SOUND OF MUSIC-UPDATED PT 07 PG 26

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love2_soma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

wow...dono taraf aag badabad lagi...dekhte hai kaun iss ehsaas ko mante hai...abb ayega maaja...maan danced with geet...ardhanarishwara...oohiii...sooo dreamy...

its better geet knw abt maan's past...

awesome n wonderful update...

loved it...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

n thank u very much fr d lovely update n also fr d pm...

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maaneetmaahi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

amazing update dear...loved it...
maaneet danced together...that was awesome

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-Gemini-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#83

lovely update 😊

may be after knowing Maan's past Geet might help him to fight back.

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Infinity.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#84

Awesome... Superb update...a!
loved it so much
well written...
Intresting precap...geet knw maan's past
eagerly waiting for next update
continue soon
thanq for pm

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mysteriousmilli

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Posted: 13 years ago

#85

loved the update dear...
waiting to know the next...

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Deepa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#86

part 4
a sweet one dear...
cont soon...

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aarthi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#87

finally read all the four parts and loved it to the core.. OMG tat was really awesome and bo sambho is ma fav song..

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Tyro

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Posted: 13 years ago

#88

amazing...

he cant c her ignoring him...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

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janani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#89

shiv tandav sequence was grt...

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maaneet0887

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Posted: 13 years ago

#90

I THINK U GUYS DIDN'T LIKE MY STORY...SO AM TRYING TO CLOSE IT IN SHORT SS...😊

PART 05

Geet was feeling shy when she left Maan and ran from there feeling extremely shy.Maan saw around him and was shocked to see the anklets on his legs.Maan remembered some of the glimpse of his past running towards his room.Maan opened the drawer from his bedside table and saw a girl smiling at her peacefully.Maan saw her false smile which she gave to him for which he left everything singing,dancing,composing everything and became the slave of alcohol.

Geet on the other hand was breathing heavily feeling his fingers on her body which held her possessively...his scent which drives her crazy...and his behaviour makes her admire so much.But Geet hadn't seen his other side...the anger side for which she was unaware.Geet stood in the centre of her room clutching her chest which was throbbing and her chest moved unevenly.

Geet thought,"Babaji yeh kaisa ehsaas hai jo mujhe unse jude rehneka ek aur mouka dethi hai...kyun mein unke bagay jee nahin sakthi...kyun unki khushboo mujhe achchi lagthi hai...kyun mein chain se saas le sakthi hoon unki khushboo mein...kyun unki maujoodgi mehsoos hoti hai...kyun mein unki baahon sukoon mehsoos karthi hoon...kyun...kya mein galath kar rahi hoon babaji...kya mein apne lakshya se bhatak rahi hoon...kya mein maa ko diya huva waada thod rahi hoon...bataayiye na babaji...kyun...!!!!!"

On that time someone kept the hand on her shoulder and Geet turned to see who is it.It was Rajan Khurana and Geet wiped her tears immediately turning that side.Rajan noticed this and asked,"Yenu aayithu magu...yaattakke aluttideeya????"What happened child y r u crying???Geet said smiling,"Yenu illa sir...aadre neevu illi...students yella horathodra sir??????"Nothing sir but u here...!!!!!all the students went?????Rajan said smiling stroking her hairs,"Ninna kanneeranna nanninda muchidbeda puta...!!!!!!"Don't hide ur tears fm me child

Geet turned that side while Rajan asked,"Ninage aashcharya aagtha ide alva Maan hege ninna jothe maatra haage dance maadidru antha...!!!!!"U r amazed right that y Maan danced with u like that Geet saw Rajan curiously then Raj made her sit on the sofa in her room and said,"Geet...Maan..ee munche tumbaane geluvaagidda..aadre aa Samyukta bandmele avanige ee stithi banthu...!!!"Geet...Maan before this was so lively but after the entry of samyukta he came to this state

Geet asked,"Sir pls bidisi heli yenu vishaya antha Sir pls tell me clearly that what is the matter...!!!!!

Rajan nodded and started telling,"Geet...ninge gottu naavu matte ninna thande ibbarigu ondu arts school thegibeku antha ishta ittu...adakke sariyaada finance kooda sikkittu..aadre adella Maan taayi goskara kharachu aag hoyitu...aadre Maan na determination na munde idella chikkadu anisthaa ittu...avanu B.Arch maadidru kooda nanna ondu aase pooraisbeku antha avanu tanna ella dreams annu bitta...matte olle dancer aada...adu allade avanige yella tarahada instruments kooda hege upayogisuvudu antha nu kooda gottittu...avanu kale ya jagattinalli beroori nintha...idu kelavarige eershye unto maadithu...adakke avananna hegaadaru maadi kelakke ilisa beku antha avana virodhi galu maadida sanchu idu...idyaavadu kooda avanige kinchittu kooda gottilla...aagle ne ee Samyukta bandiddu...Maan ge yaavattu hodageer mele ashtu moha annuvudu iralilla aadru kooda Samyukta na nodida maru kshana avanu aake ne tanna hendathi antha sveekarisi bitta...!!!!!!"

Geet u do know that me and ur father wanted to open an arts school...and for that we hd the sufficient finance also...but it was spent off becoz of Maan's mother's health...but in front of Maan's determination i was thinking that it was small...he did B.Arch then also..to fulfill my one wish he gave up his dreams...he became a gud dancer and he also knew to play all type of musical instruments...he stood firmly in the world of arts...but some people didn't like his success...they were feling jealousy towards Maan becoz of his success...that's y to make him come downwards at any cost they played an conspiracy with him.He didn't even know abt this conspiracy...then only this Samyukta entered his life...Maan never the guys who run behind the girls but when he saw Samyukta then he decided that she's his wife next second

Geet remembered how Maan was mumbling in his sleep that pleading Samyukta not to leave him.Geet's heart cried when she remembered it.Then Rajan's father explained further abt Samyukta.Rajan now switched over to Hindi from Kannada.Rajan said,"Mujhe woh ladki bilkul bhi pasand nahin aayi aur usen mere bete ke banaayi huyi saare tunes chori karke leke chali gayi mere bete ko aisi haalath mein chodkar...!!!!!!!!"

