new ff..meri zindagi..prt 20 pg 68 17/12

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seemamary

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Waiting to see maan too.

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sapna sharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

nice part

do continue soon

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love2_soma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

maan ko aldi se le ao...abb aur intezaar nehi hota hai...

beautiful update...

loved it...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt update...

n thank u very much fr d lovely update...

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deepali1022

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

hey i read both parts...both r nyc...

story is really nyc...

hope to see maan soon...

plz add me in ur buddy list...

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music

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Please please add english translations in [] for me...please

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akanshya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: music_girl
Please please add english translations in [] for me...please

i will surely add it...do u want the english for part 1 and 2 too??

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akanshya

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: meena..
nice update

thank u...

Originally posted by: seemamary
Waiting to see maan too.

after 1 or may be 2 updates u can see him...

Originally posted by: kamiya
nice part

do continue soon

waiting for the maan too

thnx for the pm dear

thank u dear...

may after 1 or 2 parts ur wait will be over...

Originally posted by: shah10
amazing update.
thx

thank u...

Originally posted by: geetsweet
awesome ...
continue soon

thank u...

Originally posted by: love2_soma

maan ko aldi se le ao...abb aur intezaar nehi hota hai...

beautiful update...

loved it...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt update...

n thank u very much fr d lovely update...

thank u...

ur wait will over after 1 or 2 updates...

Originally posted by: khushi1022
hey i read both parts...both r nyc...
story is really nyc...

hope to see maan soon...

plz add me in ur buddy list...

thank u..

added u...

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akanshya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

THANK U FOR THE LOVE SHOWERED THE THE FIRST TWO PARTS...

PART 3 IS COING UP...

HOPE TO RECIEVE THE SAME LOVE FOR THIS TOO...

AND THANKS FOR ALL THOSE WHO LIKED AND COMMENTED...

I HAV REPLIED TO ALL COMMENTS...

PART 3 ON THE WAY...

AND FOR PMS PLEASE BUDDY ME...

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akanshya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#49

I HAV PROVIDED ENGLISH TRANSLATIONS IN RED COLOUR...

PART 3:

after 1 week...

Pinky:geet didi uttho...aapko clg jaana hai(geet sisiter wake up...u hav to go to clg)

G:[sleepy]utth rahi hun bhabi...(waking up now)
P:aacha jaldi uthkar tayaar hokar neeche aajana...aapko mummyji ne bulaya hai...kuch baat karni hai...(ok..but get up soon and get ready and come..mom wants to talk something to u)

G:aacha...(ok)

saying so she gets up unwillingly because her mother called her...how much ever she be stuborn but if anyone hav work and need help she would be the first one to help...

after 15 minutes geet went down...

Mohnder:le rano aagaya mera baccha[kissing her head](here rano my child is here)

R:haan haan pata hai...aaja mera bacha(ya ya..i know..come here my child..)

geet went to her mother...

G:kya baat hai ma...bhabi ke rahi thi ki aapko mujse kaam hai..(what happened..bhabi was saying that u hav a work from me..)

R:haan geet woh kya hai na ki hoishyirpur me se..(yes..the thing is that from hp...)

G:[st]no no no no please no...

G:wahan se???(from there)

R:teri nani aa rahi hai...(ur grandmother is coming)

G[st]:thank god!!!

R:sab ke sang(with everyone..)

G:aacha..kab aayengi??(ok when will they come)

R:bas aabhi puhchti hongi...(going to reach now)

G:kya???(what)

R:beta chilla mat...woh mujhe bhi aabhi pata chala jab rishi ka call aaya tha address puchne ke liye..(dont shout..i too came to know when rishi called to ask the address)

G:kya koun??(what whom)

R:rishi...

G:pa aapne tho kaha tha ki nani aa rahi hai..(but u said GM is coming)

R:han teri nani he tho aa rahi hai...teri rekha nani(yes ur GM is coming..rekha GM)

G:[st]oh no...

G:aacha isme mein kya karu[without any emotion](in this what should i do)

R:tujhe kya hua??aise muh latak gaya??aur tujhe aaj clg se chutti leni hai aur unhe bus stop lena jana hai..(what happened??u hav to take leave from clg and go to pick them rom bus stop..)

G[st]:babaji mujhe lagtha hai ki aap mujhse nafrat karthe hai...pehle tho us rishi "uncle" ne mujhe wish nahi kiya aur seehhe yahan tapak pade...aapko mere se kya dushman kai unko lekar??(i think u hav enimity with me for things related to rishi uncle...firstly he didnt wish me then directly he came here...)

G:aacha...un logo ki bus kithe baje hai??(what is the bus timing)

R:bus abhi 1/2 ghanta hai...tujhe chaiya tho pari ya riya ko leja..(u hav 1/2 hour..if u want take pari or riya..)

G:ok..yeh tho batao ki kitne log aa rahe hai??(how many of them are coming??)

R:mosi ki full family aur rishi ka friend..kya naam tha yaad nahi aa raha...(aunt's family and rishi's friend..i dont remember the name..)

G:aacha...(ok)mein change karke aathi hun(i will cahnge and come..)

G:pari mere sang aayegi(pari will com with me)

R:ok...late mat hona(dont be late)

saying so she got busy in her daily chores leaving behind a shocked geet..

G[st]:hey babaji meri madad karna...pichle saal maine baat nahi ki par woh tho sirf 3 ghante ke liye mile the...par aab???mein kya karu...woh tho mere ghar mein hi rahega...bina baate kare tho raha nehi jayaga...geet tu khud ko control kariyo...hyper mat hona...haan yeh thik hai...mein hyper nahi hungi aur baate a kya hai...main bas jo pucha uska jawab dekar chup houngi...babaji madad karna..

(hey babaji help me..last year i didnt talk..as v met only for 3 hours...but now???what will i do??he will stay here only na...yes i will control myself and wont get hyper...and about talking i will reply only for what is asked...babaji help me..)

she went to get ready...and then she went to say bye to her mother..

G:maa where r u??

R:beta mein yahan hun(i m here)

she went to the guest room..

G:aap kya kar rahi ho??(what r u doing)

R:kuch nahi mein bas yeh room saaf karwa rahi thi...(noting..just making them clean this room)

G:aacha...mein chalthi hu...(ok i m leaving)

R:aacha(ok)aaraam se do auto mein lana..(bring them comfortably in 2 autos..)

G:ok..

she left to first pick pari...then she said everything to her...even she got shcoked...and agreed to come with her...

then reached the bus stop...geet was searching here and there...and pari was simply following geet as she dont know them...then suddenly someone came and tapped on geet's shoulder...

END OF PART 3

HOPE U LIKED IT...IF U HAV ANY DOUBT OR SUGGESTION THEN FEEL FREE TO ASK...

PRECAP:most awaited entry...

part 4..

www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2999048&TPN=12

HOPE TO HEAR FROM U...

IF U WANT PMS PLEASE PM ME...

AND I WILL TRY TO UPADTE THE NEXT PART BY TOMORROW...

LOADS OF LOVE AG❤️

Edited by kingofme - 13 years ago