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Posted: 12 years ago
part 6
nice part...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update dear
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks for adding me vanshu

read all the 6 parts

maan is attracted towards her

waiting for next part.


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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks for adding me

read all the parts

loved it geet getting jealous and maan getting attracted

waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
ur update...😳
keep ing dear...😃
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NOTE: SORRY FOR THIS TOO SHORT COMMENT AS MY NET IS IT"S CRTICAL CONDITIONAM
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Posted: 12 years ago
vanshi update next part waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally gonna update on thursday pakka

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Posted: 12 years ago



Sorryyy for not updating from one month...first i was held up wid mah studies n exams n den mera pc kharab ho gaya...n now my legs n hands r paining due to full day dance practice...
me reaalyyy sorry...but vil try to b regular from now-a0days...main kaan pakad ke badi smile se sorry kehti hu..moving to update

Part -7

Someone caught her attention n she shouted Stop. At the very moment Maan Stopped the car n Asked Geet wat happen..

Geet: Niche Utharye Car se (get down from the car first)

Maan : But why

Geet: Puleeejjj Uthariye

Maan n Geet gets down from the car. As soon as they gets down Maan asked again

Maan: now sayy did we get down at this place at this moment

Geet : uffooo Mr.khurana have some patience vil say u she points her finger towards Golgappa stall n said lets go there.. I wanna have golgappa

Maan : No ways..! em not gonna let you to have dis unhygienic food

Geet : its healthy food'pllzzz lets go..If you have once'u vil never stop eating

Maan: roadside food is not healthy

Geet: aise nai hai'Roadside ke golgappe ki baat hi kuch aur hoti hai'aapke uss restaurant se bhi zyada roadside khana acha hota hai

Khaata meetha golgapee. while saying dis she was licking her lips..

Chaliye nahh Maan
maan: ok ok chalet hai but zyada mat khana

Geet (under her breath) : Sadu kahi ke

Maan: tumne kuch kaha

Geet: nai toh chailye ab n she drags maan to golgappa stall

Geet was so excited like a baby gets a new toy..even geet is not less than a baby..she is young but still behaves like a kid at tyms

N geet had two reasond to be excited as eating golgappa n tat also wid her hottie her dream boy her life

Geet had been queen of the college her beuty is all reflects her heart

All guys wants her..but she give a damn as she just belongs to her Mr. Right tat is Maan

Her Childishness is wat wich makes all bend infront of her like dis how she made the famous business tycoon Maan Singh Khurana bend infront of her

Geet: uncle..golgappe do naah

Person :bitiya theeka ya meetha

Geet : jii uncle .. muje toh theeka chahiye


Uncle: (towars maan): beta aapko

Geet: uncle inko golgappe khilana matlab shaitan ko swarg mai bhejna

Uncle : matlab bitiyageet : matlab yeh ki inko toh bas wo firangi khana ki pasand hai..inko puchege naah toh shayas mera golgappe khane ka b mauka chale jayega

Maan felt insulted finally spoke out as wenever he tries to talk geet starts talking..

Maan: uncle muje b teekha do

Geet was shocked n her Mouth went O shape n was thinking is it dream or wat MAAN SINGH KHURANA IS EATIMG GOLGAPPE IN A ROADSIDE STALL

I GUESS news channel waale ko toh ek headlines mil gayi

Geet: maan pinch me

Maan: kya

Geet: u heard right pinch me..!

Maan pinches her

Geet : Ouch..! itni zoro se koi pinch karta hai kya

Maan: tumne hi toh kaha tha pinch karne ko

Geet: haan kaha tha par iss tarah nai

Maan: toh kiss tarah pinch karte hai

Geet: batau (show u )

Maan: Next tym..u know naah MSK ke liye faltu things ke liye tym nai hota

Geet : Hawww.. u mean me faltu

Maan: Waahh'Finally tumne sachai ka pata chal gaya

Geet: chaddo.. meinu baat hi nai karni aapse

Geet turns ..,not letting maan to say anything n see d golgappa wala uncle who is smiling

Uncle :Bitiya.aise naaraz nai hote apne PATI se..wo toh aise ched rahe the tume..

Maaneet hears n sees eachother wid a shocked face..
Geet(coughs): uncle ye mere pati nai hai

Maan: haan geet sahi keh rahi hai

Uncle: muje laga aap dono pati patni ho..Kyuki aap dono ek dusre ke liye bane ho aise lagta hai (me:uncle ab made 4 each other hai toh lagege hi naah *wink* )

Geet hiddenly blushing..n man coughs n seeing here n there trying to avois di topic

Maan :uncle..aap golgappe dijiye n iss chatter box ko b

Geet: aapne muje..muje chatter box bol rahe hai

Maan: Nai toh'main toh tumare side main jo ladki hai usse keh raha hu

Geet sees at tat side no one is der

Geet: waha koi nai hai matlab aapne muje kaha hai

Maan: atlast akal aa gayi atleast thodi der ke liye samaj aa gaya ki main tume chaater box bula rahi hu

Geet: Agrrhhh'aapse baat karna hi bekar hai

Meanwhile uncle says lijiye golgappa so that they stop deir nok-jhok

Geet: Acha hua aapne jaldi bana dia

Maan : haan uncle dijiye

Uncle: bitiya yeh lijiye


Uncle gives her n geet eats making sounds while eating n licking of her lips n says wow uncle kitna mast bana hai aur theeka banaiye naah

Uncle: Bitia aapko teekha bahut pasand hai

Maan: uncle..yeh kya puch lia aapne geet itni teekhi hai zahir si baat hai teeka khana pasand hi hoga.