Here Maan saw the frame and a lone tear escaped from his eyes and he was abt to drink the alcohol from the bottle on that time that he saw Geet standing near doorway.Maan hid his alcohol immediately seeing her then Geet said,"Bade ek baat kehthe hai...jab bhi koi kaam karna hai toh khulle aam karni chaahiye aise chip chip ke karne se insan ki value kam ho jaathi hai aur dosre uski credit leke chale jaathe hai...!!!!!!!"Maan felt there was a sarcasm in her tone for which he didn't understand.

Geet entered inside while Maan hid the photo from her and kept it inside the drawer immediately.Maan asked sternly,"Tum yahan kyun aayi ho...!!!!!!"Geet asked directly seeing his eyes,"Mujhe woh taandav aapse seekhna hai...kya aap mujhe sikhaadenge...?????"Maan saw her sternly and said,"Mujhe kuch bhi nahin aati...tum behtar hai papa se seekho...woh bahut achchi teacher hai...!!!!!"Geet said stubbornly,"Nahin mujhe sirf aapse hi seekhna hai...!!!!"

And she tied the anklets to her legs while Maan saw her with amazement.She prayed to god first and said,"Ab aap sikhaayiye mujhe...!!!!"And she winked to Maan's friend Adi fm whom he always shared his thoughts.Adi had seen their taandav which he had danced perfectly and had seen Maan feeling comfortable.Maan turned that side refusing her.Geet smirked seeing his refusal first but still she danced.

Geet for the first time did a wrong step and Maan saw this immediately as he was having the sharp eyes.Maan was silent and now she did the wrong step once again.Maan got angry now seeing her but still he turned that side.Then Geet still did the wrong step then his anger went into it's peak and said angrily stopping her,"Kyun galath move kar rahi ho...tum logon ko yeh taandav sirf ek khelthi huyi cheez dikthi hai kya????Taandav keliye apne aapko man se ready jo ki tum nahin kar sakthi toh behtar hai tum sirf normal dance seekho...!!!!!!"

Geet answered him rudely,"Jab koi shishya apne guru se pooche ki yeh sikaaye toh woh guru ko bahut khush hote hai ki woh pooch raha hain usse aur woh bhi poori interest se...agar aapko karni nahin aati toh aap saaf saaf kyun nahin ekhthe ki aapko kuch bhi nahin aati...sahi kehthe hai aap...aap waste body hai...sirf waise body jo din raat nashe mein doobe rehthe hai...aap toh sirf apne hi dhun mein rahenge...aur jab koi aapko obey na kare toh aa jaathe hai dikhaane ke liye ki aap kya cheez hai...aur woh bin bulaaye mehmaan ki tarah...!!!!!"

Geet went towards the door but Maan pulled her immediately and angrily and said,"Mujhe kuch bhi nahin aati...mujhe kuch bhi nahin aati...mein tumhe dikhaata hoon ki mujhe kya aati hai...!!!!!!!"And he showed the taandav dance to her.Geet was so happy that her eyes welled up seeing Maan dance in front of her.A smile crept on her petal like lips.Maan saw this and thought it is a smirk to taunt him and his anger went into it's peak.

Maan asked pulling her towards him and seeing the smile on her face,"Yeh muskuraahat kiske liye...yahi chaahthi hona ki mein waste body banjaavoon...mein nahin banoongi...aur tumhe is baat ki sazaa zaroor milegi...!!!!!!!"Maan dragged Geet to the courtyard and tied her forcefully on the sun and said angrily,"Jab tum ye dhoop mein rahogi toh tumhaari hosh thikaane par aajaayenge...!!!!!!"Maan went and sat in the shade enjoying her expressions.

Geet tried to open her eyes but the sun shine on her face.Geet made a puppy face to Maan for Maan melted immediately but turned that side angrily.Geet was resisting the sun but something bit on her feet.Geet saw it was the red ant which was biting her feet.Geet saw around her and was shocked becoz the ant hill was their behind the tree.

Geet was feeling irritation and pain when numerous red ants bit her feet.geet was trying to scratch the red ants bite but more were coming and more were biting her feet.Geet said with pain,"Maan sir pls...mujhe yahan se chodiye...mujhe irritation ho rahi hai...!!!!!"Maan didn't listen to her and sat drinking the alcohol peacefully but her painful voice made his existence shook.But he shrugged off his thought and sipped his alcohol peacefully.

Geet pleaded couldn't resisting the irritation and pain which was formed becoz of the biting of the red ants.Her feet was swelling and it had turned red.Adi who was passing saw this and was shocked and said,"Maan,chodo Geet ko usse bahut dard ho raha hai...she's bitten by red ants...!!!!!!"On that time Geet couldn't tolerate this and she shouted and fainted.

Note-Guys...aapko yeh ff achchi nahin lagi toh saaf saaf bo, deejiye ki achchi nahin lagi...mujhe bahut dard hoti hai..jab aap log comments nahin dethe...pls give me straight answer that should i cont this ff or not...plss guys...agar isse mujhe achche comments nahin mile then am gonna stop this ff right away...😭

Precap-Geet is scared of Maan becoz of his rude behaviour and Maan is feeling guilty...

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Edited by geetsrir.maan - 13 years ago

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