MG OS 'I can't give U anything,but Love'

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hello Guys.. This is my first attempt to write on our heavenly couple maneet.. First of all this is dedicated to my dear friends who wished me on my b'day... especially Jo, Namratha,Frankie,sruthi,sarah.. and to my favourite writers Muski, Ritzy di, Annie,Piya.

"I can't give you anything, but Love"

Geet was sitting near window listening to her second favourite music ' music of rain.. So, you must b thinking about her most favourite one' Its her love's voice and his songs.. Maan'
Geet handa was always insanely and irrevocably in love with maan from college days. Maan was a rockstar singer where as geet was a shy girl who admired him secretly. She was aware that maan didn't know her mere existence, but she was happy with her love.
Yash, Geet's chaddy buddy knew her secret craziness and he was the one who informed maan's live updates. He always insisted her to make friendship with maan, but our innocent angel was too shy to take that step.
Day by day, her craziness grew, but she never found the courage to speak to him. Yash was getting more worried for her and after a lot, more dhamkis Geet agreed to meet maan to start a formal friendship on farewell day. The responsibility of arranging the party was given to Yash and Geet since they were juniors. After all the initial arrangements Yash told her to get ready for her most important day. Geet went back home and dressed in a beautiful red saree(Maan's favourite) looking gorgeous.
She was on way to college when her car crashed into a lorry. That accident took her priceless possession, Eyes, which helped her to admire maan, which reflect
her love'
After that incident, geet's parents took her to London for further treatment. But all went vain. None in India was aware of geet's loss, as she didn't want anyone's sympathy. Soon Yash too followed her to complete higher studies. He always asked her to contact maan, but she didn't had the courage to meet him.
Geet was lost in thoughts when Yash barged into her room.
Yash: Geet' I have a surprise for u..
Geet: Kya hua yash?etna chilla kyun rahe ho!
Yash: If I tell the news, then u will be the one who will be dancing and screaming.
Geet: Pls yash, Batao na kya baat hain?
Yash: Maan Singh Khurrana is coming to London for his next show and ur intelligent friend bought tickets for it..
Geet was shocked and she became numb. That means after 3 long years she is going to meet Maan. Numerous emotions were playing in her eyes. Yash understood her state and immediately hugged her.
Yash: Geet, I know what u are thinking.. But pls yaar..es maukhe ke ko haath se nikalne mat dena.. we can atleast talk to him..
Geet: No yash.. we have talked earlier also about this subject. Mein aise hi teek hoon..
Yash: But..
Geet: You promised me'
Yash sighed. He knows how stubborn she is. However, he was determined not to let go this chance. He saw geet lost in thoughts. So to divert her mind he said
Geet.. I have booked three tickets. If u want u can take meera with us'(yash's
secret love, Geet's friend)
Geet: aww..if I wants..ek kaam karthe hain..es baar hum sachin(neighbour's kid) ko lekar chalthe hain' He is so fond of music..
Yash gets shocked..
Nahi' I mean meera ko bura lagegi na.. You are her only friend'
Geet: Its ok yash..i will talk to her'.
Yash(screaming):Its not ok'I want her with us'
Geet grinned'he got embarrassed..
Geet: ab aayi na line pe.. chalo tum meera ko call karke batao..Tomorrow is the show,rt? Pick me at 6 pm'
Precap: Maan in London

A special thanks to Namratha for proof reading... Love u a lot...😃.

Waiting for your response..Pls like and comment.. 😃

Also Pls add 'Remyapms' in your buddylist for pms..

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Edited by Remya_Pillai - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congrats for ur 1st os.
Interesting story.
Loved it.
Continue soon.
Edited by SONU_29 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats on first os
interseting dear
continue soon

Edited by meena.. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting os
loved the concept
sad that geet lost her eyes
but i really want to read the next part to know maan's side
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow Remya tht was super cool
i dint know u were thinking of writing
but wow...awesome part

awww poor geet lost her eyes...yash is funny
n maan d rock star...

looking forward 2 d next part..update soon

n i hope u hd a gr8 bday 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oye hoye meri behna...What a dhansoo start!!!
(Of Course...mera naam jo tha waha 😆 )
Kya di...yeh aappke Thnk u's ka silsila kan khatm hoga???
First OS mein hi..Maan babu ko rockstar bana diya!
Haayye ab toh uski dhun pe naach sakte hai!! [:D/]

Farewell pe Geet ka accident!!! Yeh first part mein yeh sad element kyun daala?? 😡
(WaIse look who's talking... I better not talk abt sad elements!! 😆 )
Waiting for Maan's concert and their meet...ab Mr. ROCKSTAR ki entry ke liye waiting ...waiting...then hogi unki meeting meeting!!!

I hope ki yeh koi sad OS nhi hai!! :P

P .S : Waise kab bhaag rhi ho vacation pe di?? 😉
Edited by World-of-Dreams - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow wow wow di...
congrats for ur first os... and all the best too...
aww thanks for dedication... hugs to u.. 🤗
coming to the update...
awesome start di.
par aapne kaha hi nahi ki u r writing... 😔
but anyways after reading part 1 i am so happy...
wow geet loves maan secretly but didnt dare to tell him..
in an accident she lost her eyes so sad...
wow maan in london. nice di... super excited..
yash loves meera and liked the convo between yash-geet..
hope maneet meet...
continue soon di...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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thnx 4 pm


i liked it


do continue
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Congrats for your 1st OS...

Loved it

Waiting for the next part

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