid geet'

she was madly in love wid him'.n would maary maan only no one else..

She was soo haapyy dat on her special day her bday'she got her love her life'

From dat day all use to tease Geet wid Maan'even Maanvi n manu's dadi wo knew everything'wen she saw maanvi teasing geet wid maan on mob..even she was happy tat geet Handa Loved maan..n vil get rid of tat so called Gf of Maan Alisha'

Edited by vanshi_maaneet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
lovely start dear...
so geet loves maan
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely start👏
love at first site from geet😳
plz maan ko geet ka chehra jaldi se dikha do
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sahhii jaa rhi h yaar...keep it up...intresting prt.!! update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
Awesome work baby... wow love at first sight happened with Geet... 😆
hope Maan will also fell in love with Geet soon... 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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gr8 start ! loved it ! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsome work dear

love at first sight!!!!!!!!! liking it

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