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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi...
will update tomorrow till that here is a small treaser...
Maan:come here my wife...
maan called geet...geet went to him...
along with geet rishi came and then they all went to rishi's home after a tiring day...
then maan took geet to rishi's room showing her all his photos along with rishi...
that's all for the tearer...
will update tomorrow...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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THANK U ALL FOR THE LOVE SHOWERED ON PART 12...
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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 13:

That day rishi came and informed maan that geet will come the next day'.maan was very happy'.that night he didn't sleep'.the whole night he was deciding what game would he play with geet''

as the day dawned he rushed to rishi's home...the gate was opened by Rekha...

M:nameste aunty...

R:nameste bate...kya baat hai...rishi tho so raha hai...(what is the matter...rishi is sleeping..)

R:aunty kya geet aagai???rishi ne kaha ki woh aaj aa jayagi..(aunty did geet come???rishi said that today she will come...)

M:haan bete geet aa gayi hai...par woh aapne nahi ke ghar par hai..(yes geet has come but she is in her grandmother's home..)

M:par mujhe usske sang khelna tha..(but i wanted to play with her...)

R:woh aabhi so rahi hogi...train se safar karke aayi hai...kya tum chathe ho ki geet bimar ho jaye??(she might be sleeping...she travelled in train... do u want geet to get ill??)

M:nahi...aap usse sone do...mein baad mein kal khelne aaunga...(no u let her sleep...i will come and play tomorrow...)

saying so maan went to his home half heartedly...the next day geet and aditya came to rishi's home...when this was informed to maan he came running to his home to play with her...

he took her to terrace and was playing with her for the whole day...he enjoyed playing with her...after sometime geet went back and the next day she came...this was the routine for 10 days...

there was only 2 days remaining for geet to go back...when maan came to know about this he cried for the whole night saying that he dont want geet to go...the next day geet came with rano...maan came and took geet with him to the terrace...there was a rule made by him that whenever he was playing with geet no one should disturb him...

when they started playing...after sometime he stopped playing and made geet to sitdown and he sat next to her...

M:geet tum mat jaou na...(geet u dont go..)

G:geet ki ma jai...to geet bi jai...(geet's mother going soo geet also going...)[in her cute tone...though geet is 4 years her speaking is little slow..]

M:geet kya tum mujhse shaadi karogi???(geet will u marry me??)

G:shaadi????yel ky hola hi..(marrige???what is the meaning of this...)

when he heard geet asking this question he started saying all the things that his little brain could understand...

M:shaadi ek ladha aur ek ladki ki hoti hai...shadi ke baad woh dono ek saath rehthe hai...humesha khelthe hai...mjhe tumhare sang rehna hai...isliye tum mujhse shadi kar lo...(marrige happens between a boy and a girl...they be together and they always keep on playing...i want to be with u...so u marry me..)

G:pal geet ko ma sang rehna hai..(but geet want to be with mother..)

M:aacha...par aabhi mein tumhe aapne maa sang rehne dunga par aaj se tum meri pathi ho...(ok u will live with ur mom...but from now u r my wife...)

G:patni..yeh ky hola hai..(wife...what is the meaning of it...)

M:mein tumhe agli baar batunga jab hum milenge...(i will tell u next time when we meet..)

G:thik hai...(ok..)

saying so they both resumed playing...

after sometime maan
Maan:come here my wife...
maan called geet...geet went to him...
along with geet rishi came and then they all went to rishi's home after a tiring day...
then maan took geet to rishi's room showing her all his photos along with rishi...
geet saw all photos...she was seeing maan only in all photos...
then it was time for them to leave...maan came to know that geet was leaving the next day...so he started crying...it took a lot of time for Rekha to console maan...then geet left from there with rano and aditya...
the next morning geet left HP only to return the next year...
SUDDENLY a noise from the near room brought maan out of his chain of flashback...
it was the sound from OT...he saw the doctor coming out and the light was turned off...
M:doc haw is geet...
D:mr.khurana dont worry...geet is now out of danger...but she is unconsious due to sedatives...she will get consciousness in 3 to 4 hours...and she must be underobservation for 1 days to see whether r there any internal injuries...
M:can i meet her??
D:not now...in half hour we will shift her in ICU...after that u can see her from far...
M:ok doc...
D:excuse me...
saying so the doc went to attend the other patients...here maan thanked god for saving his geet...
after half hour geet was shifter to ICU and maan got a chance to see her from far...
he was asked to bring some medicines...he brought them and sat outside geet's ward in ICU...
M:[st]kash ki mein usse din geet ko jane nahi deta...tho woh kabhi mere se duur nahi hoti...woh kabhi mere sang bitaye hua par nahi bhulthi agar mein usse uss din jaane nahi deta...
(i wish i didnt allow geet to go that day...then she would hav never been far from me...she would hav never forgetton the moments we spent together...i should hav not allowed her to go...)
END OF PART 13...
PRECAP:geet's condition worsening...
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Edited by kingofme - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
so geet forgot him when they were young...

nice part..

continue soon..

thnx for PM..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Tyro

so geet forgot him when they were young...

nice part..

continue soon..

thnx for PM..

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Posted: 13 years ago

beautiful update...

loved it...

mostly d baby geet n baby maan...

thank u very much fr such lovely update...


continue nxt prt soon plz...


eagerly waiting...

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update..
thanx for the pm...

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