INTEZAAR ZINDAGI KA-UPDATED PT 05 PG 23 - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
#71
awesome update
loved it
awww finally maaneet meet
ufff geet ne frist meets main hi maan ka dil tod diya:(
superb precap...maan knwng wat happen wit geet
waiting 4 nxt...cont.soon
thankx for pm


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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
poor geet!!
she s so much in shock!! feel bad 4 her!!😭
n maan.. seems 2 b love at first sight for him!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
beautiful update 👏
i was getting scared at the beginning about a haunted castle 😭
but after i read it further i was even more shocked to see that Geet threw the necklace in the well so late at night 😲 then she doesnt remember anything in the morning 😲 cant wait for Maan to find out the truth about Geet 👍🏼 the story is so lovely.. you're building it up wonderfully..
thanks for amazing update and pm too 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
read all 3 parts in 1 go..
awesome
different as maan is pshychiarist here..
geet will be now cured by maan..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow lovely dear,...actually i missed 1-3 parts sorry...but now i finished reading...wow lovely start now my maan cure his geet...waiting dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
awesome update loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
great start dear...but i am confused with the haunted mansion thing. Was it her dream?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 04



Maan tried to concentrate on her pouting what she was pouting and came to conclusion that she is pouting in her mind.Geet said angrily,"Tum samajhte kya ho apne aapko..haan..dikhta nahin hai ki mein shaadi shuda hoon'!!!"She flashed her mangalsutra on his face for which he noticed it with shock.Then he noticed her feet which had the ring which she wore on her fingers of her feet.











Geet said angrily,"Akele kudi ko dekha nahin ki aagaye chipakne'!!!"And she went from there angrily.Maan saw her gaping but he felt slight pang in his heart unknowingly that she's married.Unknowingly his eyes welled up as if he's abt to loss his priceless possession.Maan was abt to go but Pinky stopped him and said,"Maan bhaiyya..jisse aapne abhi abhi mile the woh meri dost hai aur woh ek vidhwa hai'!!!!"












Maan asked Pinky,"Pinky agar woh vidhwa hai toh usne mangalsutra ko kyun pehna huva hai aur shindhoor bhi????"Pinky made a sad face and said,"Kyunki woh aaj bhi samajhti hai ki unki pati Dev Rathod zinda hai'.bhaiyaa aap hi ab Geet ko bachaana hoga nahin toh woh aise hi apne duniya mein paagal ho jaayegi'.!!!!"Maan felt a pain inside his heart unknowingly and said her name,"Geet'..!!!!"Unknowingly a smile crept on his M shaped lips and he felt d name musical.











Maan asked as a doctor,"Lekin unhe kyun nahin smajhaaya gaya ki ab unki pati zinda hai aur isme mein kya madat kar sakta hoon??????"Pinky said,"Bhaiyya'Geet aaj bhi samjhti hai ki Dev zinda hai aur jab usne Dev ki mrit shareer bhi dekha tabhi nahin maani woh'..pls bhaiyya i beg of u pls usse theek kardo''!!!!!!"Maan said,"Pinky mujhe uske baare mein sab kuch bataavo'..!!!!!"Pinky said,"Bhaiyya mein aur Geet dono ek hi school mein padte the Geet was chirpy,bubbly and non stop chatter box..humesha uski naadaani sab ko achcha lagta tha phir hum dono bichad gaye apne apne studies ko pursue karne ke liye aur uske baad'Geet ke zindagi mein Dev aaye''!!!!!"











Pinky said,"Dev aur Geet ki meeting kuch alag hi circumstances mein huva'.kyunki Geet was captured by a band of terrorists'.jab woh tour ke liye Delhi aayi thi aur jab oberio hotel was captured by terrorists'..us waqt Captain Rathod Geet bachaaya tha kyunki one of d terrorist was abt to rape her but was saved by Dev''hum dono bhale hi nahin mile the lekin Geet humesha mere saath Fb mein baat karti thi ussi waqt hi Dev ko Geet se pyaar ho gaya''.!!!!!"











Pinky continued,"Geet,Dev se bahut pyaar karti thi aur Dev Geet se''phir ek din Dev ke maata aur pitah Geet ke yahan usse maangne aaye tabhi darji ko bahut khush huva kyunki Dev unki maa baap ke iklouta waaris tha..aur wo dono raaj si khaandaan se hai'..Digvijay Rathod aur Drishti Rathod dono Geet ko dekhkar bahut khush ho gaye kyunki Geet ki maasoomiyat aur bachpani mein woh dono kho gaye yoon samajhiye ki unhe unki beti mil gayi thi'.aur Dev se shaadi karvaadiya lekin unhe toh Geet bahu se zyaada beti hai'.lekin jis din Dev jung mein shaheed ho gaye us din unki saari umeeden chali gayi aur woh log Geet ko apni maayke chodkar chale gaye kyunki shaadi ke baad parivaar ki jaaydaad Geet ke naam par hai aur unki rishtedaar Geet ke jaan ke peeche padgaye'.isiliye Geet ko yahan chodkar chale gaye London'aur yeh bhi kaha ki Geet ki doosri shaadi bhi karaade taaki woh achche insan ke haathon mein rahe'..pls bhaiyya aap meri Geet ko bachaayenge na????"













