i know i have still going pending works...
and will start updating from next week regularly...as my exams will be over...
here is a new concept i had in my mind and finally have written...
please read and tell me how is it...
PROLOGUE
"Mat jaiye hame chod ke''.ruk jaiye mat jaiye hame chod kar''.hum vinti karte hai aapse mat jaiye ''''.
Ruk jaiye''.."
A girl was crying badly pleading to him to stop not to go to the battle field'''.
She will not be able to bear the distance if something happens to him''.
Suddenly maan woke up sweating he was totally drenched '''tiny pearls of sweat beads on his forehead''.he was panting heavily''he closed his eyes ''and tried to relax himself''
It was the same dream he had been seeing since he was five ''.same vague images same words '.same begging'''' a girl begging to stop''but to whom she is saying this''.this was the question that has not been answered till yet''..
Maan: damn nineteen years '.nineteen years I have been seeing this dream''but it is always like this'''. Blurred images''.faint and unclear pictures always''.
Why there is only reflection '''.why????????
Why I am not being able to see clear''.
Maan when after his self introspection and confusions '''
Yes confusion he's been puzzled since the day he came to understand these dreams''.. went for his daily physical routine'..now he couldn't sleep sleep was now far away from him''.
So he started his tai chi to get rid off the sweet voice ringing in his ears''.
Yes sweet '..her voice is indeed melodious that had been ringing in his ears since nineteen years'.but it now seems to be poisioning his ears making him vunerable '..
That he can't do do anything of this'..
He has lost his peace of mind '''
He had consulted may physiatrist but the result was same none of the medical advancements were able to tell him the answers to his unwanted questions about that blurred vision of his life'''
On the other side some where a girl was mumering in her sleep she was constantly crying and saying not to leave her''she was continuously crying '.tears were flowing unknowing to her she was shivering''.
And suddenly got up with a jerk''.
And wiped her tears'''wondering why she is going through this phase ''..it is the worst nightmare that scare her to death daily'''.
Those hazy images are making her weak'..she is helpless that she can't do anything for herself''nothing...
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so here it is...
plzzz tell me how is it...
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INDEX
PART3 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/59184117
PART7 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/63226187
PART 10https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3007285&TPN=10
PART 12 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3007285&TPN=136#6865404THREAD 2
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