NEW MG FF 'WOH LAMHE' part1- page 2

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Introduction

Strolling

down memory lane of

Maaneet's Dreamland with

WOH-LAMHE

Strolling down memory lane

Where the colors begin to fade.

Strolling down memory lane

Is where I want you to come along.


Strolling down memory lane

is a test of time and mind.

Strolling down memory lane

I won't be afraid.


Strolling down memory lane

Is not lacking in color.

Strolling down memory lane

Is not a big bummer.


Strolling down memory lane

Not a storm in sight

Strolling down memory lane

is joy without bite.


A memory that I have created in my mind,

Stands the test of time.

Memories are like dream, a reflection of the past.

Ur memories kiss my soul'

Maan & geet ' MAANEET
😔 a couple whose selfless luv n bonding gave new name to the feel of belonging to each other,,,It sowed a seed of immense love and respect for this divine couple in millions souls,,,.that it became difficult to everyone to spent a single day without them,,,,n still whn they r no more with us but their presence,their feel,their words ,their aura n memories is still deep rooted in our hearts ,,,,.everyday we wake ,we relive those Maaneetious moments allover again,,,their aroma is still soothing us,,,.in their absence we r getting addict to fictions to get their reflection which sooth our hearts to some xtent,,,,it makes us to feel thm that they are still with us,,,their charismatic ,blissful love has set an xample rather has given new meaning to this heavenly feeling of love wher two souls unite to share their existence till eternity,
,,WOH LAMHE 'THE MEMORIES CLOSE TO HEART,,,'Memory is a way of holding on to the things you love ,the things you are ,the things you never want to lose"'A moment lasts all of a second ,but the memory lives on forever,,,,it is deceptive becoz its coloured by present events'.WOH LAMHE-memories close to heart :Is a tribute to those memories a blince n desire to live them once again with our acquaintance which we desired for,,,It includes the memories down the lane
'It is said that absence makes the heart grow fonder. this is probably why lovers who are apart spend most of their time thinking about eachother.
'If I could relive yesterday ,,,Just even for a while ,,I'd say'
.For emptiness and memories would take the place of me'
God looked down and smiled at me from his great golden thrown'For evrytime u think of me ,,,
I'm right here in your heart,,,,
We know the point where geet was ended was not the actual point,,, apart of kind of happy ending Cv's provided us ,,,becoz there were many hidden truths whch were needed to be revealed but Alas! We didn't got that,,,
so with my imagination wat I realy desired in show but were not meant fulfilled
I hav started this small imaginative journey with
WOH LAMHE,,, m continuing the story of GEET from their return frm their family honeymoon,,,n the
part frm wher m gona start my story is MAANEET'S preparation for their first wedding anniversary,,,Hope so all of my friends will Support me in this journey of
MAANEET PARADISE
WOH LAMHE- MEMORIES CLOSE TO HEART
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Plz hit the like button N dO CMNT TO LEMME KNW if u liked my concept
THANX
WITH lUV sheenS
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Congast on new ff

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WOH LAMHE- Memories Close To Heart

** PART1 **



Recap=(as ths ff starts frm the wedding aniversary of maaneet so recaptulatng the scene of GHSP)


Maan and geet came downstairs together with hand in hand,,,,

Where all family members were waitng for them,,,,
They had a small family celebration ,,,whr maaneet blowed the candles n cutted the cake n fed eachothr,n family members,,,


Everyone blessd the couple n shward them with gifts xpt mamaji who was bit dsapointed as he had nthng to gft the couple so he promises thm that he is gona gft thm on their birthday,,,,

Everyone asks them wat they hav gifted eachothr ,,,while geet wspers in maans ear that his gft is in study n maan says hers is in above room,,,both of thm steps inside the respective places,,,


****

Geet steps insid the room ,,, ,,,,"thnkng that maan has realy pland sumthng special for her",,,,
She switches on the light when ,,,,,,
Her eyes fell towards the crib which is decorated by flowers,,,,

her eyes get moistened with tears of happiness,,,,she plays with toys and smiles,,,n cries
!


