new ff..meri zindagi..prt 20 pg 68 17/12 - Page 3

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

nice prologue n CS...

thnx for PM...

Originally posted by: seemamary

I think as it is about geet's life the Title should be MERI ZINDAGI.

Originally posted by: backy

OMGGG your back!!!

m so glad to c u back, loved the concept totally!!!

your writting style has improved alot👏👏👏

love ur FF already 😆

and abt the tittle, phmmm I think meri zindagi will suit better

waiting for the FF

love

esha

Thank u for all those who liked and commented and gave me feedback'

The given below is part 1:

Before going to sleep she took her android and logged on to Face book to check who wished her in her friends'.

As soon as she opened it a long list of wishes were there for her'thinking to reply later she just checked who wished her'mostly it was only from relatives'though she tried to control she couldn't and she scrolled to check whether her uncle had wished her or not'when she didn't find she scolded herself for being foolish and trying to expect the unexpected'

The she closed the phone and dosed of for a deep slumber'

NEXT MORNING:

As usual our geet was obviously not a early bird'but that day it was a miracle'she woke up at 4:30 which was totally impossible for her'even she was shocked as usually she would be dreaming at that time'

And when as usual pinky came to wake her up at 6:00 she was ready with her bags packed for going to college'she was so shocked that no words were coming out from her mouth'

Leaving it all aside she called her for pooja which was special as it was her birthday'after pooja they had breakfast'then two friends of geet came'

FRIENDS OF GEET:

Pari Saxena:

Daughter of a rich business man but down to earth like geet'loves to spend time with geet and her family as her brother is very conservative and he trusts only geet'she to respects him as a brother'meet geet in college and they became best ever friends from them'has a boyfriend named yash

Riya khanna:

17 year old same bubbly as geet'met her in college and became friends from the 1^st day'

Those two when saw geet at the dining table they were shocked as whenever they used to come there they would be greeted by the scene where either rano or pinky would be running after geet'as they came they first wished geet and then they said hai to all'

After breakfast they all went to college together'this was usually their habit that all 3 would go together either from any one's home'

After reaching college they went to the class and sat in their respective seats'

Geet and pari would seat together in the last row where as riya would sit in the second'the class would have 5 rows with 3 for girls and 2 for boys'

After geet's rows boy's row would start and in boys last row the seat would be occupied by pari's BF yash oberoi'

As soon as geet occupied her place there came her friends to wish her'as soon as the professor came all went back to their own place'after that there was nothing to do was that lecturer didn't teach anything as the portions were over..

And as usual the love birds pari and Yash started talking to each other in their sign language'

GEET'S POV

Oh god no teaching today too!!! "aur yeh lo yeh dono phir se suru ho gaye'.kya iss pari ko aur koi kaam nahi hai kya'jab dekho yeh dono aabni bhasha main baatein karte rehthe hai'par yeh dono kitne cute lagthe hai na aakhon se baat karthe hue'kya mujhe bhi koi aise hi milega jo meri har unkahi baat ko samjhe???yash ki tarah'aur who mujhse kabhi bore na ho???"

END OF POV'

This is the end to PART 1'

Ok guys how was this part???

I know it would not be up to ur expectations'

What to do???to build the story I must tell u fully about geets life and her dreams'sorry for not showing maan here'

PRECAP: more about geet's life'

Feel free to give me the feedback'

LOADS OF LOVE AG❤️

Originally posted by: maaneetmaahi

nice start dear...
waiting for maan's entry...
don't worry dear will wait for the coming updates...