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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 03



It was midnight when the usual animals get up.Animals like wolves,jackels r shouting at hoarse & one of the wolf is shouting painfully calling it's babies who hv scattered everywhere.After sometime the jackels shouting was heard which was the shout of their families who's calling to feast the prey which has been captured by their one of jackels.


Then a castle was seen which was old and worn out.It's walls paints were worn off & it looked like an haunted castle.Those haunted castle had so many stories as the history.


After half past midnight,a woman walked towards the castle having the blank expression holding a beautiful jewellery which was ruby encrusted diamond necklace.She walked completely blank as if she has been possessed with someone.As if someone is instructing her to go there in her mind becoz no one was there with her to instruct her.


This woman was so beautiful...she had bright hazel almond eyes which had turned completely blank...long white nose...baby pink luscious lips.Her stature had resembled the angel fm the heaven but she didn't had the idea what she was doing in front of the haunted mansion holding a ruby encrusted necklace.


This woman was Geet Handa & she crossed the gates of the haunted mansion.Geet walked towards the courtyard of the haunted mansion where there was a big well.Geet climbed the steps of the deep well & saw the depth holding the ruby encrusted necklace.


Geet saw her reflection in that water & threw the ruby encrusted necklace into the well.Geet turned & went downwards & walked outside the haunted mansion & walked towards her home.Geet's home was beside two house right past the haunted mansion.


Geet walked back to her home & entered her home silently & closed the door silently.Geet climbed the stairs & went inside her room.Geet lied on her bed & slept comfortably.She was fast asleep after that second as if she was in deep sleep.


No one saw her coming & going to the haunted mansion & she slept peacefully.Next morning and angry shout came from Geet's house,"Bhabhi...bhahbhi...!!!!!"Geet ran towards her sister-in-law's room shouting hoarsely with panic.Geet rapped her knuckles on her door shouting,"Bhabhi...bhabhi...!!!"Dolly Geet's sister-in-law woke up with the jerk hearing the rapping sound and saw towards the door.


Dolly got up immediately and opened the door and Geet entered inside immediately,"Bhabhi...!!!!!!"Dolly saw her rubbing her eyes and asked,"Kya huva Geet..tum itne pareshan kyun ho?????"Geet said panickly,"Bhabhi..meri necklace ghum ho gayi hai...!!!!!!"Dolly said,"Kya????Lekin kaunsa???"Geet said,"Woh jo aap ek hafte pehle aapke friend ke shaadi mein pehna tha na..woh...mein kal raat ko hi dekha tha uske box par par aaj dikh nahin rahi hai...!!!!!!"


Dolly said,"Lekin wahan se kaise ghum ho sakthi hai Geet...yahan koi chor nahin aata..aur humaare security guards toh chaubeeso ghante chowkidaari karte hai aur yeh kaise ho gaya?????"Geet was crying immediately becoming panic,"Pata nahin bhabhi..ab mujhe bahut chinta hone laga hai agar Dev aajaeynge tab is necklace ke baare mein poochenge toh mein unhe kya jawaab doongi...!!!!"


Dolly was a bit weary now but she said,"Chalo..wahi jaake dhond lethe hai...shaayad ab mil jaaye!!!!"Geet nodded and both came to her room and started searching the necklace but it wasn't found.Geet was mad now and she was mumbling with panic that what happens when Dev asks abt the necklace.


Dolly's eyes welled up seeing Geet's state and she resisted her tears immediately.Becoz Geet still thot Dev is alive.After few hours all the servants were running here and there and was searching the necklace and Geet's family saw her helplessly.Rano was seeing her daughter in that state as she was so panic and restless and was searching the necklace restlessly mumbling abt Dev.


On that time Pinky came there to invite Geet for her marraige and observed Geet instructing the servants to search the necklace in those places.Pinky saw the scene with amusement but when she saw the family standing in the corner seeing Geet with pain then she understood that something wrong with Geet.


Pinky called Geet,"Geet...!!!!!"Geet turned and saw it was Pinky who called her and said,"Pinky tu mere liye help karegi...!!!!"Geet dragged her into the middle of the courtyard and said,"Dekho mera ek necklace ghum ho gaya hai..tu sirf in sabko instruct kar ki kahan dhoondna hai aur mein abhi aayi..nahaakar aati hoon...kyunki Dev ko achcha nahin lagtha haina..ki mein zyaada der tak aise hi rahoon..woh daantnge mujhe..unki biwi hoona..mein unki saari baatein toh maan ni hogi...!!!"


Geet blushed furiously when she said the word biwi.Pinky nodded and Geet went fm there immediately to freshen up.When she went then they sighed with relief and saw towards Pinky.Pinky asked,"Yeh sab kya hai bhabhi..Geet aise kyun behave kar rahi hai...Dev ki maut huve ek mahina ho gaya haina..lekin yeh kya baat kar rahi hai...!!!!!!"


Rano started crying hoarsely while Mohinder patted her back gently while Dolly said,"Pinky yeh aisi behave kar rahi jis din usne Dev preji ki mrti shareer dekha tha..woh maan hi nahin rahi hai ki Dev praaji mar chuka hai..abhi bhi unki raah dekh rahi hai...!!!!!"Pinky saw towards the way where Geet went while Geet shouted fm the room to Pinky.


