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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 3


Adi: Kya hua MK, any problem?

Nothing..Come lets go..

Meera was going gaga over maan's looks, but she forgot that our geet do not need any description to see her love.

Maan reached the stage and addressed the audience.

Hello London.. All set to enjoy'!!!

The crowd continued to cheer with his each set of words.

I know you all are desperately waiting for a fast number song. But today I want to sing a soft music which is close to my heart. This is dedicated to a special person and that person is with us now.

All the fans were looking at each other.

I know you all wanted to meet that special person and I will, only after the song. So, can we start?

This one for u dear. I wrote this thinking about you.

(Pls hear this song while reading)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mt9xg0mmt28&feature=player_embedded

Aa aa..aa aa'aa aa..aa aa.. aa..

Geet was shocked to hear his words. But at the same time she was confused about that "special person"! May be his love. The thought itself broke her heart to million pieces. Tears started to flow. Yash saw this but remained quite. But soon she composed herself as maan's happiness is important.

Na hai yeh pana
Na khona he hai
Tera na hona, jaane
Kuyn hona he hai

Tum Se Hi din hota hai
Surmayi shaam aati hai
Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi
Har ghadi saans aati hai
Zindagi kehlati hain
Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi

Na hai yeh pana
Na khona hi hai
Tera na hona, jaane
Kuyn hona hi hai

Geet remembered how she met him first. He was lost in singing a song with his guitar. She was mesmerized to hear his voice. She hid behind a tree when he walked out of the place. She was lost in his looks and his chocolate brown eyes attracted her. From that day she started to follow him and unknowingly fell in love.

Aa aa..aa aa'aa aa..aa aa.. aa..

Aankho mein aankhe teri
Bahoo mein Bahe teri
Mera na mujh mein kuch raha
Hua kya
Bathon mein bathein teri
Rathe saogathe meri
Kuyn tera sab yeh ho gaya
Hua kya
Mein kahin bhi jaata hun
Tum Se Hi mil jatha hun
Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi
Shor mein khamoshi hai
Thodi si behoshi hai
Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi

On one such day, geet saw maan heading towards a couple. They were sitting under a tree and crying. Their children abandoned them. He took them to orphanage where he was staying ( Maan is an orphan. He lost his parents in an accident and the relatives refused to accept him). From that day onwards he made the couple smile by entertaining with songs.

Aa aa aa aa aa aa'

Aadha sa vaada kabhi
Aadhe se zyada kabhi
Jee chahe karlu is tarah
Wafa ka
Chode na chute kabhi
Tode na toote kabhi
Jo daaga tum se jud gaya
Wafa ka
Mein tera sarmaya hun
Jo bhi mein ban paya hun
Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi
Raaste mil jate hai
Manzile mil jati hai
Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi

Geet was again lost in her past. Yash always books front seat when there is a show of maan. When she gets his first glimpse, she gets lost in him and his voice.

Na hai yeh pana
Na khona he hai
Tera na hona, jaane
Kuyn hona he hai

Aa aa aa aa aa aa '


Scroll down for the next part...


Edited by Remya_Pillai - 13 years ago
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The loud sound of applause brought geet back to reality. She felt alive after years hearing his voice so near. The host of the show came forward.

Wow!that was so beautiful… ! Seems like that someone is so special. We are very eager to see the person, I mean that special girl..

Ya. She is so special. I saw her during final year of my college. I was going to perform a show for our college. When the curtain rose, I met a pair of beautiful hazel eyes. She was looking like an angel in a white salwar and I was singing completely lost in her. I did not realize when the show ended. From that day my eyes started to search for her and I was overjoyed to see her in every show of mine. Her eyes were always my inspiration and that spark tells me how well I performed. One day I saw her hugging a boy,smiling and cracking jokes. I was broken. But when I saw her happiness I felt happy. Later I came to know that the boy was her childhood friend. Feeling contented I decided to start a friendship. But I didn't get a chance as she was busy with farewell preparations. So I decided to meet her on farewell day. But she never came. From college records I got her address and went to meet but the house was locked. No one knew her whereabouts. I was completely devastated. I was not able to search her because of my financial conditions. Her inspirational eyes came to my mind and I worked hard to become a well-known singer. When I became one, I started to search her again.

One day I got an invitation from London arts club and there was a picture of her in the background of their ad. I immediately phoned them but they did not give any satisfied answer. I accepted the invitation because my heart said that this time I would surely meet her. I know she is here. I can feel her presence. She is my inspiration, my life, my passion, my song, my Geet. I don't know what you feels for me, but I have always loved you. If u don't love me then its ok… but atleast once I want o see you.. Pls geet..pls..

Geet was stunned to hear his love for her. Her heart jumped in joy. Tears were continuously flowing from her eyes. Her maan always loved her. unknowingly her legs started to go towards that beautiful voice when the reality hit her.


Thanx for the wonderful comments you all showered. Waiting for the same for this part too. Sorry for the mistakes. Next part will be the last part.

Edited by Remya_Pillai - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome wanna read more u stop at the main point
Edited by payalpari - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
super update..
so even maan loved her but wat will she do now
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome rem
waiting for the last part dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
I read all three parts in one go ..Awesome Updates Loved them ..So Maan to love her.Let see what will be geet next step ..
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Posted: 13 years ago
this was so beautiful update . song is one of my fav , u beautifully described the emotions through song . continue soon .
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Posted: 13 years ago
so touching and fantastic update... such a sweet love story... cant wait for the next part..
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Posted: 13 years ago

awesome part di...

so maan was also in love with geet for a long time...
wah kya baat hai??
so lovely..
hope geet would not take any wrong decision of leaving him this time...

update soon di...
i will be waiting

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Posted: 13 years ago
oh such a sweet update.maan loved her before.maan will surely shocked when she tells him that she lost her power of eyes which she used for drooling him.love u remya for mindblowing update .just awesome

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