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maansee

@maansee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

👏 ... nice start dear

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mysteriousmilli

@mysteriousmilli

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#82

lovely start...
me waiting for Gundi coming😳😉
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Acharya10

@Acharya10

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Posted: 13 years ago

#83

great part,... loves anisha, but always with maneet

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swetha10

@swetha10

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#84

Awesome update..

hmmm anisha n maan..

wow cant wait for geet's entry..

awww maan's so excited..

continue soon

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deepali1022

@deepali1022

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#85

awesum... ...d story is simply great...n...

clear in every aspect...

u had done really a...

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muskaan_cute19

@muskaan_cute19

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#86

Hey ashy baby🤗

Finally I got to read something by U n m really happpiii this simply made my day. I really loved the way it started with such a cute couple (rather not Maaneet😡) but I really like the girl but I am sure if she so sweet geet has to be something opposite to overshadow her.

Her simplicity was something that anyone could fall for that serene beauty. His heart was stuck on something distracting his motive, the beguilement was so strong that he couldn't just focus. His mind was just yearning to meet that someone special way special that loosing didn't matter at this stage. His heart was at content even his victory slipped out of his hands. Even that exquisiteness couldn't deviate his attention from that persona. He was just so lost in it that nothing bothered, no one mattered. Only SHE lingered through his every brain cell as well as nerve, he was happy with her return. He didn't act less than a toddler when he/she receives a toy after a particular punishment. Living without her seems the same to him, her comeback just filled him with enthusiasm n anxiety. With that lady we come to know there is lot more to be unfolded may be much more than we desire. Knowing more about her seems the only task of his life. He could have reached to any heights to just know about her whereabouts. Her return was not less than a gift but the news senior citizen disclosed was just most gratified moment filled with felicity. His emotions elated, his eyes waited, his heart contented, he could hear those jubilant chimes for her return already, he now no longer knew how to kill the time till she comes back to HIM...

I liked her name GUNDI I am sure she will fulfill this role too waiting for her entrance eagerly loving her friends too my gulabjamun is as sweet as in real life and the guy too...

DO continue soon

Thanks for the pm

Love YOu tc

P.s I'm really hoping U like my comment writing after such a long time😳

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akanshya

@kingofme

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#87

lovely start...

thanks for the pm...

cont soon...

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-bansi-

@-bansi-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#88

Wow..this waz awesome..

Cnt wait for maan n geet to meet up..

Bt hey..anisha n maan together?? :-o

Loved d first part olready..

Do cont soon

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#89

hero has come.. waiting for gundi now..

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Remya

@Remya_Pillai

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#90

Loved the part a lot..
Maan s all excited to meet geet...
i think geet s still angry with her parents for sending her away..
and she s going to stay with maan and daadi...
but i didn't like the fact that maan loves anisha...
kya karu..ye dil maanthe hi nahi...

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