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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update yar loved it a lot
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update.😳
waiting for the next.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
it is best update waiting for next

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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 22

after a moment both decided to come out of the fall...both were cold and wet...their heartbeat was fast...the moment that passed between them was still fresh in their memory...both were silent not knowing what to say now...after a while maan broke the cold silence between them... ahh geet I think we should change or we will caught cold and turned his back to her' geet just nodded silently and looked at him turning his face'she didn't realized the reason but just stayed silent'he pointed to the tent and said' there are the clothes you purchased today for me' you change into the shirt and I will into jeans there is not anything with us now and I had sent back the car so we can't go back to hotel too' she went inside and came back to give him his jeans and went back inside to change in his shirt'all the time he was looking at everywhere than her

She was about to remove her dress when she noticed her whole dress was wet and transparent... every curve of her dress was visible from the thin material hiding her private parts a little bit with her essentials'. her body temperature raised with an instant realization' the reason because of which he was not looking at her'now it was more difficult to face him now but then her heart quarreled that it was only he who can see her like this'

she removed her dress and changed into his shirt' it was a semi transparent shirt that gave a good view of her sexy and perfect body'. it just reached middle of her thighs covering just her private part' oops now how will I face him now'. its more embarrassing than before'. she touched her lips remembering their private moment' and touched her lips' they were swelled with the pressure they applied on it and were burning with a churning sensation in her stomach'.

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chup tum raho chup ham rahen

After a while she went outside and saw him in just his jeans and nothing else'.. he was sitting beside fire to warm his cold body' she went opposite to him and sat down too'she could feel his burning gaze all around her' it was making her too nervous' she was continuously pulling his shirt to cover her white milky skin as if it will stretch because of her pulling'. she could feel herself getting more cold because of his penetrating gaze and thus looked at everywhere than him'.

khamoshi ko khamoshi se zindagi ko zindagi se baat karne do

he saw her coming and sitting in front of him' oh god she was looking more beautiful than ever even without a single tinge of makeup' he could see her half clad body which was giving him more access' it was difficult to turn back after the kiss' it had given him a new hope' hope of being with her'. hope of having her all for himself' he so much wanted to declare his love for her at the very moment but it seemed as if his lips were sealed' he can't speak anymore' he noticed her shifting nervously under his gaze and pulling her shirt'. it was just making him more difficult to control himself'.she was one of the wonder of the world made by god' he could feel her cold an tensed outside and just did what the most appropriate he thought at the moment'.

chup tum raho ...

geet saw him moving and standing from the corner of her eyes' he was closing the distance between them' it was just raising her expectations' he came toward her taking small steps and bend down toward her' without a single minute wasting he took her hand and pulled back making her stand in a second' he was all the time having his eyes locked with her'. he pulled her toward him making her fall on him' and pressed his lips on her soft ones' he was softly kissing her this time not rough like previous one'. his hand took hold of her hands and put them around his neck placing his owns around her waist' he was softly chewing and nibbling her already swelled lips raising the temperature of her cold body'she was just enjoying the moment without making any effort'.he slowly gained entry in her mouth and was tasting the sweet nectar' he was slowly exploring her whole mouth giving her the pleasure of lifetime'

aankhon mein kho jaaye aankhen bole haathon se haath

After a while they broke apart feeling lack of breath'. she was burning with his touch and this time he knew it was her shyness'its truly said' the one who has more anger has more love too' he lifted her n his arms and took inside their tent' there were two big sleeping bags' he placed her inside one of them and covered her properly' gave her goodnight kiss on her forehead and raised to move toward another one'

baahon mein chupkar saanson se jaise dole raat

geet immediately hold his hand and moved aside turning her back to give him enough space in the same bag' he understood her signal and settled beside her' both didn't knew what to say now' there was no need of words anymore'.the bag was big but still their body was fully touching each other'.his bare arm was touching the back of her spine from the thin material' whereas her nude legs were touching his fully clad legs' the mismatch was giving a new sensation throughout their body' he could feel her body getting cold due to the sudden drop in temperature outside'.though there was a heater but still she was turning cold so was he' the sudden rain rose the temperature unexpectedly'.

ungaliyo ko ungaliyo se mausamon ko shokhiyon se baat karne do

he slowly kept his arm below her waist to pull her toward him'. she was herself not liking the distance and willingly moved toward him'he turned her around making her face him' she had her eyes close and senses all alerted' he loved the blush that adorned her face nowadays'he liked his effect on her' he pulled her more close leaving no gap between their body' they were in the hugging position'his cold hands were roaming on her whole back over the material to warm her while hers on his bare back' she just loved the feel of his toned cold back under her hands'her face was in his neck nuzzling there'. he could feel her softness pressing his hard chest and her buds getting harden with his touch' he was just losing his control now having her so close and he was feeling possessed of her' she too wanted to have him more close but didn't know whether it will be right or not'..

