Pyar Ki ManZil..Part 12 in Page 82 - Page 15

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Posted: 12 years ago



hey Vanshi...

very interesting teaser...

u asked whether we like ur FF or not...

I want to ask u one question and hope u will give answer honestly...

u updated this FF last on 7 august and now it is 28 august and after so much time u are giving only teaser then what u expect from ur readers...how can we decide whether we like this FF or not when it is updated only 5 parts...it takes some updates to make a grip and interest of readers on the story...

I hope u will not take much time now to update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Devanshi 🤗...thank u for the awesome updates...lovely teaser...waiting for the update...plz continue...TC 😊


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Posted: 12 years ago

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waise MSK jis bhi avatar bhi hoo ...larkiyan tou uss pe FIDA hain hi ...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Part - 6
Everybody goes outside as college hours are finished n even maan is waiting outside…..

As soon as they go out they see a dashing sexy heartthrob hunk standing der near the car wearing sunglasses…looking like sexy hero. His one glimpse can kill any girl (even me*wink*) …Here MAAN SINGH KHURANA standing outside n here near him all girls going gaga abt him…Poor boys not getting attention as all attention is given to D great MSK.



Seeing sum girls open mouth seeing maan , sum seeing wid desireful eyes…BUT one GIRL seeing him wid PURE LOVE and that is GEET
she just wished just go and hug him tightly. She controlled herself and started walking wid everyone.

As geet walked her excitement incread yet had a little bt of nervousness in corner of her heart…

All reached near maan…they greeted each other…Maan was having chat wid them firstym (I guess) except wid manu n geet

Maan: hiee guys. College tym over..so em sure koi ghar jaane wala hai nai…so wats plan now..?

Sam: yeah college tym over n masti tym starts

Virat : so wat r we waiting for..

Manu : yeah lets go..n bhai u shld also cum pulssee pulse…say yes…dnt say NO

Maan : Okie…lets go as even I dnt hav any meeting to attend…lets do one thing I will call Rishi n Indira also..kya bolti ho manu..?


Manu :haan bhai Lets call dem also.


Geet : rishi bahi aur bhabs ko..?

Just den Maan knew tat Geet is sister of RISHI

Maan : yeah…Rishi , Indira and myself were good friends in college tyms n even now..

Geet (st): Acha Jii Isliye bhai ko hottie ke bare main itna kuch pata hai,,,bhai ya bhabhi kisi ne bhi muje pehle kabhi bataya nai k Hottie unke dost hai

Manu: Oyye devil apne little se brain ko kis liye pareshan kar rahi hai..kya soch rahi hai

Geet : kuch nai I think we should make a call to bhai

Maan : yeah wait I'll call him

Maan calls rishi…after little tym Rishi picks up

Maan: hey dude..Its mee Maan

Rishi :hey… I guess em not blind. I can see ur name flashing on mah mob…😛😛

Maan : u never change

Rishi : MSK ne muje…Muje call kia hai…aaj tuje fursat mili hai apne meetings se sab jab jaake tuje yaad aaya ki ek tera dost bhi hai Rishi Naam ka…waise aaj call kaise kar lia

Maan : who main college gaya tha TERI behen ko pick karne toh waha paunch kar sab ne bahar jaane ka plan banaya hai so ur coming wid tat idiot INDIRA

Rishi : tu order kar raha hai ya puch raha hai..n tu meri behen ko kyu lene gaya hai..?

Maan:Order jaise hi samjh le n teri behen ki car kharab ho gait hi mere ghar ke waha …n use college jana tha par manu ki car bhi houseful thi den manu requested me to drop n pick her..Isliye lene aaya hu

Rishi : okie n Indira ko le aaunga Pakka
RIshi was happiee from Inside that maan geet r together 4 sumtym ATLEAST…n even rishi thinks tat maan deserve the best not like tat ALISHA…who is jus back of money…rishi wants maan to get the girl wo loves him purely n good from HEART….and even he wants geet to b wid Maan as geet love him insanely can do anything for her Hottie

Maan : so u both cum to XYZ place

Rishi : vil u in an hour der

Its takes one hour to reach tat place where maan has said

Maan :chal okie meet u der wid UR indira

Both bid bye to eachother n cuts the call

Maan : they both r cuming to XYZ Place

Virat:wowww tats beautiful place…an ek long drive jaise ho jayenga …its really gonna be lots of fun …wat r we waiting for..LETS GO

