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Posted: 13 years ago
feeling sad for geet ... such a nice story i just want ot read it in one go wish it was posted just in one big update , so much pain in geet and maan too both luv' eachother but it looks like maan saw geet in uncompromising position with dev and is not ready to belive geet aand geet don't want to explaina s she feel maan should trust hera nd her love . and por kid is suffering...
Edited by change12 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Read all parts
its amazingly superb n diffrnt.
I wonder wat mu ws thr dat dey got separated.n whr's dadi?
Plz add me to ur bddy list.
N dont stop writing.u r awesome
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Posted: 13 years ago
poor geet.. what made maan to leave her.. i dnt think she hv did something wrong knowingly..
pls trust your Geet..😭😭 Maan
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Posted: 13 years ago
Geet s trying hard to make the two ends meet..
And her bauji s not an understanding man..
Geet s all alone.. Its really paining to c geet like ds.
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oh no why my maaneet talking like tis...im sad...wat happened between them why they separeted i want te past...now my geet is going to hp...now wat will my maan do...
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Posted: 13 years ago
here's d nxt part
hope u njoy it!!

CHAPTER 12

As soon as maahi heard d banging sound of d door which cud nt escape maan's wrath.. she came in running. To know why he dint say good-bye to her!! N started crying..

Wht was I to tell her.. her attachment 2 maan wud probably just raise her expectations.. n aftr d way thngs had turned out.. I was wondered if it was d end of thngs btwn dem.. I carried her to her room, comforting her n made her sleep..

I sat der knowing I d gone way too ahead.. I knew maan was being perfectly logical.. but me.. I was in a mess.. if I d heard ny more fm him I wud land up seeking his comfort N probably do smthng tht ll end up hurting me more..

N so in order to hide my vulnerability I vent out my frustration on him.. nt knowing whthr it was bad tht I dint let him help me.. already he paid a monthly allowance for me n maahi.. plus nw he was already helpin out bauji! Or good tht he left me alone..

"fine! I ll leave u ALONE to handle ur mess"

Wil he really leave me alone? I questioned myself.. while my mind told me he already had.. bt my heart drifted my thots to when he had promised me a lifetime of d reverse!!

I cudnt thank dev enuf for introducing us.. though I cudnt tell him tht coz he was so close to bauji.. n though bauji loved me so much.. he was still orthodox wen it came to frndship wid guys.. dev being d only exception tht too coz he was bauji's best frnd's son n a royal!! Bauji so much believed in royalty.. he valued it so much.. even though we had lost out financially. He only wanted me to interact wid d royalties.. I had 2 convince him so much to cm 2 college bt he only agreed after knowing tht dev wud b here..

But maan was like breath of fresh air.. nt initially though.. wen we first met..he hardly spoke. D dusht danav he was... bt nvr stopped me frm speaking my heart out. He was so caring.. I dint hv 2 voice it out.. he'd know b4! He was also very protective from day1.. nvr let ny seniors rag me or harass me in ny way! In fact he kept me company.. n though I was nvr short of frnds.. I preferred his company 2 evry1 else.. dev was der bt don't know whn maan had bcm my priority..

I realized girls seniors n juniors drooled ovr him bt he just nvr noticed.. I felt special he spent time wid me.. I made excuses to talk to him n meet him.. I asked for his help in studies wen I nvr needed it.. but den I cud hardly sleep widout hearing his voice.. I took him out shopping n for movies.. I knew he dint like it much bt he nvr said no to me.. slowly he did strt opening up

It was d last day of my first semester n so i forced him to tk me to c d sunrise.. i sneaked out of our hostel.. he had borrowed dev's bike n took me to a distant spot on d outskirts of d city.. der was a lake der. I cudnt make out d rest coz of low lights!! we bth sat der.. waiting.. though twas my wish, I just wanted to spend my whole day wid him.. coz I wud b goin bk 2 hoshiarpur for d vactions!! I was almost sleepin keepin my head on his shoulder.. n I realized it was d most comfy place to b.. he let me sleep bt woke me in tym 2 c d beautiful sunrise.. being d pampered princess I was at home, I never rose early enuf 2 c d sun rise.. I ws excited n held his hand.. feeling d chill of dawn change to d warmth of a fresh day!! D view was a sight to behold.. wid very sec d world seemed to light up!! Standing thr wid him.. it felt perfect..

Tht was also d day whn I met his daadi maa.. havin been deprived of my mother's love since d strt coz my mom died at d tym of my birth.. for d first tym I realized wht I hd lost bt daadi maa understood me n made up for it.. we hit it off instantly !! When he came to d station to c me off tht evng.. I felt a strange expression in his eyes.. I cudnt define it bt it me feel warm inside!!

The nxt yr literally flew away.. we had bcm best frnds.. n though we cudnt spend much tym 2gthr.. twas maan's final yr.. bt we knew we were alwaz der for each odr!! Maan had told me abt his family n I knew twas his dream 2 get kc bk on track.. even though twas non existant ryt nw.. dev too was busy wid his mba . he did realize we spent a lot of tym 2gthr bt I dint feel like explaining nythng 2 him.. one coz he wasn't tht imp nywaz n more importantly I was confused wid d way I had started feeling for maan..

Spending less tym wid maan made me realize hw imp he had bcm 4 me.. I wanted 2 spend all my tym wid him.. while he spend hrs studying at college,I started visiting daadi more often.. I found I found solace der.. knowing more abt him, his habits.. I was interested in evrythng abt him! I learnt hw 2 make black coffee fm daadi coz she told me hw he cudnt survive widout it.. though I hated it.. den learnt Italian cuisine bt I cudnt eat it.. twas too bland for my taste!! As d yr end approached a fear engulfed me.. maan was gonna leave college which meant even less tym wid him.. n wht if he dint feel for me d way I did.. coz nw I knew I was irrevocably in love wid him!!


Edited by nats0101 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful part..
geet's pov s very well written..
felt bad for maahi..
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Posted: 13 years ago

👏nice concept. poor maahi still craving for her dad love

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Posted: 13 years ago


wow cute lovely love story...i felt som lovely feeling inside...i loved it ...waiting for more past...my maan to in love with his geet...hmmm waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 11
nice part...
so Maan is the one whose financing the place...
grrr idiot how could he tell her that...

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