Pyar Ki ManZil..Part 12 in Page 82 - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
hayee shoo cutiee update dear luvd it👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
Awesum update..
Maan dint gave her a second look..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63

4 PMing me...😛


dear...👏👏



ur all updates r just ...



the job up dear..👏..



keep ing dear...😃
lov,❤️
Tama
NOTE: SORRY FOR SHORTEST COMMENT EVER AS U ALL KNEW ABOUT MY EXAM THAT'S WHY.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
lovely updates. waiting for the next part😊.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
Awesme update hayee geet is drooling over msk n cmpletely mad for hm..waitng for their next meeting
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very sweet update...
Like it







Waiting for next...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67


Part - 3


dey all move towards the college'

Soo dey all ready to go to college…even maan ready to go to KC…

Manu sam virat n gunjan used to go in geet's car..but today by unluck(Me: or I should say luck *wink*)

Geet ki car puncture ho gai…

Geet::shit..!! car ko bhi aaj hi puncture honi thi…

Sam: ab kya karenge…

Manu:kuch nai …meri car main chalte hai

Virat:yeah..chalte hai…

All: : Ok chalo…

Geet:: Okie chalo…manu ki car main baitho…

All headed towards the car..

Sam gunjan n manu made themselves sit on back seat..n virat on front seat n driver…so left was geet…

Geet:: aab sab baith gaye…ab main kaha baitu…saying by making baby face…

Gunjan was gonna get down just den manu saw her maan bhai cuming out…she held gunjan hand…n by her eyes saying her dnt get down…

Gunjan made confused face…den manu showed her by eyes maan cuming n wink gunjan…

Gunjan understood…n stopped herself…

Geet was full confused tat no one get down or say anything…

Den she heard manu shouting top of her voice…

Manu: Maan bhai….Maan bhai…

Maan came near her..n asked wat happened

Manu: Maan bhai…aap meri ek help karoge..

Maa: :manu tuje kabhi nai bola hai maine..bol kya help chahiye..

Manu :bhai wo kya hai geet ki car puncture ho gai…aur ye car bhi full ho gai toh kya aap geet ko college chod sakte ho pulseee pulseee makin baby face…

Maan: :manu plzz mat bol…chal thik hai mai tere frend ko college chod dunga…khush abb..

Manu :thanku thanku bhai…

Maan smiles … other side Geet was shocked and excited n nervous tat she vil go alone wid maan…

Manu winked at geet…n geet blushed…

Manu n her car zooommm se chali..

Ab rahe sirf humare maan n geet ufff maaneet..

So maan n geet headed to Maan's car..

Maan Opened car door for Geet…geet was sooo happieee..

Geet sat …den maan on driver seat..

Maan started the car…

Both seated n maan plays the music player…

(Link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1Q82f_vdHIM plzz hear dis song…SAIBO from SHOR IN THE CITY…its one of my fav…so used 4 my fav couple MaaNeeT….Thanks to rachana chag 4 dis song…)

Music…,

Maan Yeh Saheb Ji
Jan Hai Sab Ji
Phir Bhi Banaye Bahane

Naina Nawabi Ji
Dekhe Hai Sab Ji
Phir Bhi Na Samjhe Ishare

Geet noticing maan…without getting caught..

Geet ke liye it was like dream cum true…

Usne job sapne dekhne maan ke saath…wo dheere dheere sach wo rahe hai…

It was full romantic weather…n two lovers alone in the car…

Silence takin place..but air is talking their volume…

Geet ki heart beat….hi keh de maan ko I love u…par naa keh sake…

Jaha Geet ki aisi halat thi…she wanted to talk wid Her Hottie..but didn't understand how she would start..

