MG-SS (LOST RELATIONS)pt 12 pg 136 nov 3

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here is the next part

PART 12

Daadi continued…." I am going to meet her tomorrow…. I want to know about her too …maan you two are connected … she also shouts like you in her dreams…. "

Maan: daadi do what you want to do I don't care but I am buying JALSTHAL and that's final……

Savitri devi was somewhere scared…scared of her grandson… the difficulty …the crisis he is facing seeing years can be now put to an end….geet ..who is still unaware of the fact that somewhere someone can be living same as she …. The restlessness…the cry of agony is let out she not only hers but she shares it with someone….and now that someone..had unknowingly started to capture her dreams ….her soul..the resistive she used to get seeing any men is not with maan that geet noticed…not to mention she still hates his teasing and calling her RAJKUMARI…but still…..

" ek ajnabee ne dil me ghar kar liya….

Ek anjaan chera jise ek roop mil gaya…..

dil ne toh samjah liya kon hai tu ….

par hum abhi bhi anjaaan hain….

kya wo betaabi ruk jayegi tere ek ehsaas se……..

kya wo khwab sach hain..jinhone hame ab tak baandha hai….

Kuch sawaal jinse hum abhi bhi anjaan hai…

kuch jawaab jo sirf tumhare paas hain….."

( I know its just most weird phrase…but me tried….")

AT THE PALACE…..

Uday had told all the happenings to dadaji..who was equally amazed and kind of fear he also felt…..

Maan reacting the way to geet was something no one expected…it was actually not at all normal….till now the secret of knowing a bit of geet's condition that uday had kept till himself …he was not able to keep it with him…he needs to tell his dadaji…till now geet always cried in her sleep…but the event that occurred now …had surely made their life to take a new turn……

Uday after being contemplating himself ..finally open himself to his daadji…..

But didn't knew that someone will be now join with them….. geet who was not having any clue what all she blurt out to maan …and what all he answered ..for her it was a usual fit…. And she was crying…but her subconscious knows that finally her soul has found its mate..which it has been searching for years..making her and others life a living hell…..

Yes it was true…..the soul which was not at peace for some hundred of years….which was in a desperate search for its soul mate is now relieved after listening to his one consoling….the same arms that provided her the relaxation at that time….on finding that same touch..her restlessness subdued a little…but it went away making her forget that who was the one who comforted her with his words….

But the heart that provided her the comfort is now burning with the burden of that same past….. somewhere he also found a narrow path to come out of that bleak trail….

Before uday could continue geet came…from that day only she was all pale…not eating properly…her chirpy and angry self was vanished….. though uday also wanted now to talk to geet…but seeing her not well he didn't start any conversation….

Geet went towards her bhaisaa…..and complained cutely….

Geet: bhai saa you left me alone in the room…. You know I was searching for you….

You don't love me ….see daadu bhaisaa left me….

She sat close to her daadu…putting her head on his shoulder…geet was feeling terribly weak..though uday the day itself consulted a doctor…but the doctor just prescribed a complete rest….the doctors even didn't get the sudden reason of her fallen state…..

Well it was just not a normal condition…when you are attacked by your past…that too a horrible one which left you dead on the spot then these are the after effects….. since geet had again encountered with the deadly experience but still worst is come ……

Maan is still not registering the same things but the time is not too far…destiny is itself making him do the things to go inside his past once again…..

And buying the PALACE is one of its progress that their vocation is making them to step forward…..

Uday looked at his baby sister who just accused him of leaving her alone….he knew that geet didn't like to be alone that too when ..when she is not in a good condition….geet always wants someone to be with her by her side so that she didn't feel lonely….

Uday: geet you were in a deep sleep what would I have done in your room…you didn't even let me touch your latest I phone however I only gave it to you….

Geet just came into her sherni mode and immediately was ready to get a pay back from her brother if did even touch it….

Geet: bhaisaa you played games on it…. And probably you have chatted too …..

Geet was very particular about her things…however her bhaisaa was always welcomed to use whatever is hers….but with her due permission….

Maan on the other side made his assistant to immediately contact to the owners of the palace…..

The news spread like fire that some one wants to buy that cursed palace…and even uday heard but still no one knew that who is that unlucky person who wants to destroy himself….

But the truth was like that the destruction will be reduced now……

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