On other side Mk steps inside study n wonders wat geet has gifted ,,,
he rues that there is nothng !he turns to leave ,,but stops whn he gets to see sum objct cvrd with cloth he moves towards it n removes the cover,,,,
Soothing smile delights his face,,,when he gets the sight of beautiful crib decorated with flowers,,,
He adores the crib ,,,n !,,



Geet comes inside the room and spots maan playing with toys n nihorifyng the small crib,,,! She calls him,,,

Geet : maan,,,
Both of them come closer and hug eachother and confesses their luv,,!,,,



(I'm using the words whch were spoken by maaneet in serial to get the same feel again)
Geet : I love you too maan,,,
Maan jo sapna apnay dekha tha uski shurwat hogayi hai,,,,,


Humari zindagi mai ek choti si ,,,nani si khushi anay wali hai,,,
Jo apko papa aur mujay mama kah kar bulayaega,,,
Maan : tum sach kah rahi ho geet,,,


Geet bina kuch boulay hum dono,,,ek dusray ki baat samaj nai lag gayae hai,,,
Geet hum nay khwab dekha tha who aaj tum nay pura kar diya,,,


Geet: hum hi kahtay hai na ki hum do jism ek jaan hai,,,
Maan : haan geet,,,ab mujay zindagi say koi malal nahi,,,mujhe zindagi say kuch nahi chahiyae,,,
Geet: yakeen hi nahi hota na maan,,ki jibs ajnabee say meri phly mulakat ek jagday say huwi thi,,,
Mai uski shakal tak nahi dekhna chahati thi,,,,



Aaj,,,us ajnabee ki zindagi ki wajah ban gayi houn,,,
Kab who jaan say janay jaa ban gaya,,,(while getng all the flashbacks of past kurbaan huwa seq,,roop tera moments)


Kab mai us kay wajood ka hisa ban gayi,,,
Kab mai us mai sama gayi,,,
Pata hi nahi chala,,,
Dherauy dheray do dil ek jaan bangaaye,,,


Khatay meethay pal,,,
Dheray dheray do dilon ko ek jaan bana gayi au,,,r khushiyan hi khushiyan ho gayi,,,
Maanwhile cuping her face) ,,
geet mujhe purani batay to yaad nahi,,,par geet agar yae pal itnay haseen hai,,,


To wo puranay din kitnay haseen hongay,,,
Tumnay kabi himat nahi hari,,,

Kabi tum halat say ladi aur kabi meri bouli huwi yadon say,,,
Geet: jis ka devta us k samnay basta hou,,,who himat kaisay har sakta hai,,,
Maan: geet ab humay koi alag nahi karsakta,,,

Maan aur geet tou ek hi tabeez k do maan k
Geet; aur uski gant mere babaji nay bandi hai,,,
Maan ab hum nai shurwat karangay ,nai khushiyon k sath ,,,


(imagination begins)


Maan: haan geet mai wada karta houn humari zindagi ki shurwat hum nai khushiyon aur nayae sapno k sath karangay,,,,

Hum apni nai yaday banayenge ,,jahan sirf mai ,tum aur humara pyar ,humara ansh hoga,,,


Geet(while giving a small peck on maans chest ): haan maan,,,humari duniya,,,,humara pyar aur humara nana sa anay wala ansh(part),,,
Cuming out of hug ,,,


Geet: chaliyae maan sab ko yae gud news daingay,,,,
Maan: nahi abi nahi kal,,,,
Mai is din ko buhat khas banana chahta houn,,,

Kitni ajeeb baat hai na geet,,,isi din babaji nai humari zindagi,humaray dilon ko ek rishtay k naam say band diya tha,,,
Aur aaj hi k din babaji nai humari zindagi ko naya wajood dai diya,,,

(maan while kneeing down,,,n caressing geets stomach ,,)is choti si jaan ko humaray beech lakar,,,
Geet: haan maan,,


Maan gvs a peck on geets stomach n both of them leaves the room,,,
Dev: bro aap aagaye ,,, ap ko urgently office jana hai,,,
Preeto: rukiyae jejaji ,,,phlay humay b tou pata chalay ki apnay didi ko kya gift diya,,,
Maan: haan sab ko pata chal jayaega,,,,
Lekin abi nahi kal,,,



Nandini: aisa b kya special gift hai,,,aur didi aap nay kya gft diya,,,
Geet shyly lukd towards maan,,,


Maan: pata chal jayaega,,,lekin is waqt mujay jana hai ,,,tou mai jawon,,,
Geet: maan aaj b office,,,
Maan: jana zarori hai mai jald hi wapas awonga,,,



Maan pecks on geets forehead n after winking on dev he leaves for office,,,

Its almost 4,,,whn all ladies of house were resting in hall,,
Geet was pacing frm one corner to another,,,mumbling with herself,," anay dou inko,,aaj maza chakhati houn",,

Boula tha jaldi awonga,,,subah say sham honay ko ayi but in ka kuch pata nahi ,,,


