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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank you so much foR Ur likes and comments..
buddies thank you for your support..
but stil not happy with likes and comments..
buddies plz and plz do comment and motivate me..or else i wil stop writing..
plz plz motivate me..its realy hard for me to update but i update..plz show your support..
i wil wait for it..

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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
Beautiful update dear..
they r married..!!!! if maan hates her then y he married?
wat does he mean by fake???
geet's words were so touching..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
beautiful update plz continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
part 4
nice part...
why is he harsh with her?
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow lovely update...i know and my geet too know that my maan love his geet so much...u cant lie maan , u dont know to act...u r doing tis to save geet from danger naa. i and geet know that...but we love u so much so dont go away from us...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
nice part.
so maaneet is married.
waiting to know more
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
hey.. i jzt read all 3 parts n dey were too good..
maan married geet, yet ditched her .. ailaa !!
khadoos kahinka !! waiting anyways 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part -5

I don't know why he is acting like this'if he want me to go away then I will obey his order'but I cant live without him so I decided that I will finish my life'in this way his order will fulfilled and I will also get freedom from this world..but in heaven also this geet will wait for him..may be then he will be able to understand me and my love..i wipe my tears and smiled. I know this will be right,I don't want to live in this world where my maan is rejecting my love .may be babaji also wanted this'i saw all other busy in something or other..i quickly back off from there..i ran from there..i know where the river stream is..

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I came out again..i found the surrounding to be quite..i saw the whole place and saw others working..everyone was their leaving geet..i thought..finally she is gone..and I am happy'I moved towards meera and said "finally she is gone meera..i feel so great"..i heard meera say "kaun?? Geet ..but she was here a moment back..and I know her she will not leave so soon..then where she has gone"..i was balnk..i said "how does it matter finally she is gone"I heard meera say "what are you saying maan'if she is in some type of danger or may be she took a wrong step"..i saw meera's tear. I said "why are you crying meera..she is not worth it"..i heard her say "maan she is and angle..she was the one who saved my baby..yash's last possession..if anything happens to her..i will never forget my self and how will I face yash after that"..i said " meera ..just for your sake lets search for her..she ows us one..lets move"'we went along the woods to search her..i found pieces of her duptta..and we followed that..

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Finally I reached the river..i looked up to babaji and said "babaji I am sorry I am ending this life..but what can I do when my god ordered me to leave him..you know na..that a person can without anyone..but cannot live without god..if my god didn't want me..than this life is a waste for me..baba ji forget me for my deed..i am coming back to your lap again'..thank you babaji for giving you like figure in this mortal world to accompany me'I am coming babaji.."

I moved forward..

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Edited by ishanidhi08 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
Loved the update...Maan will save her surely...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved the part..
ofcourse our maan will serve geet..
But y he acting indiff?

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