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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome yaar plzzz add me ur pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely story..


why do i feel that the old man and dev had some hand in sloitting geet n maan up?

the whole royalty issue😡 and dev is nowhere in the picture now..😡

maan is a 🤬 for not going for the DNA test and beliveing whatever he saw😡
Edited by aashluvsmaan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome, brilliant parts
loved them
feel sad for geet and mahi
what happen in past I wonder when maaneet loved each other so much
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
i am just loving this ff more n more!!! just really i keep on imagining maan's reaction wen he will come to know tht sameers is HIS daughter!! cant b anything else! waiting for story to unfold!!thnx 4 d pm :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
any chance of the second update??
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Posted: 13 years ago

CHAPTER 15

Geet

Bauji was going to get discharged today.. n we needed to make d transit to hoshiarpur asap.. probably tomoro! Which meant der was so much 2 do.. meera had been understanding n had granted me a month long leave but after tht..?! then der was maahi school.. her principal had been understanding of d situatn but again for how long..?!! but d immediate problem was hw do we shift to hoshiarpur? Nt 2 mention maan.. I guess nxt I d hear fm his lawyer for divorce..!! after wht had happened I knew I d hurt him.. n who knows.. he probably nw was hving a gud tym wid tht sameera!! No I shudnt think on dose lines..

Babaji.. help me.. der wer only question and no answers!! Will I be able 2 handle all dis? No geet.. don't think negatively.. I shudnt give up.. just tk one thng at a tym.. n wid babaji's grace.. I find d answers too.. hai na baabji!!

Suddenly.. d land line phone rang.. thts a fast answer babaji!! Bt thn chided myself.. if only life was so easy!! wonder who'd b callin me.. 'twas arnd eleven in mrng.. cud it b fm d hospital? No no don't think so much geet.. just pick up d phone!!

"hello!"

"geet.." a husky deep baritone voice greeted me..

I was shocked.. why wud he call me?

"hey its me.."

"maan?!" as if cud nt recognize him.. bt hoped 2 add d question in my voice!!

"yeah.. hwz bauji?"

"um.. he wil get discharged today evng.."

"hmmm.. n wen r u.. u planning 2 leave for hoshiarpur?"

"tomoro"

"n r u done wid d arrangements?"

"whts it 2 u?"

I heard him intake a deep breath.. n I knew he was irritated wid d coldness in my voice.. but hw was I to react wid his confusing behavior.. esp aftr his words tht day!

"geet.. l listen.. I just.. wo.." wen had maan strtd fumbling wid his words..

"wo.. I was wondering hw u wer planning to tk bauji to hoshiarpur?"

Wasn't I thinking d same thng.. bus wud b inconvenient.. I cudnt afford to hire a pvt vehicle.. hey babaji.. d doctor had assured of an ambulance bt tht was only in case of an emergency bt I shudnt think of tht.. but my thots were broken by maan's words

"um.. geet.. I think bus wudnt b convenient,n unless u had a pvt vehicle.."

I wondered hw he alwaz thot d same as I did.. I was still in my thots while I guess maan took it as an encouragement to continue..

"n wid ur n maahi's luggage a bigger vehicle like a land rover wud do u gud.. nd.. umm.. since my vehicle is free.. "

"maan n..."

"u cud use it geet.. don't refuse it directly.. think abt it.. discuss wid bauji if u want..n lemme know.. u can note my pvt no.."

He dint even let me utter a word.. I noted it n hung up!! in dese ten yrs I dint even hv his pvt no.. n now..

Though I dint want to tk his help.. bt I was financially so weak, it seemed a viable option.. but I wondered if bauji wud b fyn wid it.. he nvr liked maan n only accepted him coz of me n post our separation he nvr failed to remind me of his opinion. But surprisingly he was more than happy wid d arrangement.. infact he even mentioned tht a land rover fm d fleet of cars wud hardly mk a difference to maan.. bt he left to it me to decide!!

Edited by nats0101 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Still he does care for her... his caring and love is more than the past...

so much mystery... i just cant wait for more updates

loved the update... eagerly waiting for tomorrow... so that we can read more
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wow so nice of my maan...geet's babaji is her maan...so wen he prayed to her babaji saying her problem, her babaji maan solved it...lovely update dear...but i want to know wat hapen in te past , why they separeted...im scraching my head
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Posted: 13 years ago
he is worried abt her...how will she manage...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Nats

Awesome Update

Hope you can give us one more 😳

tk cr

Priya

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