Nandini: didi hum thodi dair k liyae market chalay jatay hai,,,mujhe kuch zarori cheesein laini hai,,,
Geet: nandini tou preto k sath chali ja,,mera mun nahi hai,,,


Nanad: oho didi,,,aap ki choice achi hai,,chaliyae na ab plzz,

Ap ka b mun bahal jayaega,,,
Geet: acha chal theek hai,,,


Geet ,preto n nando leaves for market ,,,
Nandini gets call frm dev,,,di,preeto aap chaliyae mai ati houn,,
Dev: nandini ,geet man gayi na,,,
Nano: haan dev badi mushkil say mana,,ab ap ko jo b karna hai jaldi kariyae,,tab tak mai di ko maal shopng k liyae lai jati houn,,
Dev: theek hai,,




Nandini forcibly takes geet to mall to chose luk for sum clothes,,,
where she recievs parcel, , ,
N preto n nando makes her to open that' when geet opens that ,,she cums across ared silver embirderd elegant saree ,,,with matchng jewelry n bangles,,,she opens note,,,


Note:
chota sa toufa meri mishty k liyae,,

(smile enchants her face as she very wel knew who has gvn that,,, )
Mai chahta houn tum ghar yae saree phan kar aw,,,
Tumhara,,, sirf tumhara

MAAN


Geet steps towards changing room,,,


Everyones eyes pop up whn they got the beautiful fervilous sight of geet who is not luking less than a greek goddess,,,

The red saree with silver embroidery is luking so elegant on her,,,geet gets anxious whn she sees preto n nandini are also dresd diffrntly nw she is sure that sumthng was cooking,,,


Without asking them anything all of the trio left fo KM,,,

When geet steped inside the mension it was dark no noise, rather it was deserted,,,she calld several times vinod,lucky veer ji kahan hou,,,"





Yae sab k sab kahan chalay gayae,, aur yae preto aur nandni kahan rah gayae"


Standing in the centre of the hall blindly in darkness before she stepd out to leave all the lights were switched on,,,,enhancing her she started looking here n there,,,



She got anxious after hearing a loud applaud,,, hall was crowded with guests,,
Everything was so elegantly n beautifully decorated ,,,she searched evrywhr ,,,


She was craving to get glimpse of her maan who realy meant his words of making this moment remembrable,,



Oh that's y nandni took me for shpng,,,taki maan ya sab arange karay ,,,,,

"here he is luking revishing in his attire,,,this evng was realy gona b very special for them,,,'"

Maan came near her n hugd her,,,

He was lost in beauty of her mishty,,,after kissing geet on her forehead,,, he left frm there n stood in the midest of hall,,,


He thankd all the guests for being the part of ths occasion,,,

Geets vision got blured as some one covered her eyes with palm,,, after touchng the palm,,,geets heart was fild wth happiness whn she called dadi maa,,,


Dadi remvd her hand instaneously,,,she wasn awre that geet will recgnise her so soon,,,

Geet hugd dadii,, n bended dwn to take hr blesngs while dadi blesd her n peckd her forehead,,
Dadi: hum nahi jantay thay ki aap humay itna jaldi pehchan payangi,,,


Geet: aisa ho sakta hai ki beti apni maa ko na pehchanay ,,,
Dadi : who baat to sach hai,,,

Soon they were interuptd by adi,,,

Ladies n gentlemen jaisa ki aap jantay hai yae sham Mr n Mrs Khurana ki frst wedding anniversary hai tou is sham ko khubsurat aur yaadgar banana k liyae kuch karna tou banta hai,,,



Aaj hi k din Mr n Mrs Khurana ek khubsurat bandhan mai bangaye ,,,,
Do muhabat karnay walon ka pyar parwaan chada ,,who ek dusray k liyae kya mehsoos karte hai aur kaisay do anjany dil mil kar ek huwe ayiae jantay hai Mr. Khurana say,,,


Whole hall became quite n slow rhythmic music began to enchant ,,,

Ya maan was going to sing a song about their marriage and the times they've been through together frm the moment they came to knw abt eachothr'.

tune to the song to feel the magic,,,,,

cmplete silence hit the hall n one n only musical rhythm bgan to echo frm the crners whch was cmplimentng maan's voice,,,





Tumsa koi dusra is zameen par huwa,,,,
Tou rab say shikayat hogi,,,

Tumhari taraf rukh kisi gair ka huwa,,,,Tou kayamat say phlay kayamat hogi,,,



(Toon nana nana nana na
Toon nana nana nana na)



