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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: backy

hi!!!


awesome part!!!

beautifully written, loved it!!!

though this was a short part but it was worth it!!!

maan's behavior toward geet is cold!!!

geet is still in shock!!!

wait whats with sasha? why all of a sudden she is interested to know where geet is going today!!!

love ur ff

plz cont soon and pm me

with tons of love

esha

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Originally posted by: surbhijn106

Update soon waiting dear

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and will try to update tomorrow...
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Posted: 13 years ago
THANK U FOR ALL THE LOVE ON ALL PARTS TILL NOW...
AS I AM STUCK WITH MY EXAMS I AM NOT BE ABLE TO UPDATE REGULARLY...AND WILL NOT BE ABLE TO UPDATE REGULARLY THE WHOLE MONTH...
BUT I AM TRYING TO FIND TIME TO GIVE U ALL UPDATES...AND MOST PROPABLY THERE MIGHT BE PART 10 BY TOMORROW...
TILL THAT KEEP ON SHOWERING UR LOVE ON ME AND MY FF...
LOADS OF LOVE AG...❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi friends...
i am going to update part 10..
hope this will be upto ur wait...
and sorry to keep u waiting...
part 10 on the way...
for pma please buddy me...
LOADS OF LOVE AG❤️
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PART 10:
it was almost evening and the whole day geet saw a new face of her sir...she didnt know this side of him...the whole day she came across one person or the other who was the victim of their boss's scolding...it was 6:00 pm and it was the time for all to go home...so geet went to sasha's cabin...
G:excuse me mam...can i come...
S:yes sure...
geet saw sasha getting ready to leave...
S:yes geet...any work???
G:woh mam can i leave???
S:yes it is 6...all will leave...but i suggest u to ask sir before leaving...as ur are reporting to him...and if he comes to know that i gave u permission then we both will hav to resigh tomorrow...
G:ok mam...see ya...
S:ok bye...
after that geet went towards maan's cabin...she knocked but no answer...she peeped..she didnt see anyone...she entered...she found no one inside...she was going to returnwhen she heard some noise...she started going towards the noise...then she saw that it was coming from some door that is attached to the cabin...then she remembered sasha's words that it was is personal...so no one was allowed...so she waited for 2 minutes near the door...
it was like 10 minutes after that geet went and sat on a chair...fed up of waiting...after waiting for almost 1 hour geet dosed off on the chair...
G:I LOVE U SOO MUCH...
she was saying to a person coming towards her slowly...the face is blurry...
G:I REALLY LOVE U...
PERSON:mee too...u wont leave me na??
G:no...never in my life...even if DE
PERSON:dont say that...u know i dont like u saying it...no one has the right to seperate u from me...
G:aacha baba sorry...
PERSON:good...thats like my geet...
uttho geet...geet uttho...
G:ha...haan(still in dream)
hello this is my office not ur bedroom(in high pitch)
G:(recognising the voice...immediately got up...)huh??[ST]ek tho mujhe mere sapne se uttha diya aur yahan daanth rahe hai...hai kitha aacha sapna tha...bas agar yeh thodi deer baad aathe tho shayad mein uss insaan ka chera dekh lethi....(first waking me from me dream and shouting...if he woke me after sometime i would hav seen his face...)
M:what???may i know what u are doing here that too at 7:30 when all went home???
G:i am sorry sir but i wanted to know that can i leave but u were not here...so i was waiting for u to come...
M:ok...now get of my office...
went immediately towards the door of the cabin...
M:wait...
G:(turning)yes sir...
M:how will u go???
G:(shocked seeing his concern..)by taxi...
M:u go and wait down...i will drop u...
G:what????(shocked)
M:didnt u hear me???
G:yes sir...but y???(barely audible)
M:what did u say???
G:nothing sir...
M:ok...u wait i wil come...
sying so he went towards the door and locked it securly and said her to go to parking and wait...
she like a good student obeyed him and went down...
after 5 minutes maan came and sat in the driver seat...
geet went and sat in the back seat...
M:i am not ur driver...come and sit here..(showing the passengers seat...)
G:sorry sir but i cant sit...
M:i cant keep on listening to ur excuses...come front...
G:(hesitating)...
slowly opening the door...she went and sat inside...
after that the drive started...geet talking to herself...
G:hey babaji mujhe isse bachana...jab mein keh rahi hun ki mujhe yahan nahi baithna tha tho zabardasti mujhi yahi bithaya...par sabse pehle woh mujhe aapne sang kyun lekar jaa rahe hai???aur yeh dekho chale the hi jaa rahe hai...kya inhe rasta pata hai???haan pata tho hoga...3 saal se delhi mein jo hai...3 saall...par meinu ki karna...bas lift de rahe hai...ghar uttar kar thank u bol dunge...aur haan aapne chapar chapar par aab inke saamne full stop...aur mujhe gahr puhchne tak aapne aap ko cantrol karna padaga...control control...
(god please save me from him...when i said i dont want to sit front means cant he understand???and see...now he is keeping on going...does he know the way...ya its obvious to know the way when living for 3 years...but why should i bother...he is giving lift...i will just say thank u after getting down...i will stop my chattering in front of him...i must only control now till i reach home...)
saying so she closed her eyes and started taking deep breaths little slowly without letting him know what she is doing...in some time her home came...she got down and said thank u and ran off inside without waiting for reply...
END OF PART 10...
PRECAP:GEET'S TALK WITH RANO...
HOPING TO HEAR FROM U...
IF U HAV ANY DOUBTS FEEL FREE TO ASK...
FOR PMS PLEASE BUDDY ME...
LOADS OF LOVE AG❤️


Edited by kingofme - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
welcome back..

nice part...

y is maan behaving like this..??

continue soon...

thnx for PM..

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