Geet shouted to Pinky,"Pinky mila kya meri necklace????"Pinky said,"Nahin Geet..abhi abhi dhoond rahe hai...!!!!"Geet was disappointed and cursed the servants,"Yeh naukaron ke haathon ek kaam bhi theek se nahin hoti...!!!!!"And she wore her dress and came downstairs while Pinky had something for the family were so happy.


Geet asked eagerly to servants,"Mila woh necklace????"Servants nodded no to her then she shouted so hoarsely that everyone saw her with shock.Her angelic face has turned into a strange rage for which they saw her with fear.Pinky observed this and fell silent while Geet asked seeing Pinky,"Pinky tu yahan kaise????"


Pinky said,"Geet kal mere shaadi ki reception hai aur tumhe dilli aana hi hai...!!!!"Geet's smile faded and said,"Mein nahin aavoongi wahan...!!!"Pinky asked,"Kyun???"Geet said,"Arrey wahan aavoongi toh sab log mujhe poochenge ki mere pati kahan hai..aur Brij veerji unhe dhoond hi nahin rahe hai...kyun nahin aa rahe hai...ab mein nahin aa sakthi wahan par...!!!!!"


Pinky said smiling,"Sahi kaha Geet..yeh log toh waste body hai tumhaari ek kaam bhi nahin karpaaye..isiliye apna kaam khud karni chaahiye...doosron ke bharose par chodogi..toh kaam kabhi nahin hoga...!!!"Geet made grumpy face & asked,"Toh kya kiya jaaye???"Pinky said,"Ek kaam karo...mere reception par aajaavo...wahan par tum dhoond sakthi ho Dev ko..kya pata woh wahan aajaaye...!!!!"


Geet nodded cutely and said,"Theek hai mein kal tumhaare reception par zaroor aavoongi...!!!"Geet smiled cutely and took the invitation card & ran inside her room talking to herself,"Mein Dev ko dekhne jaavoongi kal...!!!!"Pinky saw her with teary eyed but she gave thumbs up to her family and went from there.


Next morning once again she lost pair of ear ring and she once again troubled her sister-in-law also.But Dolly convinced her and made her to go to Pinky's reception.Geet dressed herself in beautiful red mixed with green color lehenga with minimal make up and came in the car and got down fm the car.


Geet was mesmerised with decoration and saw it was just like Dev had the taste with the decoration.Geet thot that she's entering inside the essence of Dev which was her imagination and she bumped to someone and was abt to fell over the floor but a pair of strong arms caught her waist & saved her by falling.


It was none other thank MSK who saw the girl whom he was holding.Maan was mesmerised with her beauty as he noticed her bright twinkling hazels which was gaping at the decoration.Then he noticed a strange pain inside those bright hazels which were windows of her soul.


Then he saw her long white nose,baby pink luscious lips which he had the urge to taste it.Her bulging white curves which was giving a glimpse to him making her beauty swell in that traditional dress and jewels.Maan was mesmerised seeing her beauty and felt someone is punching him from their small fist.


Maan came to present world and saw it was the girl who was trying to wiggle out of his grip.Maan left her immediately and saw her perfect shape of her waist which was exposing from the side cuts of her lehenga top.Maan wacked himself mentally and saw her angelic face which were pouting and mumbling something.


Maan tried to concentrate on her pouting what she was pouting and came to conclusion that she is pouting in her mind.Geet said angrily,"Tum samajhte kya ho apne aapko..haan..dikhta nahin hai ki mein shaadi shuda hoon...!!!"She flashed her mangalsutra on his face for which he noticed it with shock.Then he noticed her feet which had the ring which she wore on her fingers of her feet.


Geet said angrily,"Akele kudi ko dekha nahin ki aagaye chipakne...!!!"And she went from there angrily.Maan saw her gaping but he felt slight pang in his heart unknowingly that she's married.Unknowingly his eyes welled up as if he's abt to loss his priceless possession.Maan was abt to go but Pinky stopped him and said,"Maan bhaiyya..jisse aapne abhi abhi mile the woh meri dost hai aur woh ek vidhwa hai...!!!!"




Precap-Maan knowing abt Geet fully from Pinky...😊



Previous Part 02-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3026432/intezaar-zindagi-ka-updated-pt-05-pg-23?pn=10


Next Part 04-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3026432/intezaar-zindagi-ka-updated-pt-05-pg-23





Edited by geetsrir.maan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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geet mentally ill maan in pain to know geet married pinky clearing his confusionupdate



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Posted: 13 years ago
#64

beautiful update...

loved it...

so maan is going to knw abt geet...dekhte hai kya hota hai...

thank u very much fr such lovely update...


continue nxt prt soon plz...


eagerly waiting...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
fabulous dear...
geet ka eh haal dekar dukh hora hain...
aur maan knw tht she is married his pain was written too good...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
she is till not believing that he is dead..

maan in his first meeting has fallen for her..

continue soon..

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
part 3
is Geet possessed?
why is she dropping the jewels in the well?
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
Lovely update.
Maan fida over Geet pehli mulaquat mein.
Precap interesting.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
awesome feeling bad for geet maan only bring her life back waiting for more updates love it
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
GEET IS POSSESSED THAT SHE KEEPS THROWING HER JWELLERY IN THE WELL
MAAN FELL FOR HER AT FIRST SIGHT
WILL HE HELP HER GET BETTER

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