Tunay zindagi mai akayTunay zindagi mai akay Zindagi hou,,,,,Zindagi badal di,,,

Tunay zindagi mai akayTunay zindagi mai akay Zindagi hou,,,,,Zindagi badal di,,,

)


Tunay pyar youn nibha kay Zindagi hou,,,Zindagi badal di,,,Zindagi badal di,,,


(the moment geet walked in mk's life,,,,she cmpletly changed his life,,,she came like a ray of shining hope whch delighted his dark life with her light n fulfilled his soul wth her aroma,,,,


She filled his dark soul with the fragnance of love ,,,she provokd his dead soul to feel the esctacy of luv,,,
Its she who teachd him hw to devote herself to this heavenly world of luv,affection n belonging,,,


Maan was enjoying beats pacing around hall with his eyes cmpltly stuck on geets,,,whose heart was filled with emotions,,,

He was singing gracefully ,,,evrone dazzle esp geet ,,,she couldn't believe her eyes was this the same maan she knew,,,,





Ab gawara nahi,,
Koi aur b hou,,,,
Jo meri tarah yun tum pay maray,,,

Chuhna tou dour hai ab na manzoor hai,,,
Koi mere siwa tera zikra b karay,,,


Tunay faslay mita kay ,,
Tunay faslay mita k ay,,,
Zindagi hou ,,,
zindagi badal di,,,

Tunay zindagi mai akay
Tunay zindagi mai akay
Zindagi hou,,,,,
Zindagi badal di,,,



Ya its true she made him mock in the possessiveness of his luv that he cant see anyone ahead ,,,

Her luv has made him so insane that he can destroy the whole wrld ,,,who so evr wl try to harm her,,,

Luv has truly found its way ,,,their relation has came so far that its dreadful n sin to thnk abt there separation,,


Teri tareef gar ayena b karay,,,
Tod doun mai usay ,,,Dil mera kahay,,

Tou hai mera junoon,,,Meray dil ka sukoon,,,Mai dewana houn tera koi ,,,Kuch b kahay,,,

Yae dewangi bada kay,,Yae dewangi bada kay,,zindagi hou,,zindagi badal di,,,


Tunay zindagi mai akayTunay zindagi mai akay Zindagi hou,,,,,Zindagi badal di,,,


Maan came forward near geet noded hs bro a bit ,,,he was smirking on geets frozen state,,,,

!he lukd straight in her eyes stating each and every word from his heart and pointing at geet,,,enonimously pouring his feelings which were bottled inside him frm the moment he understood the depth of their relation'


Geet's eyes were filled up with tears after hearing to maans rhythmic confession she wasn't able to hold bck n too joind him in his confesion



Geet:


Tunay zindagi mai akay
Tunay zindagi mai akay
Zindagi hou,,,,,
Zindagi badal di,,,

Tunay pyar youn nibha kay
Zindagi hou,,,
Zindagi badal di,,,
Zindagi badal di,,,



Tunay zindagi mai akay
Tunay zindagi mai akay
Zindagi hou,,,,,
Zindagi badal di,,,

Ishq mai tere hum,,,
kya say kya hogaye,,,

boul kar yae jahan,,
bus tumhare hogaye,,,

tere bin ay sanam,,,
hai adhore say hum,,,

milgaye tum humay ,,,
khwabb puray hogaye,,


in his luv she has forget the whole world,,,her heart gets solace in maans embrace,,,their couple is made by the god,,,they are the beads of the same thread,,they are the beats of same rhythm,,,


they have forgotten the whole world ,,,they canot live without eachothr bcuz they are two bodies with a single soul,,,their solace lies wth their togetherness,,,

god has united them like tunes of melody,,, god has filled their life wth anigmatic n fervolous loven belonging,,,ya they are meant for eachothr,,,, n nobody in ths earth has power to separate thm till eternity,,


Tunay faslay mita kay ,,
Tunay faslay mita k ay,,,Zindagi hou ,,,zindagi badal di,,,

Tunay zindagi mai akayTunay zindagi mai akay Zindagi hou,,,,,Zindagi badal di,,,



Maan n geet togetherly,,while hugging eachothr,,,



Tunay zindagi mai akayTunay zindagi mai akay Zindagi hou,,,,,Zindagi badal di,,,Zindagi badal di,,,Zindagi badal di,,,



Hall began to echo with the ferocious sound of applaud ,,everyone was amazed to c the confession of ths beautiful couple,,,,everyone was amazed by ths blissful confession of maaneet ,,


,their love has the strength to melt the stones,,,geets eyes were brimmed up with tears,,,,maans soulful voice pierced in her soul,,,,!

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Awesome start dear
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