Geet: aap naa'chadoo..uncle golgappa dijiye n INHE bhi *stamps her foot in anger*

Uncle gives maan golgappa..he eats n tears starts forming in his eyes n his eyes b'cums red due to dis chillness'he usually never had so much chill.sudden chill made him restless..n he starts coughing


Geet gets scared n takes water bottle n made him drink but still tat chillness is der so geet says uncle to give only puri wid meeta pani wich made Maan relax a bit

Maan: tum itna teeka kaise sehen (bardasht)karti ho

Geet: muje toh isse b zyada teeka chata hai

Maan was amused n says hogaya ho toh chale sab waha intezaar kar rahe hoge

Geet: haan chaliye

Uncle: aap dono humesha khush rakhe

Maan gives money to uncle n both leaves


Uncle smiles n wishes : Bhagwan inn dono ko Jodi ko aise hi banaye rakhe

Maan n geet sit in car'n casually talks

Maan: geet tumhari fav colour kaunsa hai

Geet: mera red n aapka

Maan: muje white

Maan stops the car as traffic de' a boy cums there wid bunch of roses towars geet window side

Child: didi'ulaab le lijiye nah..taaza taaza hai

Geet :acha muje toh lal rang ke gulab dedo

Boys gives her n she says white b do. He gives she gives money..

Child : shukriya didi..khuda aapki sari dua puri kare

Geet: aur bhagwan aapko hamesha khush rakhe

Child goes n geet gives roses to maan

Geet: take this ur fav white color roses

Maan: thank you but u have it as I dnt like roses..take it as I gave u *a big smile* (Me: gonna faint wid dis smile n maan gives rose to geet hayyee :D) n u like kids

Geet: Like'.I love Kids

Maan: tum khud ek bachi ho

Geet: kya

Maan: kuch nai

Suddenly geets mob rings..she picks but no one answers'again it rings same no one answers'again it rings it annoyed her to the core..she picks n started shouting

Geet: U idiot stupid gadde ullu ke phatte sharam nai aati ladkiyon ko pareshan karte ho..pagal Kamina kahin ka

Person: ohho toh aap ladki hai..apne gender kab change ki..

Geet(fumed in anger):u Moron..ek toh main gussa hu..Manane ke bajae tum muje aur gussa dila rahe ho..Tum chante nai main kaun hu

Person : tume toh main bahut achi tarah se janta hu..par shayas u dnt know wo am I..

Geet: hehehe aise bol rahe ho jaise kit um SRK ho

Person : who toh nai hu..par jab mera naam sumogi toh behosh ho jayegi'

Geet: pehle naaam toh bolo phir behosh hongi ya nai dekh lenge

Person: yaar agar behosh ho jaungi toh tume pakde ka kaun..main b toh nai hu yaha

Geet: tumhe hone ko b koi zarurat nai hai..muje pakade ke liye koi aur hai (me: haan Maan hai nah*wink*)

Person:hey bhagwan deka aapne isne muje chod dia aur kisi aur ko pakad lia

Geet: oh hello u kamina over dramatic banne ki zarurat hai..maine pakda hi kab tume jo chod dungi'pehle apna Naam bolo..??

Person : mera naam janna chati hi

Geet: chup chap naam kya hai bolo

Person : mera naam hai _______________________


Precap : A New entry😛😉😆

Geet: "Mah Fav Place In All World Is JUST NEXT TO U"😳


Pulleeejjj like n comment wich encourage me further to writer...n me saying thanku to all wo likes n comment on my ff...

love u all,
vanshi

Edited by vanshi_maaneet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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firstly sorry for the late comment ...i knw it irritates to see an " R " on ur first comment place ...😆

back to the update ..

awesom work meri jaan loved the narration to the core ...n maanet nok jhok is always a joyful moment to enjoy ...😉

hayee geet was soo excited 4 the gol-gappa party with her hottie ...😃
but as always MSK too damn worried 4 the hygiene of his geet ..
aweee geet hai na uss ko manane ke liye ..after all who can resist this sweetie pie ...😳

Geet: uncle inko golgappe khilana matlab shaitan ko swarg mai bhejna


lol ...what a line girl ...🤣

well i have soo much to quote here i guess i can quote the whole update over so all i can say is ..

loved the dialogue n the scene was way too good thnks for the smiles u gave me last night ..

Uncle smiles n wishes : Bhagwan inn dono ko Jodi ko aise hi banaye rakhe


zaror banaye rakhega uncel ...kyun ke agar aisa nahi huya tou ill make sure ke yeh madam writer sakoon se nahi reh paaye ...😆 😛 😉

Maan: thank you but u have it as I dnt like roses..take it as I gave u


Mahi ve Mahi ...MAhi ve ...😆


but who is this new entry ..?? 😕
seems like its maan turn to get ...J

looking ahead whats nxt in stores 4 us ...

once again thnxx for this lovely update ..
n keep giving us these happy happy moments ..
aur woh bhi jaldi jaldi ...warna mujhe iss baar bhi bhul jayega tumne last kiya update kiya aur mene kiya parha ...😆

update soon

Luv Ya
Sobia ..



Edited by sobia4maaneet - 12 years ago

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