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Posted: 13 years ago
she really loves him..a lot...
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 12
awesome...
so Geet has fallen for Maan...
what about him?
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome... I know it's something to do with dev
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Posted: 13 years ago
feel really bad for maahi
what will maan do when he'll learn that she is really her daughter who has lived 10 yrs away from him with geet suffering like that...
solution: go and jump off from a cliff
love geet's pov
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice

and what about dev? what was his feelings regarding their closeness
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

part 12
awesome...
so Geet has fallen for Maan...
what about him?
cont soon dear...


nxt updt u ll get ur ans!! ie.. very soon!!
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Originally posted by: t_areeb

nice


and what about dev? what was his feelings regarding their closeness


though kinda predictable lets analyse dev a lil later n njoy maneet nw..
but dev s turn wil b soon..
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Originally posted by: spvd

part 11
nice part...
so Maan is the one whose financing the place...
grrr idiot how could he tell her that...


maan dint mean 2 show off.. just worried hw she'd manage coz he had a better idea abt d condition of d place!!
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Originally posted by: tellyme

Awesome... I know it's something to do with dev


yes n no
lets wait n watch
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Posted: 13 years ago
here's d second updt of d day
lemme know if its tooo cheesy.. its d first tym i m attempting such a scene..

CHAPTER 13

Geet

Meanwhile Maan did brilliantly in his exams.. infact he topped d exam, was offered d best offers fm top companies bt he politely refused.. he wanted to pursue his dad's dream!! Even in d vacation after his exams.. he had started wrkin at kc.. while I was busy wid my studies!!

It was der farewell nyt organized by our faculty.. nd I dreaded d day.. maan wasn't gonna b der in college nymore.. it was killing me within.. I was confused whther 2 go or nt.. hw wil I face him.. he cud alwaz read me like an open book.. wht if he realized hw I felt.. no I dint want 2 loose his frndship! n if I dint.. I d probably lose out on our last bit of time 2gthr!!

Ultimately I decided I wud go.. d party was grt but I hardly noticed it.. I was glad tht I gt sm tym wid maan.. but he seemed a bit lost.. I feared tht my thots abt maan wer ryt.. if a few months of nt spending tym 2gthr had made him like dis den he definitely dint hv ny feelings for me!! We wer 2gthr bt still. He was lost sm whr while I was lost in my fears of losing him!!

Midway thru d party.. maan said he had sm work so we shud leave .. I felt my heart breaking.. lost in my thots I did not even realize wen maan took me bk 2 d same place wer we had cm to c d sunrise!! D only difference was it was a beautiful full moon nyt.. I hadn't realized til den tht I had walked alone till d lake side which looked beautifully lit up, bathed in d moon light!!

I came out of my trance, turned arnd 2 luk for maan!! Den I found him standing alone near d bike staring at me.. it was a similar expression 2 wht I d seen in his eyes d day whn after cmin here.. he d cm 2 c me off at d station!! But neither cud I define d expression den nor nw.. but deep in my heart I felt as if life had travelled a full circle!!

I walked upto him all confused..

"maan.."

"no geet.. let me speak 2de or I may nvr b able to..'.

"geet.. u know I lost d love of mu parents at a crucial time in life.. though daadi maa helped me out bt I put a wall arnd myself nt wanting 2 make myself vulnerable to ny1, nvr wanting 2 lose to ny1.. but u caused a crack in it d first tym I saw u.. I lost myself in ur innocent eyes n smhw I was happy losing to u.. I wanted 2 spend all my tym wid u.. I cud nvr say no 2 u.. u so effoertlessly got me out of my shell.. I did not even realize it.. tht day wen I gt u here 2 c d sunrise it was just on a whim.. bt dis place is wer I cm 2 seek solace wen I miss my parents, to shed my fears.. bt tht moment wen we stood 2gthr seeing d sunrise n u held my hand.. I knew I dint want 2 b alone nymore.. I wanted u by my side 4evr!! When u wer leaving for hoshiarpur tht day I felt hollow.. n wen u came bk I felt my life cm bk 2 me.. this whole yr I struggled with myself.. even purposely keepin myself away fm u.. thinkin it 2 b an infatuatn bt my longing for u increased exponentially!! I pushed myselves into studyin 2 distarct myself fm ur thots which nvr leave me.. n den dese few days after d exams I started feeling probably I m nt worth u.. I m a nobody.. dad's dream is a herculean task.. I don't know hw m gonna go abt it..

bt don't know y aftr seeing u 2de I was in two minds whthr 2 tell u or nt..but I realized tht widout u, nthng feels complete.. n if u wer wid me.. I feel I can achieve nythng n evrythng.. "

He took a deep breath, goin down on his knees, he murmured d words which changed my entire life..

"I love you geet!!"

I had tears flowing down my cheeks n when he finally looked at me.. I was speechless probably for d first tym in my life.. my maan.. yes he was mine!! who hardly ever spoke had opened his heart out to me.. hw cud he feel insecure abt me whn my heart beats only for him..

"geet.. luk I dint want to hurt.."

Don't know wer I found d strength n nt trusting myself to speak.. I took his lips in mine.. I dint even know wht I was doin except tht he reciprocated my feelings.. n I felt on top of d world I dint even know hw 2 proceed.. bt he was der to guide me, support me.. like alwaz..as he deepened d kiss.. it felt like bliss.. I moaned into d kiss.. I felt weak in front of his passion.. bt he held me tight.. more thn d physical pleasure it was our assurance to alwaz b der for each othr.. as we bcm breathless, realisatn dawned on me abt wht I had just happened.. my first kiss wid d man I love n I had initiated it..!! I suddenly felt so shy n he hugged me tight knowing I needed him..

"geet.. fm 2de u r my mishty!!"

Curiosity got d better of me as I looked into his eyes wanting to know wht he meant..

"oh u dint understand.. well it serves a dual purpose.. it means sweetheart!!"

I blushed..

"and.."

"and.. u taste so sweet.. I want u for desert evry meal of my life!!"

I hid myself in him..

We were silent.. just njoyin each odr's presence n soothing urselves fm d fears in our hearts..

"mishty.. y did u luk so distressed during d party?"

Suddenly all my apprehensions seemed so silly.. I dint know wht 2 say..

But maan was nvr d one to let go..

Finally I had to tell him.. "wo.. I was scared u dint feel for me.. n.."

He knew me better thn myself.. he hugged me tight.. leaving no space between us..

"mishty.. I promise.. I ll never leave u ALONE.. cm wht may!!"

Bth of maan's words.. past n present.. resonated in my mind.. I wondered if promises were alwaz made to b broken.. n if so which one wud hold true in d future!!


Edited by nats0101 - 13 years ago

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