honthon par honthon se likhe bin shabdon ke geet

after a while her cold legs got entangled with his ones'that made him loose his patience and he turned her on her back coming on top of her' she was biting her lips expecting his next move' he pressed his thumb on her lips stopping her in mid' she looked at his eyes deeply while he closed the distance between their lips'.they were just inches apart when he whispered on her lips''they are mine and only I have the right to bite them'she just lost her senses in his shameless words' how easily he possessed her as his' well she knew she was only his and no one else now'

dharati se ambar tak guunje jismon kaa sangeet

he planted soft kisses in the corner of her lips'. he was just arousing her to no extent'she entangled her legs around his waist' he slowly pressed his lips on hers at the center' she immediately parted her lips as an impulse'.it was a reflex action'he gained entry and was exploring her insides'.she tasted so sweet'.her nectar was giving him a heavenly feeling'.he was surely gonna insane now'.his hands went below her messaging her back and the deep neck'.while hers were busy in exploring his bare back'their tongues entwined and they played their own game...her soft legs and his rough jeans was creating a new sensation in them making them move to their own dreamland'.he was soft but she didn't liked it as the first one' she liked him rough' she bit him carnally making him bleed'she was acting as a wild lioness'.it just took their sensation to an entirely new level'..

bekhudi ko bekhudi se aashiqui ko aashiqui se baat karne do

chup tum raho ..

after few minutes which seemed like an eternity they broke apart'he could see her tired self due to the whole day exhaustion and now his sweet torture on her'he slowly kissed her eyelids closing them'.she immediately understood his unsaid words'.maano ab to uski khamoshi bhi uske dil isse bayan karti ho'.he gave her a good night peck on her forehead and turned back and pulled her over him slowly patting her back'.soon she drifted to a deep slumber giving him the most beautiful gift he could ever ask on their first anniversary'.

chup tum raho chup ham rahen

it was early morning when the morning sun waked them up'geet opened her drifty eyes and saw her fully lying on him'.her every part was touching his'he flashes of last night were still in her find'. especially the waterfall'.oh she just fell in love with the massoorie air'if possible she would have settled here itself with her maan'yes her maan'only hers.. she just loved the feel of the word'.it gave her the sense that she owns him now forever'..she does not wanted to name it love now but she was sure that it is not less than love too'.she always wanted to be in love once in a lifetime but was fully confident that there is not a single specie who will love her fully her true self but he did'he not only handles her anger but also changed her into someone she never thought of..

she saw he was getting disturbed by the rays coming inside' she slowly pulled herself above to cover him from the rays'.his face relaxed feeling shade'her hairs were all around falling as a curtain around their faces protecting them from the entire world'.

soon he woke up and saw her still lying on him and staring at him'.she wished him morning and gave a kiss on his forehead'.it was the first time she herself made a move toward him'.morning can't be better than this'he pulled her from waist and gave a quick pack wishing her back' he looked at the time and realized it was around 6'gosh they were late' geet get ready we are going back in 2 hours' her face fell hearing the news'..he looked at her sad eyes and lifted her chin making her face him' geet you have an important class today and for that we have to go back' she hugged him tightly' I don't want to go its only 2 days we are here'.jaan in 2 days we have seen the entire mussoorie and mainly it was weekend so I planned it'but now you have to join college today'can't we stay more for a single day I love this place'.we will come back again or go anywhere you will say'ok now get ready'she sadly nodded fully disagreed by his sudden decision'.I don't have any clothes how will we go back' I have called hotel last night to send our car and some clothes by 5' it may be outside I will check you stay inside'. he went and came back with a packet containing their clothes'.firstly geet changed then he changed and moved to their hotel for picking their luggage which was already packed by the staff'

All the way back geet's mood was highly low'. he tried to cheer her but nothing worked'they reached airport still she was just looking down'. finally not finding any option he pulled her in a lonely corner and gave a passionate peck' her cheeks immediately colored with red blush and an instant smile as a child got his favorite candy' feeling better now asked maan' she just slowly nodded making their way back to Delhi

so its a long one i need long comments otherwise i will delay the next update..😛...

next update after 200 likes and 75 page of comment

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Edited by neha512 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved the passionate love b/w maaneet
yaar 200 like is k
but 80 pages comment dont u think its way too much
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abinash079

awesome update

loved the passionate love b/w maaneet
yaar 200 like is k
but 80 pages comment dont u think its way too much

AHH DONT WORRY I JUST WROTE IT I AM NOT THAT STRICT😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

awesome update...

loved it...

geet dose nt want to go back...bechari...feeling bad fr her...magar maan ne toh maana hi liya na...


thank u very much fr such lovely update n also fr d pm...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

eagerly waiting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing Update 😃

Loved The Passion Between Maaneet 😳

Awwhhh Poor Geet..Didnt Want To Leave The Place 😆

Maan Giving Her A Kiss To Make Her Feel Better 😳

Loved It 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update dear loved the part how u explained the beauty of mussorie and their romance was too gud dear...continue soon...👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesme update dear
just lovd it
hayee geet smiled when maan kissd her
wow wat a way to enlighten her mood
cnt soon dear

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