Maaan Yeh Saheb Ji
Haan Karta Bahane
Naina Nawabi Ji
NA Samjhe Ishare

Geet trying her all ways to talk wid him…par lagta hai her voice was stuck in throat..
Bahane dhodne lagi…par kuch kaam nai aaya…
Ishare karne lagi lagi…Par maan Na sajhe ishare…


Dheere Dhere Naino Ko Dhere Dhere
Jiya Ko Dheere Dhere Bhayo Re Saibo


Dhere dhere geet apne aap ko uske hottie ke aankho main kho gayi…

Use aise lagne laga jaise usne jannat paa lee hai…par sach hai maan uska jannat se kam nai…

Geet was saying in her mind "I could not tell you if I loved you the first moment I saw you, or if it was the second or third. But I remember the first moment I looked at you walking toward me and realized that somehow the rest of the world seemed to vanish when I was with you."



Surkhiyan Hai Hawaon Mein
Do Dilon Ki Milne Ki

Ho Ho Arziyan Hai Nazaron Mein
Lamha Yeh Tham Jane Ki

Kaise Huzur Ji Yeh Lab

Love is the air….do dil milne ki dua hai…

Rumours are on their way in the air…saying each other tat aaj koi phir se ek prem kahani likne wale hai….jaise heer – ranjha .., romeo – Juliet.., laila – manju…aise hi Maan Aur Geet ki prem kahani likhi jayegi..

Geet was just wishing tat dis moment jus stop here rite now with her hottite yeh lamha yehi tham jaaye


Chuppi Bhi Lage Ke Bhi Gazab Yeh Dhaye

Dheere Dhere Naino Ko Dhere Dhere
Jiya Ko Dheere Dhere Bhayo Re Saibo

Dheere Dheere Baiga Dheere Dhere Apna Sa Dheere Dheere
LAage Se Saibo


Naino ki aawaze keh rahi hai "This is going to sound crazy, but... from the moment I first set eyes on you I haven't been able to stop thinking about you."

"wenever she closed her eyes she wouls see him and She open her eyes and met him"


Music….


"I felt I was dreaming and thinking and feeling you. I dreamed about you, wanted you --and then I realized that truly I just wanted you n ur dreams..n ur happiness..."

Geet was lost iin herself thinking of him…whereas maan was staring…her beauty..he was thinking…how can sumone be so special…so beautiful…

First tym maan was saing like this….he neva felt like dis wid tat Alisha also….but here he was feeling sumthing strange…dnt know y he was getting attracted to her…

Both lost in themselves…..dey reached college 10 mins b4 itself….but lost in their selves…

Den dey hears manu"s voice 4m long distance shoutings…GEET GEET GEET…!!!!!

Geet…and maan came back to their senses n were feeling akward to face eacother…geet toh blush kare jaa rahi thi…whereas maan was watching her from corner of his eyes…

Geet couldn't control her…so she get down…n says

Geet: Maan ji….

Maan was so happy he was feeling like his name was called by an angel…(Me:sach hi tohhai geet angel se koi kam nahi…)n tat ji was sounded pefect…maan cuming back to his senses wen again geet called him…

Maan: Haan Geet ji…

Geet :thanku muje chodne ke liye Maan ji..

Maan :its my pleasure….Geet ji…shayad appko late ho raha hoga lectures ke liye..

Geet:haaan main toh bhul I hai thi chalo Maan ji bubye…meet u soon…she blushed…

Maan: bye…I too hope we meet soon…
both gave each other a big smile…

Geet was on 9th cloud by tat breath taking smile…maan was feeling some strange feling…but trying to ignore….

Geet holded tat smile and went into college n met everyone…


PRECAP : All teasing Geet ….n geet cheeking full red..
where as Maan trying to ignore Alisha n his feelings….


thanxxx for ur love u all showed me in previous part it encourages me..

finnaallyy done...wid it...was really very nervous it dis part...as dis is my first tym i am writing song sequence...plzzz say me whether i was fair wid or not...leave ur likes n comment...


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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
superb
loved it
songs was so perfect
my fav songs...

love the update
Edited by Mayamaan - 13 years ago
sdlife19 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
loved the update ya...
geets feeling were beautifully described
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
maneet finally interact 😊 dis song is just perfect on our lovely couple 😊 awesome part. cont soon..
ps : pls cont d same font size, d last tym words were veryy huge but dis is gud😳

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