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Posted: 13 years ago
hey me bk again!! lol.. well first of all thnx 4 ur overwhelming response..
thnx 2 al dose who r reading dis ff..tkin out tym 2 like it n lettin me know ur thots
i kinda free ryt nw.. n since dis writing ka worm has bitten me.. wanna get done wid it so tht i can soon get bk 2 being a regular reader.. so 2updts daily for u..

heres d nxt updt

CHAPTER 10

Geet

Another tough day at work.. n den i had 2 visit bauji.. an urgent call fm d hospital.. bauji n his tantrums to stay in a deluxe room coz it suited royals.. n den his expectations fm odrs 2 treat him like one.. nt 2 mention d latest reports were nt favorable eithr!! Anthr drained out day.. i was feeling so exhausted mentally.. and physically.. n worse was der wer no answers 2 ny of my problems..

Glancing at my watch i realised i was more late dn usual.. n maahi wud b waiting.. as i neared her lane.. i saw a familiar black audi.. no it was nt possible.. esp after ystrdy.. did smthng go wrong.. I literally ran home

D sight which greeted me shocked me.. der on d couch maan n maahi wer sitting playin games on xbox!!

Njoyin demselves?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Was I dreaming.. hw was dis possible?

"maa.. daddy brought me home!!

"he did.."

b4 I cud think abt it, maan spoke up

"maahi.. wont u tell ur mom from WHR I brought u home?

I was confused n lukd at her..

"wo.. ummm."

"maahi.."

"wo.. I went to his office..!"

"wht?"

"maa. Al girls go 2 their fathers offices.. y cant i?"

"maahi.. I dnt care wht odrs do.. u shudnt hv..

Hey babaji.. maahi don't I hv enuf problems.. tht u r adding to it?"

"wht problems?"

All dis while I had avoided lukin directly at him n nw wen I did..it took my breath away.. he was dressed in his professional businessman attire tht made him look drop dead gorgeous.. and his perfect body..

"geet"

His voice brought me bk 2 reality n I realized 2 was bk 2 my past habits of drooling at him.. unlike him who seemed so detached n unaffected..

"geet.. whts wrong?"

The sudden softening n concern in his voice just melted me.. I so wanted 2 cry my heart out on his shoulders.. but den reality sunk.. we no longer shared such a relatn!!

"oh nthng much.. d usual just dis n dat! Hw long hv u been here?"

It was maahi who answered.. "maa.. u know daddy's office is so big.. n looks wow n he has so many miniature bldng models in his office. he s been here since wen he came to drop me n den we even played on d xbox.. it was so much fun!!" n den dey automatically exchanged a high five.. while I cud only stare.. maan s charm had rubbed off her.. but then tht was him alwaz..!!

Nywaz I was glad dt dey got along.. plus I dint hv 2 answer his questions..!!

But before I cud even thnk babaji for it..

"maahi I think u shud go catch up wid ur school work.. while I talk 2 ur mom?"

"do I need 2 go?" maahi pouted n made a baby face.. n I swear maan almost smiled!

But den bk 2 his perpetual dusht danav mode"I think u already pushed ur luck for 2de.. ryt?"

"um.. bt can I say bye 2 u b4 u leave?"

I saw maan nod sighingly.. n knew it was my turn next.. n knowing maan.. he was nvr d 1 to give up..

Maan

I had been seeing geet since d time she had cm.. n though I had intended 2 give her a piece of my mind for her plotting 2 send maahi 2 my office n nt even caring for her safety..

But seeing her so fatigued n distressed.. made me 4gt evrythng.. she seemed so vulnerable.. nd her surprise 2 c me seemed genuine.. n whn she said..

"maahi.. I dnt care wht odrs do.. u shudnt hv..

Hey babaji.. maahi don't I hv enuf problems.. tht u r adding to it?"

My thots wer vindicated.. her denial to tell me nythng confirmed it!!

For a second I thot.. it was none of my concern.. bt my heart told me tht she was still my wife.. while my brain refuses 2 accept tht.. but den I desperately needed 2 know whts wrong..

As tactfully as I cud I send maahi in.. n den approached geet who seemed lost in her thots ..

She was standing wid her bk 2 me.. I knew of all her ways 2 avoid me.. bt den I also knew hw 2 get thru her defenses.. !!

Geet

I felt him behind me.. n I knew I cudnt avoid it.. bt I dint want him 2 c his effect on me.. dint want him 2 know hw weak I felt..

"mishty.."

His one word melted me.. I knew I cudnt resist him.. d desire 2 turn arnd n hug him was so strong tht I had 2 clench my fists.. aftr all it felt bliss 2 hear him cal me tht.. he hadn't since we d separated

"mishty.. whts wrong?"

"ummm.. nothing.."

I entered d kitchen.. "wud u like smthng 2 drink.. coffee?"

"umm.."

As I gave him his cup of coffee.. I felt his piercing gaze on me all d time..

"wht took u so long? Maahi told me.. u r generally bk earlier?"

"wo.. had 2 go meet bauji!!"

" umm. So hwz his heath nw?"

" hw do u know?"

"maahi mentioned abt his operatn.."

"well.. d operatn was fine.. but"

"but.."

"d prognosis aint gud"

"wasn't d operation successful?"

"it was.. bt tht aint enuf.. his heart has weakened n he's slowly succumbing 2 it!.. he's dying"


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Edited by nats0101 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wat made maan to calle her mishty suddenly..
Geet s controlling hard her emotions..
i hope maan can atleast c a glimpse of geet's truth..
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part
good to see maan's caring side
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Posted: 13 years ago


lovely update yar...how child is craving for her dad's love...very very lovely...wat ever a man hav misunderstanding to his wife but he never hate her own daughter...my maan is te best example... i loved tis ff ...very lovely...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loving your ff dear...
I just want Maan to know maahi is his and then he can handle all
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Posted: 13 years ago
just read all the parts
i feel geet isnt guilty maan is misunderstanding her and doesnt let her tell the entire truth
as always sameera is using him
my heart goes out to maahi
she is only a 10 yr old child and has to bear so much
update soon
waiting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb updates. al the updates were very good. please add me tour pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice ff... wondering wht went wrong add me
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Posted: 13 years ago
i wonder what vile game did destiny play with the two... and their love succumbed to it...
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Posted: 13 years ago

wow atleast maahi had some moments to cherish with her father

and it is good to see them talking

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