new ff..meri zindagi..prt 20 pg 68 17/12

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hello all...
i am AG..presenting u a new FF on our beloved maneet...
and i am in a dilemma for the tittle...
i hope u all can help me...
i will present the prolouge then u can give me the votes...and i will select the title with the maximum votes...
refer the below post for prolouge and character sketch...
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INDEX:
prolouge and character sketch..
scroll down..
part 1..
part 2..
part 3..
part 4..
part 5..
part 6..
part 7..
part 8..
part 9..
part 10..
part 11..
part 12..
part 13..
part 14..
part 15..
part 16..
part 17..
part 18..
part 19..
part 20..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PROLOUGE:
Date: 17 may 2012
Time: 21:50
Place: outside Geet room…
All the handa's were standing in line and fighting that who will wish geet first..there was murmuring going on and then
Mohinder: stop u all I will wish geet first as I am the head of the family and geet loves me more…
Rano:wah ji wah..mein hi sabse pehle mein geet ko wish karungi kyunki mein uski maa hun..
Aditya:arre ma yeh aap kya keh kari ho…agar aap uski maan ho tho mein bhi uska bhai hun aur geet ko sabse pehle wish tho mein hi karunga…
Pinky:arar aap bhai hai tho mein behen hun…
Like this all were fighting and no one noticed the time…karan came down from pinky's lap and then plucked a rose from the garden and went and stood outside geet's room…no one noticed the time…when the clock struck 12 karan opened the door and went inside…geet had not slept he went to her..
Karan: GB happy birthday (in his cute voice)
Geet:aww sweety thank u…
She took the rose from him cutely…
Geet:baaki sab kahan hai??
Karan:muje nahi pata GB sab bahabr awaaz kar rahe hai aur kise ne time nahi dekha…saying so he put his hands up and geet picked him up and slowly started to move towards the door…she could hear a the commotion outside…
Smirking to karan she slowly opened the door to see all were till now fighting…as soon as the door opened all were shocked then slowly their eyes went towards the time…it showed 12:10…then slowly they started wishing together…then
Mohinder: beta aap sabse jyada pyaar kise karthi hai aap hume bataya woh hi aapko kal utthane aayaga…
Geet was seeing everyone who were eyeing her to say them…then she acted as if she was thinking…then
Geet: mujhe sabse pehle woh utthayaga jisne mujhe sabse pehle wish kiya...
All were seeing each other as if who wished her first…then they saw the rose kept near geet's table…then they understood that someone is none other than geet's sweet karan…
Saying so they all went to their respective room's…leaving geet to see more dreams… (Who knew that the dreams which we see are always need to be fulfilled…?)
What will happen to geet that see will stop seeing dreams and will become aloof from the world???Who will enter her life to show her hope???
this is the prolouge...
and the options for the titles are...
1.truth of life
2.meri zindagi
waiting for ur votes...
LOADS OF LOVE AG❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i would like thank muskanji for helping me write this FF...
i would even like to dedicate this for my friend...
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and here is the CHARACTER SKETCH
CHARACTER SKETCH:-
HANDA'S: a Punjabi family of hoshiyarpur basically settled in Coimbatore due to business...
Geet handa:
A bubbly 18 year old girl with lot of dreams of her life and towards love'studying 1st year in engineering and princess of the family'she gets whatever she wants within evening'if she asked a thing in morning then that thing would be in front of her by afternoon'due to this love and pampering she had become very stubborn' though she is stubborn she is good at heart and has many friends' she has been spoiled a lot even by her friends'though geet hate her childhood due to some circumstances she has not disclosed the reason to anyone'.
Mohinder Handa:
Father of geet and a business man.. Geet is his life' he can never see tears in her eyes' pampers her to the fullest' has a son but geet is his life' owns a shop which is their ancestral..
Rano Handa:
Mother of geet and the second life of mohinder for her geet is her princess but many times she thought that if she stays this much stubborn then how she will adjust in her in laws but mohinder used to brush it off saying that she is now just a kid and she will learn'.
Aditya Handa:
30 years old and elder brother of geet...is whole life revolves around his family'.manages shop with his father...a word from geet's mouth is a order for him'
Pinky Handa:
Wife of Aditya'is in handa home for 6 years'she is loved by all' Rano treats her as her daughter and even Pinky treats her as mother..Geet and Pinky are like sisters'but sometimes Pinky gets Jealous of the love Geet receives but as a sister she always supports her'the Jealousy would be only for some time and she would not allow the Jealousy to come in between their relation'she likes geet and her bubblyness very much'there would be no secret between the sisters..
THE LAST AND NOT THE LEAST MEMBER OF HANDA
Karan Handa:
The cutest and the youngest family member of handa's.son of Aditya and Pinky a 2 year old boy and life of geet'geet loves to spend time with him and every time she would be found with him only.., if anyone asked about geet then the answer would be that she is with Karan'
KHURANA'S
A middle class family living in hoshiyarpur'
Maan Khurana:
A 20 year old guy with a mystery'
OTHER KHURANA CHARACTERS WOULD BE ENCLOSED AS THE STORY PROGRESSES..
hope u all like the character sketch...
would love to hear from u...
LOADS OF LOVE AG❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nicee 👏
thnx for da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: darksydeangel

nicee 👏

thnx for da pm

thanks for liking...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey awesome prologue dear... Continue soon

nd abt d title ummm i guess 'MERI ZINDAGI' Since it'll show Geet's lyf i mean d reason of her aloofness nd hw she comes out of that
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: aakritisri1111

Hey awesome prologue dear... Continue soon

nd abt d title ummm i guess 'MERI ZINDAGI' Since it'll show Geet's lyf i mean d reason of her aloofness nd hw she comes out of that

thanks for liking...
and thanks for the suggestion too...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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pm me whenever u update again
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: meena..

pm me whenever u update again

sure...r u in my buddy???
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved the prologue
n abt d title"MeriZindagi"

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