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and maan ke bare mein baad mein likhungi...abhi thodi aur geet ke hi bare mein hoga...
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Originally posted by: music_girl

awesome one

lol did maan hear her chatterings?

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Originally posted by: misty_drastifan

wonderful update
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THANK U ALL FOR THE LOVE SHOWERED ON PART 10...
PART 11 IS ON THE WAY...HOPING TO RECIEVE THE SAME LOVE TOO...
I HAV REPLIED TO ALL THE COMMENTS...THANK U ALL FOR THE LOVELY COMMENTS...
FOR PMS PLEASE BUDDY ME...
PART 11 ON THE WAY...
LOADS OF LOVE AG❤️


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JUST 20 MINUTES MORE
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Part 11:
Geet rushed home and first thing she did was that she threw up'.after sometime she freshed and came out'she had her dinner little because empty stomach she cant sleep'.after dinner she called her mother and said all the happenings at the KS'she even said the behavior of maan as she wont hide anything from her mother'(this is the convosertation of rano with geet about maan's behavior')
G:maa mein aapo ek bohut shocking baat batau???(shall I say one shocking news???)
R:haan bata'(yes)
G:kya aapko pata hai ki mein jis company mein kaam kar rahi hun who company kis ki hai???(do u know in whose company am I working??)
R:haan maan ki hai(yes in maan's company..)
G:kya???par aapko kaise pata??(what???but how do u know??)
R:wo'.wo'.haan mujhe tumhare papaji ne bataya'.(that'.that'yes ur father told me..)
G:aacha'par unko kaise pata???(ok'.but how did he know???)
R:aab mujhe kya pata'.tu unse hi puch na'(what do I know'u ask him..)
G:(still unconvinced)aacha'(ok)aapko ek baat batau..(shall I tell u one thing??)
R:haan(yes)
G:yeh jo yahan maan hai na who bohut badala badala hai'bohut aajeeb hai'ekdum khadoos'(this maan has changed completely'he is totally khadoos')
R:arre geet aise nahi bolthe..(u should not say like this..)
G:haan haan pata hai'respect se baat karo'bade hai'aap aapna yeh lecture phir se mat suru kar dena'maine isse bohut dafa suna hai aur mujhe yeh yaad bhi ho gaya hai'(yes yes'I kow'he is elder..talk with respect..now don't start ur lecture again'I hav heard it so many this that I hav byhearted it..)
R:aacha badmash..(you naughty..)
G:aacha maa mein aabhi rakthi hun'mujhe neendh aa rahi hai'agar kal subhe mein time par nahi pauchi tho who khadus'oops sorry srimaan maan singh khurana ji mujhe naukri se nikal denge'(ok now I will go and sleep'if I didn't reach the office on time means that khadoos'no sorry MR.MAAN SINGH KHURANA will remove me from the job')
R:aacha aapna khayal rakhna'good night..(ok take care'GN..)
G:GN'
Saying so she went to sleep'.next day too went like this'..maan being arrogant self and geet trying to understand y is his behavior like this'but everytime scolding her self for thinking about him'.
Like this 4 months had passed and the thing that happened good with geet was that she had adjusted in her new environment and her first project has been a huge success'..today was the day when geet had completed 4 months and she had made some new friends'the names are'SASHA(I know u don't like but this is necessary),KHUSHI(a lively girl working in her near cabin..),and MAANVI(works in the reception)'all her friends asked her treat'.
So to give them treat she called all to COFFEE DAY as it was Sunday'.all reached there except geet'.here geet was getting ready'.after getting ready she went in the car which her father sent with a driver after 5 days of job'
On the way near the signal there was heavy traffic'the signal was red'geet's car was waiting there'she got her boss's call'
G:good morning sir'
M:hmm'where r u know???
G:y sir..
M:just answer for what is asked'
G:I am going to caf'
M:ok'.tomorrow u must come early'
G:y sir'
M:I have to assign u a new project'
G:ok sir'.
The signal was green and her car started moving'.as the caf was near highway they started going towards highway'.geet had forgot to cut the call'..while going suddenly a truck emerged from no where and hit her car and went'.
In 2 minutes the car was somewhere and somewhere was geet'.as soon as this sound went to maan's hears he rushed to the highway'..on reaching there he found many people standing in a circle'.dreading the worst thing he went towards the crowd'..
The thing which he feared the most happened'there he saw HER lying lifeless surrounded by a pool of blood''maan rushed to her'.
M:geet uttho'uttho geet'someone please help'
Two men came and helped to pick geet and placed her in maan's car'.
Without wasting a single second maan rushed to the hospital'the whole way doing futile attempts to wake her'.
After reaching the hospital maan shouted for the doctor'.they came and made her lie down on the stretcher'the whole way whenthey were dragging her to th OT maan was catching her hand'.before going to OT'
M:geet tum mujhe chood ke nahi jaa sakthi'..u are mine'I LOVE U'aur tumhe mujhse koi alag nahi kar saktha'.(u cant leave me and go'u are mine..I LOVE U'no one can separate us')
After this maan left geet and the doctor took her inside OT'
END OF PART 11'
PRECAP'.:KEEP ON THINKING'
I AM READY TO RECEIVE ALL UR SCOLDINGS TOO'
HOPING TO HEAR FROM U...
IF U HAV ANY DOUBTS FEEL FREE TO ASK...
FOR PMS PLEASE BUDDY ME...
LOADS OF LOVE AG❤️
Edited by kingofme - 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: dona86

nice update..

loved it..

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Posted: 13 years ago
omg maan luv's her wow
bt dis accidnt oh babaji
nyc update

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