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Anubhuti

@tellyme

Sparkler

+ 18

Posted: 13 years ago

#161

Ohh lovely part dear .. This ff deserves more readers dear

The promise he made he broke it and I felt the way u wrote it

Awesome part

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its_me

@its_me

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#162

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Renu

@abhiya_kapi

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#163

Great update. It's getting more interesting now. 😉 keep updating fast. Wanna read next part too 😍

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-Crayon-

@-Crayon-

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#164

This is some brilliant stuff..I read all the parts in one go and I absolutely loved them!

I love the way you keep shifting from Maan's POV to Geet's POV!

It makes for an interesting read!

The difference between their relationship during their college days and now is amazingly described!

I felt so bad for Maahi when she cries ...I must say that she is a strong girl ...Geet still loves him and what was her mistake? Geet is a strong woman...she manages everything ...Maahi , Her Father's demands but she needs someoene who can support her emotionally , I loved their hug ..How much she wanted that support she got from him at that particular moment.

They got separated 10 years ago but still are emotionally attached to each other.

It was really touching when he called her mishti after so many years.

Eagerly waiting for the next update.

And yes dear..please postpone your plans of becoming 'Just a reader' once again 😆..Love this FF!

Keep writing!

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nats0101

@nats0101

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: World-of-Dreams
This is some brilliant stuff..I read all the parts in one go and I absolutely loved them!
I love the way you keep shifting from Maan's POV to Geet's POV!
It makes for an interesting read!
The difference between their relationship during their college days and now is amazingly described!
I felt so bad for Maahi when she cries ...I must say that she is a strong girl ...Geet still loves him and what was her mistake? Geet is a strong woman...she manages everything ...Maahi , Her Father's demands but she needs someoene who can support her emotionally , I loved their hug ..How much she wanted that support she got from him at that particular moment.
They got separated 10 years ago but still are emotionally attached to each other.
It was really touching when he called her mishti after so many years.
Eagerly waiting for the next update.
And yes dear..please postpone your plans of becoming 'Just a reader' once again 😆..Love this FF!
Keep writing!

thnx.. m glad u liked it..

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nats0101

@nats0101

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: shrutheAjay
I just read all the parts in a go...

I loved it... Its truly a wonderful story!!!!! and you had beautifully portrayed each character , the situation and their feelings...

Maan and Geet were so much in love and married... something happened that broke the trust, but yet the love and caring seems to be still buried in their heart...

am too anxious to know what went wrong... that led to the current situation... when the past was so amazingly beautiful -- what they shared...

my wild guess goes to dev being the reason... anyways, will wait for you to reveal the mystery and move the plot...

thanks for the story and i thoroughly loved reading it!!!

continue soon

thnx.. glad u liked it

as for ur guess.. just wait n watch..

d ff will get done in abt ten days.. so u wont hv 2 wait for long!!

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nats0101

@nats0101

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: tellyme
Ohh lovely part dear .. This ff deserves more readers dear

The promise he made he broke it and I felt the way u wrote it

Awesome part

thnx a ton..

i already think a got a response beyond wht i expected considering dis is my first ff

it feels grt reading ur comments.. considering u urself hv written such awesm ffs!!