romancing..my wife!! completed! - Page 13

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Posted: 13 years ago
maan do u get it?
argghhh i feel like hammerring his brain or somehting
awesome upd yaara but maan really gets onto my nerves
MSK the idiot
i love though how he cares about mahi and how he forgot about everything when it came to mahi's safety and geet!
awesome yaara
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update as always hate the way maan used the word misty to get her to answer loved the way Geet stood strong. Con soon can't wait for another wonderful update of yours
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it ! Aww geet seem so genuine so wat happen between them ?
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 10
awesome...
Get still has feelings for Maan...
sigh wish they could clear the differences...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
here's d second updt of d day
its kinda sad.. wil mk up for it..
c ya tomoro!!

CHAPTER 11

Maan

I cud almost feel her brkin dwn fm within n d effort she was making 2 avoid a brkdwn in front of me. I felt a helplessness like never before.. previously I cud force her 2 open up 2 me.. but today despite being her husband, atleast on paper.. my brain interfered, I dint know if I had d ryt.. but smhw wen it came to her.. twas alwaz my heart tht won.. I took her hand in mine.. comforting her.. I knew her bauji held a very important place in her life.. she had nvr gone against his wishes.. except wen it came 2 me..

"r u sure?"

"I hv consulted 3 cardiologists.. al wid d same results"

"he's still in d hospital?"

"yes.. bt he'll discharged in 2 days.."

"Oh mishty.. don't worry. He ll b fine.." n gave her a hug.. she needed it I know..

Geet

I so much needed a hug.. n though I never voiced it.. maan knew it..

It felt so warm n safe in his arms.. I so wanted to get lost in him n 4gt all my worries..

After so many yrs.. dis simple contact made me feel so wanted n special!! As I hesitatingly put my arms arnd his waist, I felt my body respond to his touch.. as like b4 n it was so easy to get lost in dis moment of weakness..

Bt tht was all it was.. a moment of weakness.. maan was nt comforting his mishty.. d sentiment was nt love bt sympathy.. I wanted none of it fm d stranger he had bcm.. I knew he wud nt bk out to comfort me in ny possible way.. bt later d regret.. no.. I want none of dis..

I slowly moved out of his embrace.. as much as it pained my heart.. I did not want ny more blaming or harsh words later.. I dont hv tht capacity ny more..

An awkward silence ensued..

He finally broke d silence..

"so wht r u planning 2 do?"

"waiting for him 2 get discharged n den I ll do whtever wil mk him happy!!'

"n wht does he want?"

"like u care.."

"mishty.."

"oh well he been makin sm demands.."

I knew her bauji well.. his demands were hardly practical.. n seeing current state I knew she had worried herself ovr it

"wht is it?"

"um.. well he wants 2 shift bk 2 hoshiarpur at d handa haveli!!"

" wht.. r u mad leaving delhi..? n d haveli is already in tatters!!"

" hw wud u know"

" ofcourse I will.. after all I pay a decent amt 2 hold it in place!!"

"wht do u mean..?"

"ur old man never hesitates in asking for finance to keep it intact.."

"wht.. bt bauji wud nvr do tht.. n y do u.."

"pay him.. it s hardly nythng.. bt dts nt d point.. just last month he was telling abt sm major leakage problem!! Hw do u think u ll manage der?"

"the care takers still stay der.. so .."

"in case u ve 4gtn lemme remind u, ur care takers r well ovr 70 n evn if dey keep d place cleaned up.. its still a very huge property for d old couple 2 handle!!"

"do u really expect me to explain tht 2 bauji?"

"is he out of his mind? Hw can he..?!!"

"maan.. he s just old.. n though we may nt tell him his conditn.. he does realize it.. n I cant say no 2 him..!.. nt nw.. if thts wht keeps him happy.. so b it!!"

I cud almost feel my temper shoot.. geet as usual nvr thot practically wen it came to people she cared 4 her.. even if it made her life hell.. n dis was her beloved bauji..

"n wht abt maahi? Wht abt her school?"

"like u care?"

"geet.. "

"luk.. dnt bother.. u nvr did.. n u need nt pretend nw.."

I had lost it by den

"fine! I ll leave u ALONE to handle ur mess.. just keep dt kid away fm my office"


Edited by nats0101 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
coz good really feel Geet's pain really know what happened in the past loved the update you are truly briliant can't wait for tomorrow see ya tomorrow😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
feeling sad for geet...but update was great...
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Posted: 13 years ago
it was so painful wat has happened between them tat they are separate
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aww poor maaneet n mahi :/ want to know wat happen in past !
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Posted: 13 years ago
loving each of your updates... ohhh he loves her and can feel her pain but he mistrusted her

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