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Posted: 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Good gng dear..so geet was expectng her uncle to wish bt he didnt..
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Good gng dear..so geet was expectng her uncle to wish bt he didnt..
Mere maan ka entry kab hoga yar

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Posted: 13 years ago

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THANKS FOR THE LOVELY COMMENTS.. THEY HELP ME TO UPDATE SOON...

I M NOW GOING TO POST PART 2..

HOPE TO GET THE SAME LOVE TOWARDS THIS PART TOO...

AND I HAV REPLIED TO ALL THOSE WHO COMMENTED...

MANY OF U R WAITING FOR MAAN'S ENTRY...BUT I AM REALLY SORRY TO DISSAPOINT U THAT FEW PARTS WOULD SHOW ONLY GEE'S LIFE AND HER DREAMS...

U MUST WAIT FOR MAAN'S ENTRY...AND AS THE TITLE SUGGESTS "MERI ZINDAGI" FEW PARTS WILL FOCUS ON GEET'S LIFE...

PART 2 ON THE WAY...

LOADS OF LOVE AG❤️

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akanshya

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Posted: 13 years ago

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PART 2:

EVENING...

after coming from college geet was spellbound seeing the decoration of the house...

she went inside

Pinky:arre nanand ji aap aa gai???

G:haan bhabi...aur aap ne yeh nanand ji kay laga akha hai??

P:woh kya hai na ki meri geet didi aaj 18 ki ho gayi hai na tho mujhe thodi tho respect karni hogi na aapni nanand ji ki...

G:bhabi ager aap mujhe woh bulana bandh nahi karogi tho mein aap se baat nahi karungi..

P:aacha didi...mein aap ko woh nahi bulati...

G:gud...aacha yeh batau ki party kitne baje hai..

P:woh 7:30 baje...haan maine pari aur riya ke yahan call kar diya hai aur unke family ko invite kar diya hai...

G:ok..

P:mein aapse ek baat puchu??

G:hum dono ke beech kabse yeh formality aa gayi??

P:aacha baba...kya aapke college main se aapka koi ladka dost nahi hai kya...

G:nahi hai...aapko pata hai na...phir kyun puch rahi ho???

P:woh bas aapne kise ladke ko nahi bulaya hai na isliye..

G:aacha..mein abhi uppar jaathi hun...nahi tho agar pari ka call aaya tho mera sar kha jayigi...

P:thik hai nanand ji...

G:bhabi...

P:okok didi...aap naraz na ho...

saying so geet went towards her room...leaving pinky in her thoughts...

PINKY'S POV:

rab kare ki geet didi jaise nanand sab ko mile...kitni aachi hai yeh...par pata nahi ki unhe ladko se itni nafrat kyun hai...woh mujhse koi bhi baat tho nahi chupathi par yeh raaz woh kabhi nahi kholthi...pata hai kyun jab bhi koi ladke ki baat hoti hai tho woh us baat mein kuch bolthi hai jaise ki ladko ke bare mien bolna unke liye ek gunah ho...hey bhagwan didi ki zindagi mein koi aisa insaan lana jo unhe apni palkhon par baitha kar rakhe...

END OF POV...

meanwhile in GEET'S ROOM..

G:haan baba main woh he penungi...

Pari:agar tune woh nahi penena tho...

G:(didnt et her complete..)woh hi pehenungi meri maa...

P:ein teri maa nahi hun...woh tho Rano aunty hai...

G:(thinking)phir se suru...

G:ok baba...accha tho thik time par aajana...aur riya se bhi keh diyo..

P:ok...

them kept the phone...then geet opened her laptop and logged on to her facebook...she thought to reply to all the wishes...though handa's are setteled on south most of their relatives live in hoshiyarpur...so all her cousins would only wish her throubh calls or througt chat...

after replying to all her eyes unwantedly searched for the single person...then she chidded herself for being desprate...

G:(ST)bhudhu agar usne 6 saal se wish nahi kiya tho aab kya karega...tu aapna hi time aur mood spoil kar rahi hai...

thinking so she started getting ready...

correctly at 7:00 her friends came to her room...

Pari:(wistling)hoi hoi aaj tho sab tujhe par fida honge...

Riya:haan pari tu sach kah rahi hai...beauty mein humari geet ka koi mukabla nahi kar saktha...

G:haan haan..kar lo jitni taareef karni hai kar lo...par isse tum dono ko koi laab nahi hoga...to aab yeh makhan baazi bandh karo...

P:arre geet nahi...humara woh matlab nahi tha yaar...(with child face)..

G:tu tho kuch bal hi mat...tuhje mera phone nahi milaga...yaad nahi ki last time tune mera TT ka kya haal bana diya tha...(showing fake anger)

P:oi tu yeh aapna jhoota gussa aapne pass hi rakh...tu mujhe se nazar hi nahi reh sakthi...

G:(thinking):yaar ye tho sach keh rahi hai...

G:chal le le...par only 10 minutes...

P:ok promise only 10 minutes...mein tho yash se keh ti rehthi ho call cut karne ke liye...par woh hi nahi karhta...

G:aacha koun call cut kartha hai koun nahi mujhe pata hai...

giving geet a glare she started talking...

after 10 minutes geet knocked her head...after that she cut the call...

P:yaar geet pura romantic mood kharab kar diya...

G:aacha maine kya kaha tha...bas 10 minutes...

P:ok..meri galthi maan li...

G:this is like a good girl...chalo neeche chalthe hai...

saying so she started walking down...

the whole happenings mute spectator was riya...whe liked geet very much...for her geet and pari were like sisters...

RIYA'S POV:

geet aur pari meri behen jaise hai...par dono kitni pagal hai...ek pagal hai pyaar mein aur doosri bas hai...meri rab se yeh hi dua hai ki meri dono beheno ki saari icchaa puri ho...yeh geet tho jhaali hai...jab bhi pray karthi hai bas dusroo ke liye hi mangthi hai aur pyaar mein pagal sirf yash ke liye...bhagwan in dono ko thodi se akkal de dena...khaas kar geet ko taaki woh aapke liye bhi kabhi kabhi mangle...

END OF POV...

END OF PART 2...

HOW'S GEET'S CHARACTER...HOPE U ALL LIKE IT...

PRECAP:MORE ABOUT GEET...

part 3..

www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2999048&TPN=10

MOST PROBABLY PART 3 WOULD BE POSTED BY TOMORROW...

SORRY..I KNOW U ALL ARE WAITING FOR MAAN'S ENTRY...BUT BEFORE MAAN'S ENTRY U ALL MUT BE FAMILAR WITH GEET'S CHARACTER AND WHAT ALL THINK OF HER...

EAGER TO HEAR FROM U...

FOR PMS PLEASE BDDY ME...

LOADS OF LOVE AG...❤️

Edited by kingofme - 13 years ago