Maan smiled at her and said,"Arrey Pinky tujhe request karne ki koi zaroorat nahin mein tumhaara bhai hoona'mein usse theek karoonga'.lekin usse pehle mujhe aur Dev ke baare mein bahut kuch jaanne hai''aur bhi'.ab mein usse milna chaahtha hoon'yeh sab tab hoga jab tum usse mujhe introduce karvaaoge''!!!!"Pinky smiled and nodded and said,"Jee bhaiyya chaliye mein unse milaavoongi'..!!!!!"The reception party was taking place while Geet was searching Pinky.Pinky said seeing Geet,"Geet!"Geet saw her and ran tyo her and hugged her and said smiling,"Am so happy ki tum shaadi kiya hai aur mein Adi veerji se bhi mila bahut hi achcha insan hai Pinky u r so lucky he loves u so much'..!!!!!"












Pinky smiled and hugged her back and said,"Geet yeh Maan bhaiyya hai mujhe aur Adi ko milaane waale bhai yeh Geet hai'.Mrs Geet Rathod'.!!!!"Geet felt awkward seeing Maan as she was d one who cursed her for misunderstanding him nd saw him nervously while Maan gave a warm smile to her for which her nervousness vanished into thin air.Pinky said,"yahi hai jo tumhe help karne waale hai Dev jiju ko dhoondne mein'.!!!!!"Geet's eyes widened with delight and said smiling cutely,"Hi'Geet Rathod'!!!!"











Maan was astonished seeing her acting calm and eyed her suspiciously but hid it immediately from her.Maan took her soft milky white palm and shook it but he felt a current run down his spine holding her hand.Geet was unaware of this feeling and felt like she's shaking to a friend and gave a cheeky smile for which MSK was fida.Then Maaneet became friends very soon and started searching Dev or hv to say in Maan's view he's collecting abt Dev and in Geet's view Maan is searching d Dev.











Maan got a information abt Dev's friend Sameer who was d colleague and co-soldier who was fighting in d war on that time.Maan took Geet to his house as Sameer was taking rest due to injured leg becoz of d war.Geet asked curiously,"Maan hum yahan kyun aaye hai????"Maan said,"Geet hum Sameer ke ghar aaye hai aur yeh humein bataayenge ki Dev kahan hai'.!!!!"Geet saw him eagerly and said,"Yaani ki yeh humein bataayenge ki Dev kaha hai?????"Maan nodded to him and Geet unknowingly kissed his cheek with excitement and said,"Oh Maan thank u so much mein bhi unse milne ke liye tadap rahi hoon..unse sawaal toh poochloon ki tadapaane ki wajay kya hai''..!!!!"











Maan was stunned feeling her soft supple lips on his rough cheek which burned him with desire.Maan eyed his desireful eyes on her twisting soft supple lips which were inviting him to kiss it'..bite it''devour it.But he controlled himself as he hv to concentrate on his work.Sameer's wife Disha led them to his room and Sameer was relaxing peacefully.Sameer saw d two and felt that they r made for each other but kept d thot to himself as he hv to convince Geet now that Dev is dead.











Maan shook his hand to him,"Dr. Maan Singh Kkhurana''!!!"Geet folded her hands and said,"Namastey'mein Captain Dev Rathod ki biwi hoon Geet Rathod'..!!!"Sameer shared pleasantries but Geet got restless and asked angrily,"Maan hum yahan unke haal chaal poochne ke liye nahin aaye hai hum Dev ke baare mein baat karne aaye hai'.!!!"Maan said immediately,"Geet ab Dev is duniya mein nahin rahe hai woh shaheed ho gaye hai''..!!!!"Geet said angrily,"phirse jhoot'kyun aap bhi jhoot bol rahe ho Maan''!!!!"She started crying hoarsely while Sameer's wife was apprehensive seeing her state.












Sameer said immediately,"Yeh jhoot nahin sach hai'..kyunki mein hi tha unke saath unke aakhri saas tak'..!!!"Geet was shocked and saw him with stun..when Geet dint say anything Sameer proceeded to his story.Sameer said,"Hum wahan lad rahe the dushman par hu bhaari pad rahe the tabhi ek goli mujh par shoot kiya gaya dushmano se lekin Dev sir beech mein aagaye..aur mujhe bachaane ke liye unhone goli apni chaati par le liya'.!!!"Geet's eyes widened immediately and her inner turmoil started and her mind started asking questions.









Precap-Geet's complete breakdown and Maan discovering that where Geet's jewels vanished'.




Previous Part 03-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3026432/intezaar-zindagi-ka-updated-pt-05-pg-23?pn=14


Next Part 05-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3026432/intezaar-zindagi-ka-updated-pt-05-pg-23


Edited by geetsrir.maan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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mind blowing part dear maan ne geet ka dost bankar uski problem solve karne ke liye koshish kar rahe hain...waiting for next

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