VIRAT MANU SAM N GUNJAN IN ONE CAR WID DRIVER

MAANEET IN ONE CAR WIDOUT DRIVER (main khabab main haddi thodi naa dal sakti hu )

~~~IN MANU's CAR~~~

Manu :itna lamba safar n bhai geet alone wow weather is also perfect lagta hai kabhi bhi bearish ho sakti hai

Gunjan :Haan yaar…Geet ka sapne dheere here sach hone ko ahai

Here everyone one is happie 4 dey really cutie pie yet devil GEET

***MAANEET' CAR***

Maan n Geet both donno how to start their talks….Maan was feeling restless y is she so quiet…Sumhow he makes himself ready to start the talk

Maan : Geet Jii..kya baat hai…aap chup hai..?

Geet : kuch nai…aapka day kaisa tha..?

Maan : it was fine…How was urs…?

Geet : {<st> aap chodne aaye aur lene aaye toh zahir si baat hai mere din best hi hona tha } It was nyc..btw Were r WE Heading towards

Maan : to XYZ place…I Love to visit der

Geet : wow…I too love tat place... Waise em sorrie, mere karan aapko apni important Meetingchodke aani padi…

Maan : Sorry Mat bolo…Actually I should say thanxx to yew..jiske karan rishi indira n myself are Meeting after a long ttymm Plus Yew all r also der…so vil have loads of Fun..!

Geet was haapiie wid his reply..

Geet n Maan both were enjoying eachother's company..Silence was prevailing in d car…
suddenly Geet thought y to be like stranger so she forwards her hand



Maan Made a confused look by which a smile formed on Geet's lips

Geet : ohhoo Maan jii aap kitne Buddhu ho..MR. MSK kya aap iss Pagal si Geet se dostii karenge…She said chooo chweetly maan thought to pull her cheeks n agar koi bhi aisi cute face banake dosti ka hand puche ga toh enemies bhi friends ban jayege…

Maan :ohh toh aapne ye hand friendship ke liye badhaya hau…Par Meri Ek shart hai..(but in one condition)

Geet :ab wo kya hai…said by making baby face


Maan: TUM mera saath kabhi nai chodogi...whenever i need yew..U vil be der
Geet: I am alwys Der...Aisa samjh ye ki main aapke liye hi hu...

suddenly Geet realized what she said n says maan tat I mean aapki achi n best dost banker bataugi…

Maan : Pakka Saath Dongi TUM MERA HAMESHA

Geet : Haan .PakKa Promise…n haan FRIENSHIP MAIN NO SORRY NO THANXXX samjhe…?

Maan :ache se samjh gaya…

BOTH shake their Hands...



Both touched each other's hand wich made them shiver by each other's touch…both gives each other a big Smile…geet toh total fida on his smile while Maan was thinking wat a smile…how pure n Nave she is…

Geet loved to see outside via window while going out in car…Its like a hobbiee to her…

While seeing outside sumthing caught her attention n she shouted STOP….!!!!

Maan stop the car the very moment geet shouted


Precap : reason behind geet's STOP 😛 😛


Done with the 6th update...Sorry 4 giving it late...was held up wid my studies...Shower ur likes n comments it means alot to me...love to read all ur comments...

Love ya..,

devanshi (vanshi)

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Posted: 12 years ago
woo awesome part...
every1 wants geet n maan to b together.. bt yeh maan uff... koi nai jald he wo bhi yeh he chayega...
so.all out for hving fun.. great...
n maaneet ki frndship bhi hi gai... n woo kys promise kita hai..
ab is stop piche mere hisab se 1 he reason ho sakta hai.. golgappe...
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Posted: 12 years ago
update love it maneet friendship and i think geet stopped for golgappe or for other food



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Posted: 12 years ago
superb awesome update...
hayeee... MAANEET dost bangaye... 😊
ab lovers banna bhaki hai!!
all are happy for MAANEET... im also...
waiting for next...
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Posted: 12 years ago
dear...😃
4 keep PMing me dear..😊..
n me not comment ...actually my net crused down .😭..
but now me cheack all updates ...me just dear..😛.
4 ur hard work.👏..
the job up dear..Clap..





keep ing dear...😃
lov,❤️
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NOTE: ME'LL NOT COMMENT OR VISIT THEM ..WHO NEVER BE ON MINE..ME ONLY ABLE TO THEM WHO ALWAYS WITH ME
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Posted: 12 years ago

woo hoo this was soo sweetie cutie update ..

MSK n talking with all of them soo cooly ...me dreaming his killer smile ..

geet n maan on drive ...

noe weather is also at mercy ...

manu is such DARLING ...

yrr sab ko pat a hai k maan ke liye geet hi best hai not that alisha but humare maan babu kab samjhienge ,,

hmmm chalo pyaar ka ek kadam tou utha dosti ..!!

now me waiting to see whts more in stores for us ..

hope car rukne ka reason koi cutie sa hoo ..

update soon ..
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Posted: 12 years ago
its awsmmm dear... kya teaser dia hai..
luvly😛

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